NAIRAN FF (chap.7 pg5)

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To say frankly, I love this lovely couple Naina and Karan.


So, now both are married but he can't accept her because he can't accept someone presence in his life.


She decides to win his heart and family.


I hope you will love this FF.



Chapter 1 : First day in in-law's.


Her first day in her in-law's starts the next morning. She wakes up from the sofa and sees her husband sleeping. So she goes to the bathroom. She takes her bath and gets ready in saree. She comes outside with wet hair. She comes in front of the mirror and puts some make up. She gets the sin door but remembers sadly her wedding when he untied the knot. But she puts the sindoor on her maang. He opens his eyes and sees her and silently in the bathroom. But in seconds he comes outside and yells.


Karan : How dare you to use my bathroom? There are water on the ground and some hair.


Naina : Woh main... I am sorry I will clean just give me some minutes.


Karan : Stop don't.


He left the bathroom and come with a maid. She starts to clean.


It took thirty minutes to do everything.


Nirmala knocks and asks Naina to come in kitchen when she is ready. She nods.


Naina leaves her room for the kitchen and takes blessings from elders.


Sandhya : Where is Meghna?


Nirmala : She will come Sandhya.


Sandhya : So it's the first day in your husband's house. You have to prepare kheer in one hour.


Naina feels anxious, it's normal because she never cook in her life.


Meghna joins her.


Sandhya : So now you can start.


Nirmala and Sandhya leave from here.

They start the cooking but Meghna thinks to ruin her dish to make them understand. Naina takes the help from internet to achieve her kheer.


They put the dishes on the dinning table. Everyone comes and seats.


Nirmala : Before we taste the food your husband will eat and tell us.


Karan takes himself the kheer and also Kunal.


Kunal eats even if it's nasty. But Karan likes it.


Nirmala : So tell us.


Kunal looking at his wife : Amazing.


Meghna : really?


Kunal nods.


Karan : It's good.


Naina smiles.


Nirmala stands up and give some jewels to her bahus.


Khyati wants to taste Meghna's food but Kunal takes the entire bowl to eat.


Sandhya : What rubbish? Kunal and us.


Kunal : Sorry but it's so delicious.


Everyone praises Naina.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great first chapter! Really want to read on so update quickly!
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Amazing chapter, continue soon.😊
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Well written post 👏
Naina sleeping on sofa 😭
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Good start...looking forward to more.
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Chapter 2 : Naina's efforts.


They come to their room.


Naina is trying the bracelets that Nirmala gives to her.


Karan sitting in the bed : Not be so happy. Go to your mother's house because I can't accept you as a wife. We don't love each other. I permet you to leave the house before it's late.


Naina : I understand but now we are married we have accept this wedding. I will put all the efforts to adjust you but you have to be with me at least not break me.


Karan stands : But why you have to stay here? Hey, look go to your house, I will send you the divorce papers in a week.


Naina : I will not leave my house. You give me a week so I will answer you that before the end of the week you will change your mind.


Karan : Not even if in your dreams.


Naina : Challenge?


She tends her hand. But he moves away.


Karan : Accepted. And yeah you can't sleep in my sofa you have to sleep in the ground, I am sorry I can't ask every day to the maid to clean the sofa.


Naina : Sure.


She leaves the house and goes to dadaji.


Dadaji : Come sit and taste the tea with me.


She nods.


Dadaji : Naina I know you was not ready for the wedding but we can't change the facts so tell what is your cursus?


Naina : I finish my engineer curses actually but doesn't apply for a work while my didi will work ne the big company.


Dadaji : But Naina you have to have your own identity. Mera Karan has some problems with hygienics but he is nice. He studies not so much. But you are a topper and I don't wish to ruin your study.


Naina has tears : I am very thankful but my first duty is to win my husband hurt after I will surely have a career. But now I need to know more about my husband.


Dadaji : He has skin sensitivity but it's start after his school days. Before that he was very joyful and playful but now his entire life is between its wretched. I just understand that he loves music and some instruments.


Naina : Thank you dadaji.


