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Posted: 13 years ago
happy eid to all of u 🤗

hey guys a new chapter... hope u like it... zer is a lot of yuvreen scenes in it to compensate for the previous update 😉 NO PROOF READING, IGNORE GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES 😃

Part 15

I saw him with a big smile on his face, I went near his jeep, and hopped in the passenger seat. He looked at me and smiled, he leaned towards my face I could feel his breath on my face he spoke softly

"gudmorning my lovely tomato"

"gudmorning yuvi"

He smiled, I could see zat his lips were coming close to mine, I closed my eyes and waited, but after a few seconds nothing happened, I opened my eyes and saw him smirking at me. I straighten myself and looked away.

"arey tomato! Wat hap u wanted me to kiss u?"

I looked at him he had a mischievous smile on his face I replied

"no! I didn't want anyfing from u!"

"ok as u wish!"

I sighed suddenly he caught my face, turned it towards him and gave me a peck on my lips. I was surprised I looked at him he started his laila and winked at me, I immediately blushed. He looked at me and let out a grin

"oh my is zat a blush zat I see on ur cheeks huh! Wait!"

With zat he took his mobile and clicked a photo of mine.

"I'll always keep zis with me! U won't be next to me I'll watch zis photo to remind me of my lovely tomato!"

I smiled lovingly at him, suddenly my phone vibrated, I looked at the caller it was poppa, I was shocked, I instantly remembered I had to talk to yuvraj about poppa. Yuvraj shook me out of my thoughts signaling me to answer my phone, I look at him he again signaled me to take z call, I listened to him.

"hel--llo pop-pa!"

"haan suvi wer r u?"

"poppa am in an auto am going to college! Y?"

"na am just asking! Ok see you in z afternoon! Bye"

"haan poppa bye!"

I cut the call and sighed

"wat hap suvreen? Did ur poppa told u anything?"

"no yuvi! But I fink poppa is suspicious about me! He is asking all sorts of questions! In z morning he asked me if any boys made any advances to me! Apart from annie and naro if I have any other friends! Yuvi am scared!"

"hey suvreen don't freak like zat! Did he tell u something about us?"

"no yuvraj he didn't but he is doubting me! N am freaking out for god sake!"

"suvreen relax ok! Relax! Let's go to college we'll discuss it better! 4 now my love just don't freak out!"

We reached college in silence, mayb our minds were working to find if there were possible reasons zat my poppa found out the truth.

COLLEGE

We reached college but I was still in deep thoughts, until yuvraj shook me

"suvreen come on go to class! We'll talk later ok."

I took yuvraj's hands in mine and hold them tightly again the thought came in my mind zat if poppa came to know about us he will separate us. Tears were by now welling in my eyes. Maybe yuvraj sensed my anxiousness he took his hand back and placed it on my right cheek and looked into my eyes trying to reassure me zat we'll b together no matter wat happen in our lives.

"suvreen listen love! We'll talk about it later u need to go in class na! go now baby I'll b waiting for u!"

"no yuvraj am really freaking out! If poppa knew about us he'll separate us and then wat will I do yuvraj! I will not be able to live without u, without listening to ur voice or even without seeing u I won't be able to live like zat yuvi!"

By that time the tears made their path on my cheeks, yuvraj wounded his arms around me tightly, I put my head on his chest listening to his heartbeats when he put his chin on my head and hugging me tightly

(pic credit: face book) (well imagine zer r in college n in their regular clothes :P) (http://fbcdn-sphotos-g-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/556546_339448679467421_1827515576_n.jpg)

While we were hugging each other he spoke

"love come we won't be separated ok! Never think of that ok no matter wat I'll b wiz u. may all z hurdles come but we'll stand together ok. That's the reassurance I want to give u. now smile plz for me!"

I couldn't help but to hug him tightly, even he gave me the reassurance zat we'll be together, I didn't want to go out of his arms I felt all the reassurance, protection and love in it. It was like these arms are like home for me, wenever I will need them they'll be here for me. Suddenly I heard yuvraj saying something.

"love go to class now or else u'll be late!"

