SwaSan TS: Always meant to be!... last chap on pg 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Wonderfully penned down. It artfully depicts that how much potential this pairing has. Loved it. Plz update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Ohhh wow...
Loved it...
Swara know how sanskar will react in a certin situation...
How sweet of her😳
bechare...
dono ek dusre ko bohut miss kar rahe hai...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Nice start😊 pls continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Wow amazing start...👏
Waiting for the confession...😳
Loved it...Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Niki...awesome start👏

Poor swasan...feeling bad for them😭
Swara called himbut their stupid talk...come to the pint guys...ma papa thik hai like really swara...what about sanskaar😡
They both r dhakkans🤣
Waiting for the confession😉
Aur ji yeh koi poochne ki baat hai...u should continue
Loved it n continue soon😊


Thank you so much Sonal 😳
And your comment cracked me up 🤣 You are absolutely right... They both are dhakkans 😆 and they needs to be given a dose of common sense by someone 🤣
Anyway, jokes apart, I tried to portray their hurt and confused states of mind... and after reading your comment, I think that I succeded 😊
Thanks Sonal
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Sugarbabe14

It was really awsum
I loved it very much after sidyali I am loving swasan too
It was perfect
Plz update soon and do PM me


Hey, thanks
Sure I will PM you when I update
By the way, who are Sidyali?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Saraa.

This is mind blowing

Please please continue.


Thanks Saraa 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: zoya6

Loved it! Its amazing 👏
Plz do continue soon!


Thank you
Sure I will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: RamnVij

Very wonderfully written. I hope too, that this is the way the story will move. I expect that Lakshya would want Swara back in his life, after Ragini's truth comes out, but hopefully the CVs show that Swara and Sanskaar's partnership/alliance has already moved on to friendship and then to love.

Somehow it seemed to me that Lakshya's and Swara's love, though true, was a little immature. Probably immature is a harsh word, I mean rather that it seemed like a fairy tale "first love", without a solid backing of understanding and faith. Once Sanskaar and Swara become each other's support system through this difficult time, I somehow can't see how the CV's can avoid showing them as soulmates. A lasting love and bond requires trust and understanding, after all.


Hey,
Firstly thanks for such a wonderful comment 😊It feels nice to know that someone actually took time to review the efforts of your work thoroughly... Thanks for that😳
And I agree with you, the trust and understanding that Swara and Sanskar are sharing in the show now, and I am sure it will increase with time, was lacking in Swara and Lakshya's relationship.
You might have heard that the relations which form in tough times are more stronger... And I can see the SwaSan bond is the kind... I just hope that the CVs also think the same way
Because after whatever happened, I really don't want to see Swara back with Lakshya now
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: kaku17

Awesome. .u so beautifully brought out the emotions. ..Ioved it...n plz update soon. .


Thank you 😊

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