SS-Naz-Karam ki Prem Kahaani| Chapter5 LAST PART!! pg.12 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzle22

So cute Naz...😳😊

and what's this..Shivin playing the cupid between you and Karam..😉
Continue soon dear..⭐️

thank you sooo much mizzle😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

niceee one naz😊

thanks aishu😳
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thanks snehal😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Wonderful update

very cute
loved the song
cont soon

thank you soo much anam😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you!! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm writing the next part.. I think it will be the last part.

- Next part comming soon !! =]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5: Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna !! <3


The party has started but not a trace of Naz. Smiriti and Shivin are worried and asking everybody if she came. But everybody says that they don't know.

Shivin asks to Smiriti : "Karam kahan hai, tujhe pata hai?"

Smiriti : "I don't know. Didn't see him today!"

Shivin gets tensed and goes. Smiriti gets confused..

Smiriti wears a beautiful black dress..

Shivin searches for Karam but doesn't find him.

He is walking on the street and is imagining the dance with Naz. The wind is blow away karams hair and he remembers the old gold memories with Naz.

Naz is on the beach. She is sitting on the sand and remembers what Karam said to her at the sets of Suvreen Guggal. She starts crying.

Karam walks to the beach. Naz stands up and is about to go.. Karam comes but they don't see each other and Karam comes at Naz's place and sits on the place where Naz sat. Naz is walking but then she suddenly stops walking.

Soona Soona Lamha Lamha

Meri rahein tanha tanha

Aa kar mujhe tum thaam lo

Manzil teri dekhe raasta

She feels that Karam is behind her. She fast turns around and the wind is blowing her hair away. She sees Karam and starts smiling.. but she cries aswell.

Mud Ke zara ab dekh lo

Aisa milan phir hona ho

Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho

Karam watches the beach very emotionally and closes his eyes and remembers Naz hugging him. He suddenly opens his eyes and gets up. He turns around and sees Naz watching him and crying.

Bepanah pyaar hai aaja

Tera intezaar hai aaja

They both are looking at each other for 1 minutes.. they are looking sooo emotional . Both are crying. Karam comes near to Naz and brush away her weep. He holds her hands.

Naz says : "Main jaa rahi ho! HAMESHA HAMESHA KHE LIYE. Ab tum khush raho."

Karam is shocked : "Kya bolne ja rahi ho?"

Naz : "I'm serious. I came here to meet you. And I met you! I'm very happy, so I don't have any other choice. Have to go."

She takes her hands out of his hands and turns around and is about to go. But suddenly, Karam holds her hand. Karam comes infront of her and hugs her and starts crying.

Karam : "I won't let you go."

Naz : "I don't have any choice."

Naz goes.. While she goes Karam watches her :

Bichde bhi hum jo kabhi raston mein

To sang sang rahungi sada

Kadmon ki awaaz sun ke chalungi

Tumhe dhoond loongi sada

Bepanah pyaar hai aaja

Tera intezaar hai aaja

Naz goes from India forever! She goes to Germany where she always lived.

Naz's diary:

It was an amazing trip to india, to Mumbai, to karam!

I had a lot of fun. I could meet all of the Suvreen Guggal cast&crew.

They were soo kind to me.. especially Karam. He was soo sweet. I could spent my 2-3 days with him. He was always there for me. He showed me Mumbai. I had a great time with him. But the good times had to end. I was a fan of Karam, I am a fan and I'll always be a fan of Karam! We tried to be more than friends, but couldn't be together. Ab main india se jaa rahi hoon.. kiya patha. Raaaste phir se karam ke paas lanenge. Phir milenge chalte chalte. !


Ab Karam - Naz (NaRam) ka story khatam ho gaya. I know it was a sad ending but kiya karuu.. it had to end sad. Tell me your thoughs about the SS. Should I continue with Karam - Naz stories? Please be serious. ! Wanna know how you felt of reading the SS. It's my first time that I have finished any story.


**LAST PART!!**


LIKE & COMMENT IS A MUST!! <3

Edited by Naz_YuvReen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was so emotional
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww..so sad ending..😭
Enjoyed reading though..I half expected you to bring in Param too here..😉 What would Naz do if both Karam n Param appear together?😆Me n my imagination!!😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A sad ending..but a lovely SS..👏

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