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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: akshayR

LOL..yahan par RC ko kyun lekar aaye yaar 😆


kya kare current track hai aur wo dimag se ja hi nahi raha

kya kare😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suvi runs inside the college..not able to see yuvi with anyone else

Yuvi looking everywhere for suvi..

Yuvi: Topper!!!!..library mein bhi nahi hain...he looked for her at every place..at last he finds her sobbing at the stairs...

topper..tu yahan kya kar rahi hain??? main tere ko har jagah dhoondh raha tha..aur tu yahan par hain...aur ro rahi hain ????

Suvi: tum bhi toh busy ho uss anisha ke saath golgappe khane mein..JAO!!..maze karo uske saath!

Yuvi: Arey..voh toh hum sabki dost hai...aur kuch nahi..usne mujhe golgappe khilaye..usme kya problem!

Suvi: kyunki voh tmhari life mein meri jagah lene mein lagi hain!! PAGAL kahin KI !!!

Yuvi: Topper..cupping her face in both his hands..meri life mein teri jagah koi nahi le sakta...coz tu hain hi itni special...SABSE Special !!

Suvi became so happy that she hugs yuvi tightly and yuvi hugs her back 😳

Next scene: Umm..dnt know..!!

maybe the gang sees them..and then mannu and rathi tease yuvi 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
wow...this is so cute...

he really care for her so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
u both r awesum guysss...I loved it but wont be updating now
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
ok i rite it
yuvi and suvi still hugging each other tightly that one who sees them will think that they both are not two but one...!!!...:)
yuvi-topper...!!!!
suvi-hmmm...!!!!
yuvi-lagta hai ki humein abb chalna chahiye...!!!
suddenly annie,naro.rathi and mannu come...!!!
mannu-bhaiye (their hug breaks)...!!
annie-agar tum logon ka ruthna manna band ho gaya toh chalen...!!
suvi with embarrisement- han chalo...!!!
then they go...!!!!
annie,naro hugs suvi and then they go...along with rathi and mannu...!!!
rathi-bhaiye chalen ...!!
yuvi-haan tum chalo mujhe kuch kaam hain...!!
rathi and mannu-theek hai...!!!
then they go...!!!
suvi going then suddenly someone stops her by her waist...!!!
he was none other than our cheetah...:)🤗...!!
yuvi-topper ruk...!!!!
suvi feels embarrised...!!! and blushes☺️...!!!
suvi-kya hua...!!
yuvi-topper ruk mein tujhe chid ke atah hun...!!!!...!!
suvi then takes the passenger seat...!!!!...!!!
and then they go in yuvi's laila...!!!!!
then they go with and the bg music that was played was jab mila tu of i hate luv stories...!!!!
then yuvi drops suvi ...!!!
suvi-thank u...!!!!
yuvi- areh topper abb thank u mat bol ...kyunki dosti mein no sorry and no thank u...!!!!🤗
next scene yuvi meets RC
HOPE U LIKE IT...!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey suruchi.rajpal this is so good i like it
lemme continue

there is some business problem at home he immediately packed his bag and say bye to rathi and start his laila his feeling so sad abt the fighting between suvi and him he feeling so frustrating now he just don't know what to do and same time this family problem has come he feeling bad without meeting suvi and clear all the misunderstanding

he was on the way suddenly he saw some one is asking for help he stop his laila and ask person that how can he help him RC;-hi actually meri car punctur ho gayi hai aur bahot der se help maang raha hoon kya tum please meri help kar doge
yuvi;- ya sure mein kya hepl kar sakta hoon
yuvi and rc together worked together to change the tyre in this process rc looked at yuvi he is look so sad...they finished and both shake hand
rc;-hey thanks agar tum ne meri help nahi ki hoti to aaj mein time pe nahi pohoch pata hoon yaha door tak koi mechanic nahi hai...
yuvi;- its ok
rc;-agar tum boora na mano to tumhe ek suggestion doon chahta hoon
yuvi;- kaisa suggestion
rc;-tumhare dil mein jo kuch hai wo uss ladki ko jake bol do...tumhe aacha feel karoge
yuvi feel so shocked yuvi;-(ye kya bol raha hai aur use kaise pata chala ki mein kisi ladki ke bare mein soch raha hoo)
rc;- tum yahi soch rahe ho na ki mujhe kaise pata chala...wo kya hai na tumhara chehra saf saf bata raha hai...you know agar mein tumhari jagah hota to use kabhi bhi apane aap se juda nahi hone deta bhale hamare beech kitane bhi zagade ho...she is very special for me and i don't let her go...by hook or by crook...
yuvi understand his meaning and give a smile to him
yuvi;-i think u r right...thanks for the suggestion...mein jaroor usase baat karoonga
rc;-that's the spirit...ok bye...
yuvi';- ya bye...
yuvi started his laila a cute smile on his face (suvi just waite for me jaise hi mein vapas aaunga mein hum dona ke beech ke sare differences clear kar doonga aur hum bhir se pehle jaise ho jayenge)

next scene;-yuvi and suvi playing with kids in the park
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
nice now ill rite
yuvi- started his laila and said bye to RC ...now i will go to love of my life i m coming topper...!! with a smile he said...I LOVE U TOPPER..❤️
suvi was at dinning table eating her dinner with mummah guggal and pappah guggal and thinking about yuvi...!!!
suvi then goes into the room and saw a young man sitting their with a smile on his face...!!!😛...!!!
suvi -YUVRAJ tum yahan par tum yahan kya kar rahe ho...!!!
yuvi topper itne sawal mat puch aur chal...!!
suvi-par kahan...!!
yuvi-tu chal to sahee
suvi- par aise night dress mein
yuvi-toh change kar le ...!!
suvi-yahan...??
yuvi-toh kar le...tera maan with his killer smile ...!!!
suvi-besharam ho kya ...??
yuvi-tere liye kuch bhi topper...☺️
then suvi changes and then they go out without telling any one ...!!!
yuvi parks his laila and says suvi to come
suvi-tum mujhe yahan kyun laye ho...!!!
yuvi thought of saying but stops because of raining and the n sees children enjoying the rain...!! and the says"topper dekh wahan par...!!!"
suvi-ktne cute lag rahen hai na...!!!
yuvi-tum bhi toh lag rahe ho...!!
suvi then says chalona hum bhi chalte hai and yuvi nodded and says chalo...!!
suvi - suno kya humbhe apke saath dance kar sakte hain...??
children-haan...!!!
then bg tune is chak dhoom dhoom
yuvi and suvi dance like children ...!!
then suddenly suvi is aboyt to fall but yuvi saves and they have an eye lock...!!
next scene-yuvi confese his love...!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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My God!!! I've tried to write the confession part but every time deleted it before ending... can't even relate to anything,, never seen any confession in real life,,,lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is very difficult to write confession part...all because of the current track in the serial
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008



this is very difficult to write confession part...all because of the current track in the serial


Yupp..u r right...romantic wali feel hi nahi aa rahi mind mein 😆

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