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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz plz update soon...
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tnk u guys for ur comments. I really appropriate it. I will definitely update within two days.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As promised even before time here is the first update.

Part 1

Location: Swaragini's Home

It was a Monday morning. Just like any home this home too was buzzing with the morning chorus. Shekar was at the breakfast table waiting for the breakfast to be served all set to go for his work. As Sharmista comes with food he asks her

Shekar: Swara aur Ragini kaha hain?

Sharmista: Ragini toh kitchen mein meri madath kar rahi hain par use badmaash ka toh patha nahi.

Just then Ragini comes from the kitchen listening to their conversation.

Ragini: Baba, Swara ko mein ne uttaya tha par patha nahi vo ab tak kyun nahi aayi.

Sharmista: Usse thayar hone mein toh kam se kam ek ghanta chahiye. Patha nahi shaadi ke baad usska kya hoga.

Shekar: Ab yeh shaadi ke bath kaha se aa gayi. Vo tho abhi bachi hain.

Sharmista: Aap hi ne use bigaad diya hain.

Ragini was secretly smiling hearing her parent's nok-jok. This wasn't new. In fact without this small fights their mornings were incomplete. If something had changed it was that now she is her maa's daughter and Swara was papa ki chamchi. She had always felt something void in her life. After her mother's death she felt so empty. But now her Sharmista maa has filled that emptiness.

Suddenly someone came downstairs. The light of the house.

Sharmista: Lo aa gayi.

Shekar: Misty, subhah subhah suru math hona.

Sharmista: Arre main kaha...

Swara: Offo maa baas bhi karo muje bohoth buk lag rahi hai. Kana do na. Chalo Ragini thumb hi bheto.

Both of them sat down, Swara beside Shekar and Ragini with Sharmista. Swara askes Shekar about the reason for their today fight.

Shekar: Tut oh janthi hain. Ladai tho hamesha teri maa suru karti hai.

Swara: Ye bath toh sahi hain.

Sharmista: Acha.., Ragini tum kaho kya mein ne suru kiya tha?

Ragini: Ji bilkul nahi.

Shekar: Tho vo shaadi wali bath toh tumne kahi ti na.

Swara: Konse shaadi?

Sharmista: Tho isme kya galath hain? Swara ko shaadi ke baad apni sausural ka jimedhari tho uttana padega na.

Swara: Maa muje abhi shaadi nahi karni. Vese bhi mein apne pyari behena ke baad hi shaadi karungi. Ragini, chalo na bohoth deer ho rahi hain. Bye baba, bye maa.

Ragini: Hum chante hain.

Sharmista: Teek hain beta.

Shekar: Shambhal ke jaana.

Both of them smiled at their children. They were proud parents of two brave daughter who fought against the society for their parents.

Shekar: Vese tumhe nahi lagtha aaj kuch zyada ho gayi.

Sharmista: Janta hoon Shekar par muje Swara ki badi fikra hain. Patha nahi vo apne sasural mein kese...

Shekar: Misty.. mantha hain ki vo thoda baadmash hain par sath hi vo samajdar bhi hain. Tum fikra math karo.Main chaltha hoon.

He kissed her on her forehead and bid due.

Location:College

Swara and Ragini reached their college. Though their had different likes but music was something the liked commonly. That is why their parents got them the admission in the best music academy in the city.

Swara: Tum se ek bath puchni thi.

Ragini: Pucho na Swara.

Swara: Vo, kyat hum ab bhi Lasksya se...

Ragini: Nahi Swara. Lakshya hamara athith hain jise hum bul chuke hai. Haan yeh bath sach hain ki hum use pyar karthe the, lekin shayad vo hamari kismet mein hi nahi the.

Swara:Tum sach mein mein bohoth samajdhar hain. Tum use bhi acha ladka deserve karti hain.Ab class ke liye chalthe hain varna late ho jayege.

Ragini: haan

So how was it? Please comment and let me know


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaanu

As promised even before time here is the first update.

