Yuvreen os:love will find it's way upd pg 11 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Thanks u keep promise i like it

yuvi is now going to realise his feeling towards suvi 😳
this is going to amazing now ...lovely written dear😛

hmmm anish is now top of the hit list of yuvi😡


Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow brilliant job 😊
bhavnah thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

hey Thanks u keep promise i like it


yuvi is now going to realise his feeling towards suvi 😳
this is going to amazing now ...lovely written dear😛

hmmm anish is now top of the hit list of yuvi😡



Thnx dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazylover786

Please update soon...really waiting for the next update


Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhunilu

Wow brilliant job 😊


Fnx dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really nice..well done..sorry couldn't reply since yesterday bcoz i was busy the whole day 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: akshayR

It was really nice..well done..sorry couldn't reply since yesterday bcoz i was busy the whole day 😭


actually i really miss u ...i thought u don't like it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so gud one...waiting for da next part
bhavnah thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys here's a new update hope u like it 😊

p.s: yuvraj's dialogue in blue
suvreen's dialogue in pink

sorry for any wrong typos i didn't have time to read it and correct the mistakes😛

Part 3b

"Yuvraj wat is it? Y did u come out?"

Yuvraj turned his face back and looked at her, Suvreen was completely shocked to see him so angry
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"wat are u doing here! Now wat do u want?"

"yuvraj y r u so angry?"

"kyun mujhe gussa karne ka haq nahi hai kya?"

"yuvi tum aise baat kyun kar rahe ho!"

"kyun na Karun! Go & dance wiz zat Aneesh! Acha lag raha tha na tumhe being in his arms and dancing!"

Suvreen was surprised wiz his outburst, she looked upon at him shocked, she tried to touch him but he moved away

"Suvreen don't touch me! Plz go away! Mujhe kuch der akela rehna hai!"

But suvreen didn't want to let him alone in such a condition, she tried again

"yuvraj meri baat to suno!"

But he again moved away from her

"suvreen maine kahaan jao yahan se! plz go before I do something zat I'll regret!"

But she adamant

"yuvraj plz meri baat to suno!"

This time yuvraj lost his cool he turned around and caught her shoulders in a vice grip and talked menacingly

"jab maine kahan mujhe akela rehna hai to tumhe samaj mein nahi ata hai kya! I said leave me alone damn it! Is it hard to understand!"

With all his words he was tightening his grip on her shoulders

"Ahh yuvraj please choro mujhe dard ho raha hai! Plz leave me!"

But yuvraj was nowhere to listen to her

"jab maine tumse kahan tha ki mujhe akele chodhne ke liye! U didn't listen now pay the price of not listening!"

He didn't loosen his grip until he saw suvreen shedding tears silently
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Yuvraj immediately loosen his grip on her shoulders, wen he removed his hands he saw his finger's marks on her skin, he turned away from her and whispered

"u saw wat u've made me do! Why can't u just listen to me once!"

"tu--t- tumne uss pi--pichle saal s-ee mere s-aa-ath aisa behavior nahin kiya tha tum--tumne! Ajj tumne aisa kiya mere sath! Yuvraj kyun! Kya main tumhare liye kuch nahin hoon kya! U've hurt me yuvraj I can't believe it!"

Yuvraj couldn't hear her talking like this, he turned around and cupped her face

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" am so sorry suvreen! I shouldn't have behave like zis wiz u! tum mere life ka ek important person ho! Jho mein nahin lose kar sakta hoon! Mere behavior ke liye am sorry! I hurt u but mujhe jyada dard hota hai! I know it's been really long since I manhandled u! this time forgive ur ladoo plz!"

"nahin I won't forgive you! Tum bahoot bad ho! I hate u! really hate u!"

With that she began to hit him on his chest with her fists, she continued on wen she suddenly hugged him tightly and cried her heart out

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"suvi stop crying! Maine sorry kahan na! ab kyun ro rahi ho stop! Maine tum par gussa nikala kyunki mujhe accha nahin laga jab tum aneesh ke saath dance kar rahi thi! Abb to rona band karo! I can't support ur tears plz suvi plz!"

She sniffed and came out of his arms and looked at him in his eyes

"thik hai! I forgive u! par don't do this again!"

"I will not! Pakka promise!"

Suddenly it started to rain heavily, yuvi caught suvreen's hand and brought her to a shelter and he smiled mischievously, Suvreen looked at him confused

"kya hua? Y r u smiling like a mad person?"

"oho u forgot! Remember our first meeting it was in z rain!"

"oh haan! Mujhe yakeen nahin ho raha hai ki 1 saal bit chuka hai already! And on top of that I can't believe zat the same guy who made me miss my bus today became my bestest friend!"

"hmm I also don't believe it! But as far as I know u love the rain na! zen y r u standing here?"

"well I don't wanna look like a crazy dancing alone in the rain! Come wiz me na!"

"na sorry I can't be part of ur craziness !"

"plz yuvraj plz, pretty plz!"

At the same moment a car came in front of the entrance and a song played, suvreen listened to the music and got very happy

"yuvraj challo, plz!"

"acha thik hai! Challo!"

"yippee!"

Both went in the rain and the yuvraj asked suvreen

"may I have this dance wiz u pretty lady!"

"yes u can!"

Yuvraj wrapped his one arm around suvreen's waist and his his left hand he held suvreen's hand, while suvreen placed her right hand on his shoulder, the had a slow dance in the rain. With a beautiful song playing in the back ground.

rim jhim rim jhim rum jhum rum jhum
bheegi bheegi rut mein tum hum hum tum
chalte hain chalte hain
bajtaa hai jaltarang par ke chhat pe jab
motiyon jaisa jal barasaaye
buundon ki yeh jhadi laayi hai voh ghadi
jiske liye ham tarase
bajataa hai jalatarang par ke chhat pe jab
motiyon jaisa jal barasaae
buundon ki yeh jhadi laayi hai vo ghadi
jiske liye ham tarase
Aa rim jhim rim jhim rum jhum rum jhum

Movie: 1942 a love story ( http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EfulJZG60eU)

With that there was only a world zat existed with only Yuvraj & suvreen. They looked deeply in each other eyes. Yuvraj leaned forward, suvreen closed her eyes and waited, wen she felt yuvraj cold lips against her cheek. Then he whispered softly

"thanks suvreen! I really enjoyed dancing wiz u!"

"hmm main bhi! Thanks yeh meri life ka most memorable moment rahega!

Suvreen smiled whole heartedly at yuvraj


He looked on lovingly at her.



hope u liked it... 😉
kaveri hope it's ok! as we decided 😳

Edited by bhavnah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg...lovely lovely...I loved it dear...plzz continue it soon di...loved da dance wooowww...I am first 2 cmmnt...yipeee
Edited by sahashrabdidash - 12 years ago

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