Yuvreen: TS : Meri Aashiqi Ab Tum Hi Ho (Last Part @ pg 4) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta6767

nice update di👍🏼. But please jo last part hai usme suvi nhi honi chahiye warna mera dil tut jayega💔 be'coz i love yuvreen❤️


Thanks a lot shweta 😊
Glad you liked it
Dw dear even i love yuvreen me apne fans ka dil nahi todungi 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvreen14

awesome...😛 update soon 😆😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: minu_G

Wow awesome di👏
loved it
hated Rc Suvi scene😡
poor Yuvi feeling bad for him😭
and last part, its scary.
excited for next part


Thanks a lot minu 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank You everyone 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya i am back again with the next part
First of all Thanks a lot every one for giving such a wonderful feedback
And Sorry for making you wait and leaving the part at a cliff
So finally the suspense is over and now without any more bak bak here comes the next part.


Yuvreen: Meri Aashiqi Ab tum Hi Ho

Part Two

Suvreen came forward and hugged the lil prince

S: badmaash mene kaha tha akele kahi mat jaana this is a new place for you Yuvi

Y: sorry friend I promise from now onward your yuvi will never leave you alone

She hugged her tightly. (in mind) " yeh promise to mere yuvraj ne bhi mujse kiya tha lekin nibha nahi paaya. Bina baataye chala gaya meri zindagi se"

Y: friend aap ro rahi ho. Aapko aapke yuvraaj ki yaad aagai

S: nahi aisa kuch nahi hai bas wo aankh me kuch chala gaya tha

Y: na aap us yuvraaj se juth bol paate the aur na aap is yuvi se juth bol paate ho

S: acha bahut badi badi baatein karne lage ho

R: ab agar tum dono ka ho gaya ho to hum restaurant chale meri biwi Ira waha mera wait kar rahi hai use mene lunch date promise ki hai

Y: and you forgot aaj to aap mom se bahut maar khaane waale ho dad

S: oye aisa nahi bolte. Rc aap jaaiye Ira mam waise bhi bahut gusse me hai isisliye to yaha bhi nahi aayi. Is badmaash ko me sambhaal lungi

R: theek hai but usse pehle I need to talk to you tumhe kuch batana hai

S: ha boliye?

R: suvreen me abhi kisi se mila

S: kisse?

Y: oooiii

S: kya hua?

Y: su su abhi jaana hai warna nikal jaayegi

S: yeh ladka bhi na. Rc aap lunch kar aaiye hum uske baad baat karenge me ise le jaati hu

R: theek hai

Suvreen goes with lil yuvi and here Yuvraj comes to his cabin very angrily, his mom was waiting for him there

Y: maaa me pallavi se shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hu aap unhe haaa keh dijiye aur yeh bhi bata dena ki muje aaj hi engagement karni hai

M: kya sach...

Y: haaa. Yeh engagement aaj hi hogi aaj shaam ko hotel me ek business party hai usi party me sab ke saamne

M: theek hai me abhi phone karke aati hu

She left and yuvi sat down on his chair remembering all the moment he spent with his topper," yeh tune theek nahi kiya topper tuje muje itna bada dhoka nahi dena chaiye tha. I hate you I hate you Suvreen Guggal"

Here suvi was sitting near the poolside with lil yuvi

Y: friend yuvraj kaisa dikhta tha

S: kya? Tum aaj achanak yeh sab kyu puch rahe ho

Y: bas yuhi jab se mom dad ne aapki love story sunaai tab se puchna chahta tha but I was afraid I am still a lil baby na

S: kya janna hai tumhe yuvraj ke baare me

Y: sab kuch

Suvi told him everything how they met in Nainital to how they separated that night when she choose Iris over him

Y: uske baad kya hua?

S: uske baad

(Flash back)

(The convo between rc and suvreen continues after yuvi left)

S: sir aap yeh... Aap...

R: kyu ki tum mera pehla pyaar ho suvreen me tumhe nahi bhula sakta

S:aur yuvraj mera me use nahi bhula sakti

R: to fir use chod kyu diya mere liye

S: nahi mene use nahi choda me use kabhi chod hi nahi sakti wo zindagi hai meri mene iris ko choose kiya because iris meri wajah se us problem me fasa tha so use us problem se muje hi to nikalna padega. I am sorry mene humesha se yuvraj se pyaar kiya tha and I ll aways love him

R: jaanta hu. Bas tumhare mu se sunna chahta hu. Ha aur Ira kahi nahi gai wo yahi hai hum shaadi kar rahe hai. Suvreen bahut kam log hote hai is duniya me jine unka pehla pyaar naseeb hota hai use kisi bhi reason se gawaana nahi chaiye jaao aur mana lo apne pyaar ko.

Suvreen left from there to meet yuvraj but it was too late he had already left Mumbai. Suvreen tried to contact everyone his friends family but all in vain. She went to Delhi in search of him and there from Rishab she got the news of Yuvi's father demise and also rishab informed her that after uncle's death yuvraj left the country and where he was no one has the idea.

(Flashback ends)

Y: friend kaha kho gai

S: kahi nahi

Y: fir kya hua

S: fir kuch nahi yuvraj ko mene bahut dhunda par wo nahi mila... and me akeli ho gai fir Rc sir and Ira mam I mean tumhare mom dad ne muje support kiya and muje apne saath paris le gaye waha humne humara ek business open kiya and fir do saal baad tum aaye humari life me usi din jis din yuvraj muje chod kar chala gaya tha

Y: isiliye aapne mera naam yuvi rakha

S: hmmm

Y: wo kaisa dikhta tha

She had yuvraj's pic in her clutch she showed yuvi their valentine pic

Y: I promise friend me tumhe chodkar kabhi nahi jaunga

Suvi hugged him and cried her heart out.

