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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww lovely start dear update was soo nice waitng for next updates
😊 😊 😊 😊




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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Such a beautiful update ! 👏
Loved the Shekhar and Samistha nok jhok and Swara taking her father 's side and Ragini taking her mothers side 😳
And then Swara and Ragini convo . Happy that Swara moved on .
Continue soon , really excited for the next part .
Love
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaanu

I am new to the forum. I actually I read all post but never comment.


I thought of writing an ff and it will be on Swarya. I am a Swarya fan from the beginning of the show and will continue to be. If you guys are interested please comment.

One more thing I am writing an ff for first time so don't expect it to be an awesome one but will definitely try my best.

Story - Pg 1

Part 1 - Pg 3

Awesome work! I added a link to the FF in the SwarYa DT (hope that's okay). And please let me know if you want me to change put a name in for the FF. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Good start
Do continue
Hifi I'm a swarya fan too!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2



Location: On the way to home



After college both the sisters are going back on swara's scooty. Swara applies sudden break on seeing something.



Ragini: Tumne scooty kyurok diya?



Swara: Deeko na. Ek naya ice cream parlour kula hai. Hum vaha chalet hai.



Ragini: Swara, nahi late ho jayege or fir maa se mar kane padege.



Swara: Aare baba vo sab mein manage kar lugi. Tu chal na.



Now Ragini was in a fix. If she would go maa is definitely going to shout at them for being late and if not her lovely sister is going to be angry with her for a whole day.Swara pleaded again in her most sweetest voice.



Swara: please, please, preety please. Chal na yaar.



And that was it. Any one would fall seeing the puppy face she made. After all she is expert in making others do something she wants. Swara asks Ragini to go in while she parked the scooty.



Ragini goes in and occupies a place for Swara and herself. Some group of boys were sitting next to their place. Seeing Ragini alone they start teasing her.



Boy 1: Akele ho kya? Hum company doon?



Boy 2: Mufft mein nahi, hum paise denge.



Just then Swara comes in. Hearing this her blood boils. She can bare anything but if it is something that hurt her family she would go to any extend.



Swara: Baiya, aap apne company kisi aur ko jaake dejiye. Filhal isse uski zaroorat nahi hai.



The boys gets up from their table and one of them proceeds towards Swara giving her dangourous looks.



Boy 3: Hey ladki, tum jaanti nahi hum log koon hai.



Swara is not a bit scared cause she knew she had to be strong for her sister.

Any trouble that Ragini has to face should first face her.



Swara: Appne bilkul sahi kaha. Mein nahi jaanti ki aap koon ho aur mein jaana bhi nahi chahti. Ab jaldi meri behen se sorry bolo. Problem yahi sort out ho jayega.



The guy gets hold of Swara's hand. She tries to release herself but he tightens the hold.



Boy 3: Aur agar nahi bola toh?



By now many people have gathered around. Ragini asks for help but no one is even bothering. Swara is screaming and shouting at the boy and finally bites his wirst. He screams in pain and let go of her hand. Another guy from the gang comes and raises his hand to slap her.



Swara closes her eyes and turns away. But a strong arm stops the guy. She opens her eyes slowly and is shocked to see the person in front of her. It can't be him. The same person who hurt her sister, the one who is responsible for them to leave their badi were they had spent their childhood, he is the one and only reason for the insult and pain her parents had to go through. This was the only face she didn't want to see in the past 2 years, the face of - Laksh Maheswari.



Laksh caught hold of the guy's corler and gave him one right across his face.



Laksh: Agli baar aasi harkat karne se pahle yeh tapad yaad rakna.



Laksh straighted the boy's corler, taped on his back and turned around to see whether the girl was fine but was shocked to see Swara.



Laksh: Swara, tum...



She dosent wait to hear what he was saying.



Swara: Ragini, chalo yaha se.



Ragini: Par Swara...



She was not in a state to hear anything. She dashed out of there and Ragini ran behind her.



Puff that's the second part. Comment both good and bad welcome. But pls do comment and let me know how was it.
Edited by asyaanu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good pls update fast can't wait !!! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...they r meeting after 2 years
the plot gets interesting...
waiting to see, what would happen next
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update dear swaragini bonding is awesome 😛 😛
waitng for some swarya moments😉 😉 😉
update soon 😊 😊 😊




Edited by anju10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So the story has mysterious turn.. it will be interesting to see how Swara and Laksh fall for each other 😉 Can't wait for next part do update sooN!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

Location: Swaragini Home

They reached their home. Ragini rings the calling bell waiting for her maa to open the door. She knew that as soon as the door opens maa is going to welcome them with a shower of question. Swara is expert in cooling her anger in minutes by tactfully handling the situation. But she knew that's not going to happen today as Swara herself is in the verge of explosion. Her bubbly sister who always has a heart melting smile on her face was gloomy today. She knew that today she had to handle it all herself. The door opens and Sharmista is all set to start her interrogation.

