yuvreen new os - Page 5

yar sorry but i had not read this at all...so i had to read it from the start...finally done reading it and it is an awesome os...if u guys dont mind can i too contribute in this os??..plz reply...

Hi...I have just tried to write on their date..plz...do read it once and tell me if it is ok..and ya sorry according to the precap it had to be them planning fot mannu's surprise party...but i thought let me try on yuvreen date becoz then if it good u all can continue with them planning fot mannu's party...sorry if it is not good...😊

Update

Yuvi takes suvi to a lavish restaurant, but he makes sure that Indian food is available there as suvi likes Indian food more than anything.

It is a candlelight dinner and they get a corner ka seat setup only for them...they both walk towards it and suvi is surprised 😲

She finds all her favorite food already kept in the table.

Suvi: thumhe kaise pata chala ki mujhe yeh sab pasand hein?

Yvui: aey mujhe kaise nahi pata hoga...aakir mein cheetah jo hoon..

Suvi: accha..ab mazak band karon aur batho na kisne bathaya?

Yuvi: tikh hein baba..wo annie ne mujhe bathaya..

Later they both sit down and have their dinner lost in their eyes..bg tune of a romantic violin playing pehla nasha pehla khuma...

next part: the group planning for a surprise party for Mannu..

hey this is amazing

Originally posted by: Manish_Shetty

yar sorry but i had not read this at all...so i had to read it from the start...finally done reading it and it is an awesome os...if u guys dont mind can i too contribute in this os??..plz reply...

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

@luvushivin1

we all are block on this line

its ok...!!😊😊😊

now i'll wite...!
after their dinner they went out...!!!
then suvi suddenly saw sumthing and was surprised...!!
suvi-yuvi wo dekho...!!
yuvi-kya...??
suvi-ice cream...!!..!!.tumhe pata hai kathgodam mein main aur tultuli roz weekend pe ice cream khate the...!
yuvi-toh chale...!!
suvi-kahan...?
yuvi-ice cream khaane...!
suvi-ok...!!
yuvi-bhiya ek orange bar dedo...!!
suvi-tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe orange bar pasand hai aur sirv ek hum di hai na toh tumbhi apne liye maangvao...!!
yuvi-tu kitne saaval puchtee hai...!1...pehle baat yeh ki mujhe annie ne bataya ki tujhee orange bar pasaand hai...!!...aur doosri baat yeh ki ab hum do nahi ek hain...!! toh isliye ek hi cheez share karenge ..!!
suvi started blushing...!!.!!☺️..!!
yuvi-yeh le...!
then they started eating one by one then the last bite...!!...!!
yuvi-tu kha le...!!
suvi-nahi tum kha lo...!! waise bhi maine kha lee hai...!!
then ice cream falls and they both laughed...!!
yuvi dropped suvi...!!
next morning in the college ...!!
naro-tumlogo ko patah hai ki kal maannu ka birthday hai...!
and they nodded...!
rathi-bhaiye ab kya karen...!!
yuvi-prty ...!!surprise party...!!
suvi,annie,hegde.rathi,naro-yes...!!
next scene-preparations for the party...!!!

okk..manish..sorry it was my last exam tomorrow..and after that...so was busy finishing my quota of sleep 😆 😉 so cudn't comment...aaj i am back...and will comment acche se...sorry for not commenting at all yesterday 😔

Originally posted by: akshayR

okk..manish..sorry it was my last exam tomorrow..and after that...so was busy finishing my quota of sleep 😆 😉 so cudn't comment...aaj i am back...and will comment acche se...sorry for not commenting at all yesterday 😔

So..yes..your earlier update and this one was also brilliant...gud work...atlast ye topic aage toh badha! nahi toh we were struck at yuvreen' confession only 😳 😃

thanx a lot bhai...and ya u need not be sorry becoz i can understand...mera bhi exams jo chal raha hein...aur mera tho 20th takh chalegs..uske bad tho holidays hein......fir i ll be online all the time.!!!😃

now ill rite...!!
after their romantic scene they had an eyelock...!! but before they struck with a noise of annie like ahem ahem!
yuvi-tu theek to hai na...!!
but before yuvi could say suvi strated laughing...!!
yuvi-tu has kyun rahi hai...??
suvi-tum pehle jao aur apne app ko miror mein dekh ke aoo...!!
when yuvi went near the miror he saw that he his whole face with glitter all atrted laughing then yuvi wahed his face ...!
all preperations done...!!
now it was time to call mannu no body was ready ...!
rathi,hegde,annie,yuvreen-naro jayegi...!!
naro-par mein kyun.??
suvi-woh isliye ki mannu tere baat jaldi sun leta hai naro ji...!!
all started laughing ...!
naro-tum log bhi na...!!😡
suvi-par haan kya naro is halat mein mannu ko lane jayegi ..!
annie-to jaldi dress up ho lete hain...!
whole gang-ok...!!
all wre dresed up beutifully...!
except suvi because she was not their...!!
suddenly she came...!
yuv's mouth open..!!
rathi to yuvi-bhaiye muh band ki jiye nahi toh makhi ghus jayegi...!!
yuvi-was shocked she luked so stunning she was wering a gown(remember it like she was wearing in juliet)...!
annie-tu kitni achi lag rahi hai...!!
suvi-thank u...!!

suddenly naro's call came...!.to yuvi...!
yuvi-haan naro
naro-yuvi mannu toh maan hi nahi raha hai,.../!
yuvi-tum kaise bhi usko lao ...!!
naro-theek hai mai usko lati hun...!!tum log wahan par pahuncho...!
naro to mannu -mannu tumhe mere kasam tumhe chal na hi pade ga...!!
mannu-naro ji thekk hai..!!
naro messages yuvi-woh maan gaya...!
yuvi-thek hai...! ab jaldi chalo woh ah raha hai,...!!
as mannu entered whole gang was standing and all shouted HAPPY BIRTHDAY MANNU...!!🥳
next scene-yuvreen ,rannie and manaro dancing at song ishq wala love...!!❤️