Yuvreen SS- Ray of Hope (Last part and epilouge updated)

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sahashrabdi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Shivinian
ManJas ka famous Reswa.
Unres
sahas amazing tha. Kya point pe choda tune han? Double update dena tha na. Chal koi ni raat ko padhlungi naya wala.

thnk god unres kar di...warna daal chawal khilaana padta😛😆

Dhanyavaad sissy!Mast pont hai na...definitely lovers' point nahi tha😆...de diya...le le😉...thoda suspense bhar di...isliye double updt ek hi baar mein nhi di😛...padhle meri jaan...tere liye hi sab kuch kiya hai😆😉

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sahashrabdi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: JustMySelf
kya chotu edge mein ake rokh liya?hope no1 stabs suvi?update jaldi 😡🤣
very nice update..ur a pakka story teller nw 👏

Suspense my dear...SUSPENSE!!!!😆

Padhle update...karli hai maine😉...ohh dhanyavaad ji dhanyavaad!😃 par daadima types story teller nhi ok😛

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sahashrabdi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Wonderful Part Sahas
Yuvraj made his mind up finally, I reckon something bad is going to happen, the precap is very scary hope Suvi is ok
Will wait for ur update tomorrow

Thank you didu 🤗

I have updated again...you can read it😃

yaah read wen you have tym😊

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sahashrabdi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: krupaa
Wow once again a grt update 👏
Preacp is very scary
Hope yuvi reaches on time to save her wify

Thnx Krudi🤗

Yeah ri8...it was!

Read the next update...I have updated😃

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sahashrabdi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: SSimra
Awesome awesome
Loved it
Yay first to comment...!!!!!
Continue writing when you come back till then
GOOD BYE...!!!!!!

Thnx dear 🤗

You are a night-riser???😛 Or u live outside frm India?
I will complete before going...epilouge will be posted within some tym😃

gud bye dear tc...will be bck sun😊

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: SahasYuvreenian

Thank you didu 🤗
I have updated again...you can read it😃
yaah read wen you have tym😊

Welcome Sahas🤗

I read already my comment on PG13

thanks for updating 😃

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sahashrabdi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

EPILOUGE

~Present~

Suvreen keeps looking at sky when suddenly someone comes from her back and shouts-"Oh hello...Miss.Creativity...kahan khoyi hui ho?"

Suvreen smiled turning back at Yuvraj.

Suvreen got up and walked near to him.

"Aap agaye?"

Yuvraj-"Haan agaya...baby ko bahot miss kar raha tha"

Suvreen laughed and said-"Jo aaya hi nahi hai abhi se aap uske saath baatein karte hain"

Yuvraj-"Toh tum toh aur bhi lucky ho...khud jahan jaati ho baby ko apne sath lekar jaati ho."

Suvreen laughed again.Yuvraj came near her and kneeled down.He put his hand over Suvreen stomach which was a little bulged now.

He sad-"Baby tumne papa ko miss kiya...maine tumhe bahot miss kiya"

Suvreen nodded her head.She too lowered her eyes down and said-"Bolo pappa ko hum aaj kitne maze kiya...bilkul miss nahi kiya papa ko haina?"

Yuvraj-"Tum miss karo ya na karo...but I love you."

Suvreen's heart skipped a beat hearing those words but again they weren't for her.Yuvraj stood up and hugged Suvreen.

Yuvraj-"Thank you...mujhe ye khushi dene ke liye"

From within the dark clouds a streax of sunlight appeared which fell on Yuvreen.It wasn't fully perfect for Suvreen but still there was a RAY OF HOPE!'

--END--

Okay so that's it.Its the end.Hope you all like it! Thanks to everyone who liked and commented for this work and supported me a lot.This SS is my favourite and it became so because of you ppl.Thank you!

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Beauitful ending Sahas

Loved it

Very nicely written too

loved the title ray of hope it was wonderful

Do write more when ur back

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iiManAsiii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Sahas the story it touched me. It was amazing, marvelous piece of work. Dil chu gaya yaara. From the start till the end. It was just perfect with no mistakes, just like a pro writer. Completely fallen in love with this one. Sahas tujhe har roz likhne ki adat honi chahiye. Hume roz treat milega. Lovely intepretation. Thanks for such an amazing wrk.