Sharmista: Sade sath baaj rahe hai. Kaha the tum doono?

Ragini: Maa, mein bathati hoon na. Wo Swara ki scooty puncher ho gayi thi aur aas-paas koi workshop bhi nahi tha. Fir gadi thik karre ke liye hamare ek dosth ke sath milkar gadi workshop puhunchaya. Uske baad jaake gadi thik hui. Issi liye late..

Seeing their docile daughter - who barely speaks, talking without even stopping to take breath Sharmista and Shekar were astound.

Sharmista: Beta, tum thik ho na.

Ragini: Haa maa mein thik hoon.

But Shekar noticed that when Ragini was talking too much today Swara was unusually silent.

Shekar: Swara, tumhe kya hua. Kuch bol kyu nahi rahe ho?

Swara didn't wait to reply. She ran upstairs. Shekar and Sharmista called her but she did not stop.Sharmista turn towards Ragini

Sharmista: Ragini, vo aise kyu chali gayi. Hua kya hai.

Shekar: Bolo na beta. Swara thik hai na.

Ragini: Vo.. maa kuch bhi toh nahi.
Sharmista: Kuch bhi nahi matlab. Kuch toh hua hai. Bathao kya bath hai?

Ragini: Maa aap bhi na. Hum dono mein behes hui aur ab vo mujse gussa hai, aur kuch nahi.

Shekar: Hum usse bath karthe hai.

Ragini: Baba, usski koyi zaroorath nahi hai. Yeh behnoo ke beech ki mamla hai, hume kud isse suljane dijiye na. App do no fikar mat kijiye vo jyada dher humane naraz nahi reh sakthe.

Sharmista: Thik hai.

Shekar: Lekin agar vo nahi mani toh hum usse bath karege.

Ragini: Thik hai. Par iss bath ko lekar pareeshan math hona. Hum isse jald hi suljalege.

She quickly hugged both of them wishing them good night and then went upstairs to see whether Swara was fine.

Swara was sitting on on her bed. The room was dark except for a lamp lit on the side table near the bed. Ragini enters the room switching on the lights. She goes and sits beside Swara and gently strokes her head.

Ragini: Swara, gussa hone ke liye kuch bhi tho nahi hua.

Swara: Kuch bhi nahi hua matlab?
Do saal baad vo Laksh fir se hamare samne aa gaya aur tum keh rahe ho ki kuch nahi hua. Uss ke papa ne maa aur baba ko sab ke samne zaleel kiya jiske vajah se haame badi chodna pada aur ussne tumhara dil dukaya. Fir bhi tum yhese kaise keh sakthi ho?

Ragini: Swara, pehli baath ussne jaan buj ke hamare dil nahi dukaya. Usse shayad yeah bhi nahi patha tha ki hum usse pyar karthe the. Vo tho humne hi bina kuch soche samje yeah maan beti ke vo humse pyaar karthe hai.
Aur jo bhi usske papa ne kiya ussme usski kya galthi hai.

Swara: Ragini, tumhe kya lagtha hai vo vedio usske papa ko koyi yese hi bheja hoga. Vo tho laksh ne hi bheja hai taki shadi toot jaye.

Ragini: Toh iss mein kya galat hai? Agar ussne yesa nahi kiya hota tho issse hum doono kush nahi rehthe.

Swara: Par yeah baath vo seedha kehte toh vahi baath katham ho jathe.

Ragini: Haan par yeah bhi ho saktha hai ke yese karne ke piche usske koyi majburi Raja ho.

Swara: Ragini, tum...

Ragini: Swara, jab hum ne usse maaf kar diya hai tho tum kyu nahi kar sakthi? Pehle tum appne maan se usske baare mein jo bhi bure khayl he vo nikal do. Fir usse maaf karna assan ho jayega.
Ab gussa chodo aur aapni pyari si smile do.

Swara smiles and both of them share a sisterly hug.
Swara: Vese tumne jut bolna kab sikha?

Ragini: Kya karoo jab rehte hi ek nautaki ke saath hai toh asar toh padega hi.

Both of them share a hearty laughter and retired for the day.

Sorry guys for the late update. But plz do read and give sugession to make it better.


Edited by asyaanu - 10 years ago

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