Naina walks away thinking about dadaji words but its not totally clear.


She is going to speak with Nirmala.


Nirmala : Come beta, I am just checking some stuffs.


Naina : Aunty ji...


Nirmala interrupts her : Not aunty ji but maa please.


Naina : Sure maa, I want to kow more about my husband. I mean he is so reserved.


Nirmala : Karan is not like everyone, he has his own world. He is very particular, he can't touch someone but you know only for me he came for his bhai's wedding. Before that he was in Ashramam.


Naina : So he doesn't live with you in this time all this time.


Nirmala : No beta he can't.


Nirmala has tears. Naina hugs her.


Naina : Don't worry he will never leave you it's my promise so you I will do everything to make him ease.


Nirmala : Thank you beta. Now come with me we will prepare for the lunch.


Everyone come together for the lunch.


Dadaji in the sofa with Kunal. Karan alone in corner of the table.


They ate the lunch. Kunal and NK leave for the office with Sandhya.


Naina come to her room.


Karan was playing some music.


Naina : Wow, it's sound good.


Karan : Really?


Naina : Haan, you are good composer.

She sits beside him and his compilation. suddenly he realize her presence.


Karan : You can't sit here.


He is stressed.


Naina stands up : Ok calm down. I will sit in bed but I need your computer.


Karan gives his computer to her.


Naina : I will give you back.


Karan : No, and more I can't use that after you. Keep this with you.


Naina thinks it's my first gift by you.


Naina : Thank you.


She starts her research. Actually it's for Karan's job. She finds something who can work for Karan. She will discuss with dadaji and Nirmala.


She leaves the room. She comes to dadaji rest room and find also Nirmala here.


Naina : Maa and dadaji I find a work for Karan, I sure it's for him.


Nirmala : First calm down and tell us.


Naina sits : I remark that he loves to compose different style of music. So, he can become sound engineer. I know he doesn't leave his room so he can compose from his bedroom.


Dadaji : Actually, it's a good idea. Nirmala we can contact a producer with some music of Karan.


Nirmala : But I don't think that Karan will accept it.


Naina holds her hand : Maa, I know you are afraid but it's good for him, only you can make him understand.


Dadaji : Before to speak to him you will present his work that he recorded but how?


Naina : I has his computer and find some stuffs of him. I will put in USB key.


Dadaji : Ok beta, Karan is very lucky to have you.


She smiles.


She goes to her room.


Someone hear their conversation , it's none other than Khyati. She smiles wickedly.

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Chapter 3 : Improvement


Naina puts his composition on USB key's.


She gives the key to Dadaji.


Naina goes to do some household tasks.


In the dinner, Karan receives a call. He is shocked. He ends the call.


Karan stands up and comes near Naina.


Naina : Kya waa?


Karan : Why you did this to me?


Naina : I don't understand.


Karan : Really?


He calls back the caller.


Karan : Sir, sorry can you repeat you sentences?


Caller : Hello, I am producer I receive your composition and I think it's amazing. I want your participation in my albums. If you are interest you can call me back.


Karan : Ok, bye.


Naina sees Nirmala who are surprised.


Dadaji : It's excellent now you can do your passion as a work.


Karan : Never, how you can do that to me? You steal my composition and give this to a producer before telling me. Naina you are a cheater. Why you did this? To get rich without my knowledge. You are like everyone who can do anything for money.


Naina in tears : No Karan, I just want to help you. Issliye I send some of your stuffs to a producer, but I don't understand why the producer call you. I didn't give your phone number to him. Hai naa maa?


Nirmala : Yes Karan, calm down. She did it for you.


Karan : No maa she did it only for money. Haan Naina for some money you will go with someone...


Meghna : Stop it dewar ji. My sister is not like that. And if she wants money, in a second she can find a job. Don't speak about her character, it will not be good.


Naina runs to her room. Dadaji slaps Karan.


Dadaji : Shame on you Karan, you didn't understand her intention. The entire day she thought about you. She asked my permission and I gave to her. She just wanted to help you. You can't see her value. She is only one who think about you while your father in only interested about reputation and your brother about his wife.


