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iiManAsiii

@iiManAsiii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Manish_Shetty

Chalo teekh hein...ab se No Th_-k Y-O and no S_-_y 😆😉

done dana done!!!😆

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Manish B Shetty

@Manish_Shetty

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Suno Suno Suno...😉

A Message for you my awesome readers...😃😃

Duniya walo suno...I have an important announcement to make regarding this Story. There is this observation I made, If I am not wrong this is the best response I have got for any Writing of mine. So thank ya people.

😳😃😊

Now coming to the point...In the intro I informed you guys that this would be kinda cliche...and yes it was planned to be so.

Actually, this story is completely inspired by my other work Lights, Camera, Action...though that was more broad in its approach.

If you closely note you can draw a lot of similarity with the Yuvreen track there...and in fact I wanted this short story to be an experiment of checking how well I can concentrate only on the theme of friendship...However, after such great response which I really did not expect I decided to re-read the Part 1 of this update and closely investigate...Then I realized this actually does not seem cliche, though I wanted it to be. I mean the plan was something like a perfect ending like in fairy tales, though in this there is this grey shade to it. It would then become a bit of boring surprise if the story suddenyl shifts from grey to all fair...

Thus I am taking this so called creative call...😆 This would no longer be cliche...It would be a very different tale with a lot of grey shades in the entire storyline. I infact also got an interesting twist and turn...

Note it would still remain an experiment because this would be the first ever time I am going to write a story that would fall under the following genres:

Romantic, Suspense, Grey, Cute, Emotional, and so on...

Please help me by continuing with your comments and feedback because it is really important...especially for this piece of work...I have like very big plans for this...so want to see these plans execute...so please...and ya you guys can do one more very important favor for me...That is to spread about this Short Story where ever possible...anywhere in the net...Please..not just with SGians but with all book and fiction lovers who would be glad to give me their feedback...and any silent readers out there please break your silence atleast for me..please please...please... 😳

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iiManAsiii

@iiManAsiii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

okayy will spread the word...

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sujairohit

@sujairohit

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Waiting eagerly for the update.

Will surely tell my friends.

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Manish B Shetty

@Manish_Shetty

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

@Manasi...Abhi aap ko ______ kehna mana hein...so no _______😛😆

@Sujairohit akka...Thank you... 😃

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sweetgirl29

@sweetgirl29

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Yo! Manish finally u r bck aftr so long with another bang on story. Jst luvd the concept yr. Mysterious, painful, and sad love story n dat too on yuvreen. Superb idea. I luv readng ur work. You write so well. When i read ur story i cn imagine evrythng before my eyes. Awesome writer you are! Will also tell others about ur work. Bt dis tym plz update soon...jldi jldi plz. Eagerly waiting fr nxt part. Infact i m also waiting fr dat ff- my friends fiance. Wat bout dat? Plz take dat story also forward. You told that u wl update that aftr 3 june or july maybe. Bt i think u forgot about that story.

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Manish B Shetty

@Manish_Shetty

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sweetgirl29
Yo! Manish finally u r bck aftr so long with another bang on story. Jst luvd the concept yr. Mysterious, painful, and sad love story n dat too on yuvreen. Superb idea. I luv readng ur work. You write so well. When i read ur story i cn imagine evrythng before my eyes. Awesome writer you are! Will also tell others about ur work. Bt dis tym plz update soon...jldi jldi plz. Eagerly waiting fr nxt part. Infact i m also waiting fr dat ff- my friends fiance. Wat bout dat? Plz take dat story also forward. You told that u wl update that aftr 3 june or july maybe. Bt i think u forgot about that story.

Hey whatsup...!! Seriously I so miss this forum...Feels like heaven to be back here...Trust me its kind of the best refresher to one..especially when struck up with so much of work load...but ya...You guys are just awesome...!!

And yes update as fast as possible...OPppsss...Yes I actually completely forgot about My Friends Finance...actually yes that concept was unique...will try updating atleast that along with this if not all the other FFs...!! Thanx for reminding...!! 😃😃😃

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elakshi banerjee

@ela_sandhirian

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

i jst luv d cncpt...i love to read any thing on yuvreen😃...n im fond of painful luv stories(though i dnt undrstnd y d girls alwazz suffr😭)

nywazz d stry is interesting...it hs already made me emotinal:-]do cntinue soon...im new to d forum so dnt knw mny people bt still ill tell my frndzz who r yuvreen fans to join d forum:-D

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Amazing Start Manish

Its really mysterious, I think something happened which seperated Yuvreen, Suvreen hates Yuvraj, looking forward to find out why

Cont Soon

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Manish B Shetty

@Manish_Shetty

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ela.yuvreen
i jst luv d cncpt...i love to read any thing on yuvreen😃...n im fond of painful luv stories(though i dnt undrstnd y d girls alwazz suffr😭)
nywazz d stry is interesting...it hs already made me emotinal:-]do cntinue soon...im new to d forum so dnt knw mny people bt still ill tell my frndzz who r yuvreen fans to join d forum:-D

thank you ela...and ya yor point is true about asking why are female leads always shown suffering...however, thats been the case ever since literature has taken its birth...and the idea was though modified through in the modern literature when feminism was its peak...However, it does continue to be so just that they try protraying a woman as more strong now...why is a girl shown crying almost everytime...the answer is not because she is weak like many assume it to be...but it is because a woman is considered to be one who respects emotions more than a man does...But yes in this story you would find equal emotions..!! 😉

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