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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sanskar enters a room and there is a man that has his back towards him. That man is wearing a brown sherwani and he is fixing his hair in the mirror. Sanskar smiles and says "Accha lag raha ab bichare aaeney ko thodi pursat do laksh"
Laksh laughs and turns around. "bhai I know hum maheshwari ladke bhaut gud looking hai lekin fir bhi koi chance nahi chudna chahata"
Both brothers have a laugh. Then parineeti comes with a thal. She says "sanskar bhaiya aap abhi taiyaar nahi hua"
Laksh says "han aap jao aur bhabhi is taal mein Kya hai"
She smiles and says "yeh tanth hai. Saajae ke waqt is khandhan ka har ladka yeh kanth pehenta hai. Yeh pehenane ka haq maa ka hai lekin iss baar yeh subagya mujhe mil raha."
She opens the box and reveals an antique kanth. Sanskar says "Accha acha ab mein ready hone jata hon."
Sanskar leaves the room

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Swara enters the house and dadi stops her "Swara". She stops and looks innocently at dadi. She gots her hands behind her and stands like a child that just got caught. "Ji dadi"
Dadi frowns and puts her hand on her head and starts walking towards Swara. "Kaha thi Mari ladoo. Teri behen ki sagae hai do ganto mein hai aur tu jogging karne gae thi."
Swara gives her a reassuring smile and says "meri pyaari dadi. Aap tension maat lo mein ragini ko ek paari baana dongi."
Dadi replies "mujhe ragini ki chinta nahi hai. Mujhe teri chinta hai. Ladke walo ke samhe ek jali banke jaegi "
Swara giggles and says "ladke wale ragini ko dekhne wale hai mujhe nahi. Aur agar laksh ki nazar ragini se door gae na tu mein usse wahi maar dongi. Aur aap mujhe maaro usse pehle mein jaati hon"
With that she ran away. Swara stops when she reached a door. She opened it and saw ragini almost dressed. Ragini looked tense and when she sees Swara she takes a relaxed breath. Then says "Swara acha hua tum agae. Mujhe help Karo patta nahi Kya peheno keyse peheno."
Swara sighs and says "ragini mein hona. Chal tujhe tiyaar karte hai"
Swara dresses ragini, helps her wear the jewelry, and does her hair/makeup. While Swara was doing ragini's hair, ragini noticed that Swara was a little off. Ragini asks "Kya hua mood kyun off hai?"
Swara replies "woh ek kadoos ladka mila tha"
Ragini teases "kadoos ladka?"
Swara "I mean kitna self centered tha. I hope khabhi usse molakat naa ho... Anyways ab mein tayaar hone jati hon."

Scene change...
Sanskar finished buttoning up the last button on his blue sherwani. He looks at his jogging clothes that were lying on his bed and thinks of Swara. Then he comes out of his thoughts and goes out of his room.
Scene change...
Swara comes out of her bathroom all ready for her sister's sagae. Then she goes out of her room outside to help with the arrangements.
A while later the guests start arriving. Dida comes to Swara and says "sworo ladke wale a gae"
Swara gets excited and squeals. "Sach"
She runs outside to the gate with a taal which she gives to Sharmista. Sharmista does laksh's aarti. Everyone looks on with a smile. Dadi looks at laksh's family and asks "Durga prashad Ji, aap to keh rahe the ke apka ek aur beta sagae mein Abe wala tha. Woh Kya hai na Woh dulhe ka bhai hai toh socha ek baar molakat Hojao". Durga prashad smiles and says "Ji Woh hai humara sanskar aya hai, sirf gadi park karne Gaya hai." After everyone goes inside, Swara is left alone. Her eyes fall on a piece of decoration that was hanging loose and about to fall. She thought "mein isse thik Karti hon"
She sees a stool. She places that stool and stands on it.

Sanskar coming inside the badi while jingling his car keys and sees a girl on a stool. He sees that the stool doesn't have a good balance and goes near her. He then sees that girl loosing her balance and runs there to save her from falling.

He catches her in his arms and a smirk finds its way on his face. Swara wrapped her arms around his neck and closed her eyes shut. She then hears a familiar voice "tumhe meri bahon mein rehna bhaut ziyada pasand hai"

Ps Swara is wearing a pink lehenga and ragini is wearing a Orange lehenga
Edited by LoveSana - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Plz ignore spelling. Wrote this on my phone
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
awww...
cute daadi poti scene...
how it come true in near future of serial...
ohhh...
Sanskar ne kay diagolue bolo he end me...
Wah wah...👏
Enjoyed reading it...
par ek doubt hai???
Sanskar bada beta hai na toh by default yuske sadhi phele honi chaiye na,toh lakshya kasse phele????😕
Edited by JIDHNYASA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Wow 😳 Lovely update 😳 Waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww!!!! Superb update...😃
Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Aww... That was so cute!! 😳
A great update
Swara in Sanskar's arms 😳😊
And I loved Sanskar when he said, 'Tumhe meri baaho me rehna bohot zyada pasand hai?"
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
amazing story :))) keep it up dear :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Wow..really a lovely update😊
U write very well.. Absolutely superb 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
nice update dear...beautifully written
seems like dadi too wants swasan😉
love the fall n catch scene n then sanskaar's dialogue...naughty guy😉
loved it continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am so amazed. Just 2 chapters and over 1700 views...

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