Evening: The party started lil yuvi was standing with resu holding their hands

Y: mom bhi yaha hoti to kitna acha hota dad aap mom ko kisi achi jagah lunch pe nahi le jaa sakte... Kaise place le gaye ki unka stomach upset ho gaya people here are very bad kaisa food cook karte hai

S: oye aisa nahi bolte and yaha ka khaana is very good wo ira mam ko paris ka rukha sukha khaane ki aadat ho gai hai so yaha ka masaaledaar khana hajam nahi hua

R: suvreen muje tumse bahut jaruri baat karni hai

S: haaa sir boliye na

R: suvreen is hotel ka maalik koi aur nahi balki...

Before he could complete the sentence the host started the announcements

" I welcome everyone here on Behalf of our CEO Mr Singh to this business cum engagement party. Yes engagement of our very own Mr Yuvraj Singh."

Yuvraj enters with her would to be fianc Pallavi suvreen saw them and her legs got frozen on ground she was unable to believe her eyes. Yuvi held pallavi's hand and they came on stage. Yuvi mom asked him to insert ring but before he could do that the ring fell from his hand and came rolling towards suvreen. He searched for the ring and finding it out came near her and took the ring in his hand and as he stood up his eyes met her.

Yuvreen shared an eyelock with lots of unspoken words between them.

Suvreen couldn't control her feelings more and started crying and left from there.yuvi was still standing there with a ring in his hand.

" aap bahut gande ho" said lil yuvi

Y: haa aap bahut gande ho aapne meri friend ko rula diya

Ys: friend wo to aapki mom hai na

Y: what meri mom no she is my frnd

Ys: lekin

R: yuvraj yuvi sahi keh raha hai

Ys: yuvi

R: haaa yuvi mera aur Ira ka beta aur iska naam yuvi tumhari topper ne rakha hai

Ys: meri Topper

R: haaa tumhari topper wo kisi aur ki to ho hi nahi sakti

Yuvraj ran outside behind her and saw suvi crying sitting near the fountain. He came towards her

Y: topper

She stood up wiping her tears

S: tum... Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho jao andar tumhari gf tumhara wait kar rahi hogi

Y: usike paas to aaya hu

S: kya matlab ????

Y: kyu kiya tune itne saal wait me to tuje chodkar chala gaya tha fir tune move on kyu nahi kiya

S: tumbhi to itne saal tak move on nahi kar paaye. Agar kar gaye hote to engagement aaj nahi hoti kab ki ho chuki hoti.

Y: tu bilkul nahi badly aaj bhi rote hue utni hi kaidi dikhti hai jitni tab lagti thi

S: tum bhi to nahi badle aaj bhi gusse me bina soche samje decision le lete ho. Jaise aaj liya engagement karne ka wo bhi bas ek pal me.

Y: tuje kaise pata ki yeh decision mene aaj liya...

S: wo aaj hotel ke saare customers ko sweets baate gaye the . Tumhari mom har kisi ke room me personally jaakar sab se apni khusiya baant rahi thi. Baato hi baato me unhone baataya ki yeh decision tumne aaj hi liya

Y: to tu maa se mil chuki.

S: hmmm par tab yeh nahi pata tha ki wo tumhari mom hai.

Y:topper

S: hmmm

Y: Iris ya me

S: Iris

Yuvraj was shocked he again got angry..." Aaj bhi teri life ki pehli priority Iris hai. Tu kabhi nahi badal sakti Suvreen Guggal"

He turned back and started walking

Suvreen shouted," Haaa yuvraj Singh me kabhi nahi badlungi meri life ki pehli priority tab bhi Iris thi aur ab bhi Iris hai pata hai kyu????? Kyun ki tum meri life ki priority nahi meri Life ho."

He turned around

S: Tum meri life tab bhi the and aaj bhi ho.

He smiled and she started singing

Meri baat me tera jikar sada

Merei yaad me teri fikar sada

Me jo bhi hu tum hi to ho

Muje tumse mili apni adaa

Helding her ears

Kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho

Meri Aashiqi ab tum hi ho.

He came forward wiping her tears

Tere liye hi jiya me

Khud ko jo yu de diya hai

Kissing her on forehead

Teri wafa ne mujko sambhala

Saare gamo ko dil se nikala

Inserting a ring in her finger

Tere saaath mera hai naseeb juda

Tuje paake adhura na raha

Hugging her

Kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi

Meri Aaashiqi ab tum hi ho

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Edited by krupaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Awleee kdi... kinnaa sona update tha... loved it... maza aa gaya.. YuvReen are inseparable They're the best!!! loved the TS kashu di bohot acha tha. 1000 out of 100. AMAZING!!!⭐️
Edited by McSteamy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
aye haye kdi...mast update tha...awesome...😉😳 awle ...yuvreen r the best..!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Awesom 👏. Super se bhut...uper hai. Mai to der gyi thi but thanku for u itna awesome update dene ke liye. I miss SuvreenGuggal 😭 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Amazing Part Krupaa
it was wonderful idea, so rc ira married little Yuvi is their son loved his bonding with Suvi so cute.. Yuvreen got together in end so sweet loved it.. SG CVs could of shown that scene too it would of been so good idiots they are
Do write more TS
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Loved it
Rc to acha insan nikla
Lekin agr ghuma phira ke baat na karta to misunderstandings na hoti
Ira ka stomach upset hahaha
You should continue writing...!!!!

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