yuvreen FF :Teri Meri Kahaani last upd pg 73 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz update soon this update was just aussum but i just hate this new entry.(but I love him as Arjun) 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!!! <3 pls update soon :) :)👏😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

New entry,it is becoming interesting now.Loving it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
p.s: guys am really sorry for such a crappy update! am not satisfied myself! am sorry 4 zis it's just am not in z mood of writing but i owed u guys one! guys i have one request from u! plz pray for my aunt (she's like my mum) she's really sick! 😭plz pray for her well-being.i was not in the mood of writing but i did. plz ignore grammatical mistakes! sorry if the update was not as promised.



Part 17

I went to take my sports equipment, as I reached my dorm it was soon 07:00 pm I went to keep my things in my room and went directly in the canteen mannu and rathi were in the canteen cooking some food to eat, I went near them and caught their ears from z back and said

"arey how much do u eat guys? U guys eat like elephants man!"

"arey bhai leave our ears na! no bhai we don't eat like elephants. We r humans n we eat like humans!"

"oh really! I don't fink so! Wenever we r together u guys keep eating!"

"bhai our tummy always give us a message wen it sees food!"

"ahan wat does ur tummy say?"

"it says Rathi eat this food , eat it I say!"

They busted in pearls of laughter, I gave them a glare and they quieted themselves.

"wat u guys r cooking! Am really hungry!"

"bhai! Well zer is rotis, tandoori chicken and salad!"

"gud! Challo let's eat am hungry and I have to call my love soon b quick!"

"arey gr8 bhai! From topp--eer to loo--veee! Gr8 now cheetah is no more a cheetah! Kyun bhai!"

"shut up guys! Tumhara bhai cheetah hai cheetah! No one can change zat! Yea I call her love so wat! Is something iching wiz u wen I call her zat!"

"no! no bhai no problem wiz us!"

We took our plates & had our dinner, we chatted and laugh for it was soon 09:30 pm. I bid goodbye to my friends, went in my room and took out my mobile n called my sweetheart, but she didn't answer, I tried once again but still no answer.

"that's weird! She usually answers at the 1 beep now wat's up! Mayb she's busy!"

I shrugged the thought, and went to prepare my equipments for the football match. I glanced at my watch it was 10:30 pm
"why isn't she calling me!"

I took my phone and again called her, after 3 beeps she answered

"hello!"

"ya hello to u 2! Wer were u! I called u earlier!"

"oh am sorry actually zer is a guest at home! I was chatting wiz him!"

"oh guest! Who is he?"

"well it's poppa's friend son."

"poppa's friend! He's a boy! Who is he I mean wat's his name?"

"well his name is Jeh Khuranna! Well he's a nice guy!"

"oh Jeh! Really huh he's a nice guy huh! Better zan me?"

"wat yuvi! He's nice & handsome 2!"

"really now! He's nice & handsome! Handsome suvreen wat's up wiz u! how can u praise another guy zat 2 wiz ur boyfriend for crying out loud!"

"oho if he's like zat wat can I do now!"

"ok! Keep praising him! Bye!"

"arey! Wait wait! I was pulling ur leg my shona! Yea he's handsome ect! But above all ur z most handsome guy for me! N I love my shona a lot!"

"acha! Really u love ur shona a lot?"

"hmm I love him a lot!"

"gud bekuz zis shona's of ur's love u also way 2 much!"

"I know! By the way he'll be coming to our college starting from tomorrow! So u must be nice to him wen u'll meet him ok!"

I let out a groan, making her understand my displeasure but I had to do it for her

"ok! I'll try! I will see how he is!"

"ok bye! Now I gonna go to sleep! So shona bye. Gudni8"

"yea gudni8 love! Dn't 4get am coming to pick u up! I love u loads. Sweet dreams! Bye sweetheart!"

"hmm u 2! I love u 2 my shona bye! Cya 2morow morning!"

I cut the call, went in the washroom, I brushed my teeth thinking about zis guy

"wat's his name! oh yea jeh something something! I hope I'll b ok wiz his presence! Grrr I'm hating him now itself! Hope 2morow it will b ok!"


hope the chap was ok. plz hit the like button and comment 😊

Edited by bhavnah - 12 years ago
Savi_S thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update bhavnah n i will pray for ur aunt...
akshayR thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
@bhavnah--yaar we could have understood the problem yaar..if u r in some problem..then please dnt stress out yourself for writing this... we can surely wait till your aunt is fine😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooow, very nice update!
I will definitely pray for your aunt, hope she feels better soon..
and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update...
I vil 2 pray 4 ur aunt hope she gets better soon
N thankz 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey bhavnah,1st of all i'll surely pray dat ur aunt recovers & will heal soon & i just luv ur writing,2 2 gd. Ofcourse ders no problm & its nt necesary 4 u 2 updat dat urgent,v all can wait afterall family comes 1st so don't worry just be relaxd & hope ur aunt gets well soon,my best wishes!!!
kaveriw2008 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry...
because of us u have to write the update in this kind of situation
i'll defiantly prey for ur aunt...she'll be fine don't worry
give my best wishes to her
nice update i like it
👏
please tell us how's ur aunt feeling now ok

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