Part 1

Location: Swaragini's Home

It was a Monday morning. Just like any home this home too was buzzing with the morning chorus. Shekar was at the breakfast table waiting for the breakfast to be served all set to go for his work. As Sharmista comes with food he asks her

Shekar: Swara aur Ragini kaha hain?

Sharmista: Ragini toh kitchen mein meri madath kar rahi hain par use badmaash ka toh patha nahi.

Just then Ragini comes from the kitchen listening to their conversation.

Ragini: Baba, Swara ko mein ne uttaya tha par patha nahi vo ab tak kyun nahi aayi.

Sharmista: Usse thayar hone mein toh kam se kam ek ghanta chahiye. Patha nahi shaadi ke baad usska kya hoga.

Shekar: Ab yeh shaadi ke bath kaha se aa gayi. Vo tho abhi bachi hain.

Sharmista: Aap hi ne use bigaad diya hain.

Ragini was secretly smiling hearing her parent's nok-jok. This wasn't new. In fact without this small fights their mornings were incomplete. If something had changed it was that now she is her maa's daughter and Swara was papa ki chamchi. She had always felt something void in her life. After her mother's death she felt so empty. But now her Sharmista maa has filled that emptiness.

Suddenly someone came downstairs. The light of the house.

Sharmista: Lo aa gayi.

Shekar: Misty, subhah subhah suru math hona.

Sharmista: Arre main kaha...

Swara: Offo maa baas bhi karo muje bohoth buk lag rahi hai. Kana do na. Chalo Ragini thumb hi bheto.

Both of them sat down, Swara beside Shekar and Ragini with Sharmista. Swara askes Shekar about the reason for their today fight.

Shekar: Tut oh janthi hain. Ladai tho hamesha teri maa suru karti hai.

Swara: Ye bath toh sahi hain.

Sharmista: Acha.., Ragini tum kaho kya mein ne suru kiya tha?

Ragini: Ji bilkul nahi.

Shekar: Tho vo shaadi wali bath toh tumne kahi ti na.

Swara: Konse shaadi?

Sharmista: Tho isme kya galath hain? Swara ko shaadi ke baad apni sausural ka jimedhari tho uttana padega na.

Swara: Maa muje abhi shaadi nahi karni. Vese bhi mein apne pyari behena ke baad hi shaadi karungi. Ragini, chalo na bohoth deer ho rahi hain. Bye baba, bye maa.

Ragini: Hum chante hain.

Sharmista: Teek hain beta.

Shekar: Shambhal ke jaana.

Both of them smiled at their children. They were proud parents of two brave daughter who fought against the society for their parents.

Shekar: Vese tumhe nahi lagtha aaj kuch zyada ho gayi.

Sharmista: Janta hoon Shekar par muje Swara ki badi fikra hain. Patha nahi vo apne sasural mein kese...

Shekar: Misty.. mantha hain ki vo thoda baadmash hain par sath hi vo samajdar bhi hain. Tum fikra math karo.Main chaltha hoon.

He kissed her on her forehead and bid due.

Location:College

Swara and Ragini reached their college. Though their had different likes but music was something the liked commonly. That is why their parents got them the admission in the best music academy in the city.

Swara: Tum se ek bath puchni thi.

Ragini: Pucho na Swara.

Swara: Vo, kyat hum ab bhi Lasksya se...

Ragini: Nahi Swara. Lakshya hamara athith hain jise hum bul chuke hai. Haan yeh bath sach hain ki hum use pyar karthe the, lekin shayad vo hamari kismet mein hi nahi the.

Swara:Tum sach mein mein bohoth samajdhar hain. Tum use bhi acha ladka deserve karti hain.Ab class ke liye chalthe hain varna late ho jayege.

Ragini: haan

So how was it? Please comment and let me know


Loved it pls upload part 2
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awesum update...
loved it...
awww shekhar n mishti fight like kids..šŸ˜†
lvng dis family...
hope to see dis in d show..

do update soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
So sweet!! Loved it.. update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
awesome it was a perfect part par ek question hai next part kab milayga.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

It was really good! cant wait to read the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
wow...
thank u so much for writing FF on swarya
i am loving this so much
beautiful update
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
so sweet!!! cant wait for part 2

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