Do dil ek dhadkan PART 6- December

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plot...

Sharmista and shekar have been blessed with twins. Swaragini...
The ff starts with laksh coming to see ragini. In this story, sanskar lives with maheswari khandan. Kavita was never part of sanskar's life. While ragini and laksh get engaged. Meanwhile sanskar and Swara come close.

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Part 2: page 3
Part 3: page 4
Part 4: page 5

Part 5: page 7
Part 6: page 8
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice plot 😊
Do continue... ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Nice concept
I would love to read further
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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In front of the tulsi there was a girl. She was wearing a shalwar kameez. Her wet hair was framing her fair face. Her hands folded in front of her as she chanted a mantra.
Then someone called from inside "ragini". Her eyes snapped open as she looked towards the door. She smiled and replied "Ji mama"
She gathered her thali and went through that door. She walked towards sharmista and took her blessings. Sharmista smiled and put her hand on ragini's head and said "hamesha khush ragini".
Just then dadi comes And smiles. "Accha hua keh tu pooja khatam karke agae. Ja ladoo swara ko utha."
Ragini laughs and says" Swara. Woh toh shoba hi jogging pe chali gae."
Dadi frowns a little, "bilkul jali hai woh. Jitni jaldi jogging ke liye ut thi hai agar usme pooja karleti toh."
" dadi app bhi jaanti hai ke uske dil mein bhagwan ke liye kitni izzat hai"
"Thik hai tu kar uski wakalat. Mujhe uski chinta hai, tera rishta maheshwari khandhan se judne wala hai lekin meri swara."
Sharmista "hain ma. Meri ragini ko toh uske sapno ka rajkumar mil gaya lekin pata nahi Swara."
Ragini blushes and then responds" maa humari swara ke liye hum ek rajkumar hi laengay."
Scene change...
There is a man jogging. His muscles bulging through his shirt as he moves. Sweat glistening on his forehead.
Another scene change...
Dadda Ji comes and smiles. " bendini abhi tak tu kya kar rahi hai. chal dersara kam hai."
Ragini interfers "dadda mein kya madat Karon"
Dida enters and says "kuch kam nahi karegi tu. sonlo tum sab... Aaj meri ragoo se koi kam nahi karaega. Woh dulhan hai."
Dadi laughs "arrey hai bengalan. Lekin Tu kaha chaligae thi. Teri nati ki sajae hai aur ab a rahi hai Tu "
Dida cracks up again " arrey mein to agae lekin sworo kaha hai"
Scene change...
There is a girl jogging with her headphones in. She smiles as she passes a balloon man. She admires the world as she jogs. Her camera angle changes. That man jogging from previous scene comes again. As she is lost in her own world she bumps into that man. She closes her eyes as she is falling. Except she doesnt fall on her ground. The man is holding onto her waist to stop her from falling. She opens her baby brown eyes slowly to be greeted by a pair of angry eyes. She steadies herself and gives him a innocent smile and says "sorry". She was about to walk away when that man pulled her arm to see her face. He pulled her headphones out of her ears. "What the hell. Dekh ke nahi chal salty."
She gets shocked "excuse me. Meine sorry kaha hai na. Aur tum hote kaun ho mujse ese baat karne ke liye"
He smirks and says "u know what just forget it. Tum agar dosro ko dekhne mein busy nahi hoti toh tumhara Diyan kahi aur nahi Hoya."
With that he moves around her and starts jogging again leaving her is a state of shock. Then her phones rings. She reads the number and smiles. She answers "chill ragini mein bad baadi se 5 minutes door hon."
She hears laughter of the other side of phone and ragini says "jaldi ao Swara."

Scene change...
That man enters a big lavish house and starts whistling. Just as he comes down the stairs a women says "sanskar".
Sanskar smiles and touches her feet and says "gud morning baadi maa"
"Good morning sanskar. Yeh kya abhi tak tu jogging kar raha tha. Ja meine teri sherwani tere room mein rakhi hai."
"Woh saab baAd mein. Pehle mein laksh si milke ata hon."
Anupura says "lekin sanskar aaj laksh ki sajae hai. Jaldi taeyar Hojao."
Sanskar smiles and puts his arm around her"aaj uski saajae hai isiliye toh. Bye badi maa."
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Nice start...
Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
sana nice start I just like it sanskar angry man 😆 update next part asap plz 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Nice start dear
Khadoos guy n bubbly girl😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Beautiful 👏 😳 I love this 😳 Continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super plot
Super update.👍🏼
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
woww awesome
conitnue soon
😊 😛 😛 😊

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