I nodded my head in a no

"wat u don't want to go to class! Oh topper u must go to class to stay on the top"

I again nodded in a no.

"oh suvreen wat is it? U want to stay like zis or wat?"

I nodded my head in a yes.

"oh u want to stay like zis gud! I don't have any problem me but others can have!"

I came out of his arms looking disappointed, he looked at me and chuckled

"I see that u missy don't want to leave me huh ok! Let's continue zen! Let's go to my room."

He took my hand and dragged me to his room,I entered his room and look at it's state I was shocked


"yuvraj wat is it? Can't u clean ur room look at it's state it's like a dumping ground!"

"oye I brought u here to do romance! Not 4 u to look at it's state!"

"oho how can someone romance in such a pitiful state huh?"

"look suveren stop making comments or else I'll push u out"

"oh my shona got angry am just saying u should clean it up."

"wat did u call me shona?"

"ya so wat u don't like it?"

"no it's just zat it's z first time u talked to me without taking my name. I loved it"

"well u call me love,baby so I thought I shud do the same."

"zat's good! Good initiative I must say."

I giggled, he came in front of me and looked at me, he looked at my lips and again in my eyes, he leaned forward his lips were centimeters from mine, I closed my eyes and my breath automatically began to become heavier, my heart was racing. Wen I felt his cold lips on mine, I felt jolt on my spine, by that time he deepened the kiss, I began to walk back, still kissing each other, suddenly I felt a rough edge without knowing I fell on his bed, he came over me and we still kissed each other as if there will be no tomorrow. We broke the kiss as we had to catch our breath. He placed his forehead on mine and he whispered softly

"I love u a lot my love, ur my everything. Curse z day zat one day we won't be together! Zat won't happen!"

"hmm I love u 2 my shona! Even I won't let u leave me"

With that he again took my lips in a breathtaking kiss. After zat he placed his head on his pillow and he dragged me along with him, I placed my head on his chest and one of my arm around his waist and my other hand on his heart, wen he wounded both of his arms around my waist. This felt that we were complete and contended with each other

But the couple don't know that there is a big storm approaching towards them.


guys plz like and comment. i read each comment n it makes me happy to see the response. it encourages me to write more 😛

Edited by bhavnah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😲nice suspense!!!😲
but u sure look like a romantic person to me..just by looking the storyline and the romance😳😆
by the way no offense..i have no problem watching or reading their romance😃


By the way thnx for pm' ing me...do that whenever u update the ss.
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update bhavna n pics made it more real but i m afraid after ur warning. update soon n thanks for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vry romantic I must say
If tis is aired on television then
our tv would realy set on fire 😉
But 4 now its a suspence n m like alwayz eagerly waitin 4 d same
Do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi bhavnah...
jst read both d parts n both of them were suprb...
infact d last one is more exciting ..😉
waitng eagerly 4 revealation of suspense...😳
thnx 4 pm.,.
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Posted: 13 years ago
very romantic...
storm?? wat storm s cumin??
oh god wat will happn nw...
tanx 4 d pm...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow such a lovely part
but suspense also
god please help them...
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eid mubarak
and there is no need of any compensation all part is cute and sweet gift for us
Thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
totally romantic 😳😳 if the kiss seen is aired then thr trp hey gannuji us din ka to mein soch nahi sakti...😳😳...but an awsum update...!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏...HEYA...MO XTRA KONTAN SA(i love it too muchieee) STORY LA ...woh kisses ,woh huggies,woh mulaakaatein...oyehoye...very romantically sweet ...😉...shoo sweet...w@itin for next update eagerly...poppa coming ...ab kya hoga saaba...bhuvu...continue writing and continue winning our hearts...fly higher n higher...👏👏👏...okieee...u have bcm my star"t'es ma star"
👍🏼...si dan le futur en cas to blier moi😡 mo pu fr toi vin un tomato😈...hahahahaha...kovila kush hui...🤣...nahi jee bar ke hasugi
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Posted: 13 years ago
it is really very romantic, bhavnah. i love it a lot.❤️ plzzz continue writing the stories.😊

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