Khyati feels bad in some way.


Khyati comes to her dadaji : I am sorry dadaji it's me who give Karan's bhaiyya number to the producer.


Dadaji : Don't say sorry to me. She got insults because both of you.


Khyati : Naina was...


Dadaji : She is not your friend but your bhabhi.


Khyati : She disturbed bhaiyya so I did that.


Dadaji : Khyati you will not understand her heart.


Khyati understands her fault.


Dadaji : I hope Karan, you will accept this offer at least for me.


He leaves from here.


Khyati goes to Karan's room.


She knocks but response.


She enters and sees Naina's crying on the corner.


Khyati sits beside her : I am sorry, please don't cry. It's me who send Karan's bhaiyya number to the producer.


Naina : I just wanted to help your brother but what I get in returns it's his insults on my character. You know Khyati, I did some bad things to your brother but when I decide to marry him. I take all vows to become his wife even if I know he has some problems. Now you are my family, I don't want to be your bhabhi but your friend.


Khyati hugs her.


Khyati : Naina, I mean bhabhi will you be my friend?

Naina : Sure.


Khyati : Thank you. Please forgive bhaiyya also.


Naina : No, I can't now go to your room.


Khyati leaves. Naina continues to cry. Karan listens all the discussion.


Karan enters in room. Naina goes to bathroom in tears. She changes herself and leads on the sofa. Someone knocks, it's Meghna.


Meghna : Drink this milk and stop crying.


Naina refuses, Meghna leaves.


Some hours after, Karan hears some noise. He switches the lamp.


He comes near Naina. She sobs in her sleep.


He tries to touch her but can't.


Karan : Naina...


Naina in sleep : Maa..


Karan hesitantly touches her head, she has fever.


He holds her and make sleep in couch. He covers her with blanket.


He remembered, when he was young his mother took some water and put in his head. And rubbed his feet palm.


He goes to the kitchen and boils some water. He takes a napkin and come to his room.


He wets the napkin and places on the head. After slowly he takes her feet and rubs it.


In 5 am, he sleeps on the chair beside her.


In morning, Naina wakes up but has headache. She sees the napkin on her head and her foot.


Karan opens his eyes.


Karan : How are you feeling now?


Naina stays silent.


She stands up and goes to the bathroom.


She prepares herself in red saree. Then she comes outside and sits in front of the mirror. She tries to brush her hair but can't.


Naina feels tired. Karan sees everything and comes near her. He takes the hair brush.


She stands up and turns herself.


Naina : Why you are approaching a bitch? Be careful, I can sleep with someone in front of you.


Karan is shocked : Naina mere baat suno.


Naina : No you can't speak with s**t.


She walks toward him.


Naina : Karan can you do a favor to me? Arrange someone I have to sleep with him because I'm in need of sex. He can give the amount that he wants.


Karan shouts : Naina stop it. Ok I am sorry, I was frustrated when I said that.


Naina : No Karan, I understood that our shaadi was forced but when I sat up in mandaap beside you. I accepted all the seven vows that I gave even if I didn't know you. I accepted you because you are a gentleman I saw that when you repaired the machine without our knowledge. It's true that I did this shaadi for my family but I knew that one day you will be my husband.


Karan : I am not sociable, I can't be a man simply so how I will become your husband?


Naina : Because if you are agree, we will work together. I will help you not has wife or partner but has friend. So Mr Karan Chauhan will you become my friend?


Karan : Okay and sorry for yesterday.


Naina : I can forgive you in one condition.


Karan : What condition?


Naina : You have to work with the producer just once please?


Karan : But I will not leave my room.


Naina : Yes it's not a problem.


She is about to hug him but remind his disease.


Karan in his mind : Thank you and I will keep you happy



To upload the next chapter I ask the readers to give me at least 10 comments please.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just love it amazing dear keep writing I also writes os on sukor so i know comments will gives motivation 🤢
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The story gets better each time! Awesome work! Continue soon :)
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