yuvreen FF :Teri Meri Kahaani last upd pg 73 - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aussum update again yaar 😃. I just love each lines of your update yaar I just wish sach mein kiss ho jaye☺️.
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Posted: 13 years ago
P.s: guys one thing the story is just an imagination nothing to do wiz z story line of the show...mine is totally different.. I don't own z characters but the story yes 😊...those who don't like the way it is written I apologize 😊

Hey guys here a new update hope u like it😛
New character introduced... will b revealed afterwards
like n comment 😊
kindly ignore gramatical mistakes 😊

Part 16

We were still hugging each other, wen I don't wen we fell asleep by holding each other like this, mayb the comfort between us made it all. I glanced at my watch it was already 13.00 pm

"oh god it's quite late n suvreen has been sleeping all day here! N she even missed her classes!"

"love! Wake up"

I tried to wake her up but she snuggled more into my chest, I chuckled I looked at her angelic face she was so beautiful, she's here sleeping in my arms without bothering attending her classes.

"love come on wake up!"

Still she didn't move, I had a good mind to wake her up by screaming her name but I didn't, suddenly an evil idea came into my mind, I began to tickle her, she woke up instantly and began laughing loudly

"ah yuv--yuvra--aaj ss--t-oop it pl--zz"

"why stop huh. I'll continue! I didn't know it's so difficult to wake u up guggal!"

"ok now I woke up na! it's ok now"

"hmm it's ok! Did u see the time guggal?"

I looked at her she was having a smile on her face, suddenly it turned into horror

"yuvraj it's already one! God I missed my classes!"

"ya wen I tried to wake u up u were sleeping like a log!"

I chuckled, she sent me an angry glare.

"I don't sleep like a log ok! Listen I have 2 classes I'll attend them and then I'll meet u!"

She hurriedly went of the bed and was near the door

"ah ah not so fast miss guggal wait!"
I went towards her and hugged her from the back

"u cannot go like this wait!"

I took my hand and turned her face towards me, I smiled zen gave her a loving kiss on her lips, she blushed

"oh I love the effect that I have on her"

"well love I think u must stop blushing and go to ur class, I'll meet u after wards ok! Bye"

"ok bye"

She hurriedly went out of my room and went in her class, I gave my room a look and decided to clean it up

2 HOURS LATER

I immediately went to meet her near her class. She came out with her friends and looked at me and she smiled and I smiled back

"loo--v I mean suvreen let's go I drop u home as I have to go and fetch my equipments for the football tournament."

"oh ur participating that's gr8!"

"yea like last year! I am a champion!"

"oye stop flattering urself! Let's go"

She went forward, I ran towards and held her hand

"well u must be happy as that ur boyfriend is a champion!"

"yea am happy!"

We reached near laila, she smiled lovingly at me, I smiled back, she took her seat on the passenger side and I took mine. While driving I told her

"love I think during the football tournament or after it will rain!"

"huh how do u know zat?"

"well I was born in a village! Zer people watch the sky and predict! Like wise am doing the same thing!"

"oh really zat's gr8 zen! Ur awesome!"

"haha! I only took birth in a village I didn't grow up zer!"

"zen how did u predict the weather?"

"by listening to the weather report!"

I began to laugh loudly, she punched me slightly on my shoulder!

" u fink ur really funny na!"

"no love I don't think! I am funny!"

Again I was rewarded with a punch, soon we reached at her place.

"well I think it's goodbye for now! I'll call u later bye!"

"ok bye! Drive safely ok!"

"always love"

I gave her a small peck on her lips and whispered

"I love u"

"I love u 2"

"bye love"

I turned my laila and went away.

SUVREEN POV

I began to walk back home still thinking of the moments zat I spent wiz yuvraj wen I entered my house I saw poppa talking to someone, not someone it was a boy, I went in zen poppa called me

"arey suvi beta come here! Meet him he's my friend's son! Say hi beta!"

Wen he stood up I immediately knew by his appearance zat he was a bad boys type


"hi am Jeh! Jeh Khurana!"

"um hi am suvreen!"

"ah suvreen! wat a nice name!"

"thank u"

Suddenly poppa talked

"beta he's staying here as his parents went back to America! Ok jeh beta come on explain it yourself!"

"actually am new in this city I just came back from America! My parents left me here and went back as they have their business there!"

"oh zat's sad!"

"yea I know"

"by the way which college ur going?"

"umm well I got my admission in DPSC! Heard it's a popular college!"

"well it is! I go zer!"

"hey zat's gr8! At least I'll have someone zat I know!"

"ya! Well I'll go and freshen up! See you later!"

"oh ok! Yea see you soon beautiful!"

He winked at me and went to talk wiz momma.


Precap: jealousy in z air😃

hey hope the update was ok types. hit the like button and comment if possible😉

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thnx 😊
Edited by bhavnah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow wow wow wow
villain is here (the real villain) ...OMG😡
poor yuvi...😭
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i thought the storm is papa guggal
but this a surprising item
i'm impress
Good work 👏
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that's a complete turnaround..we thot abt puppa coming..but its a guy coming here😆
nice update by the way...keep up the gud work😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dats gr8...now da villian is here n yuvi n jeh will start fighting for suvi...(i think so)but anyways u r simply gr8 di...luv ur ritings
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Posted: 13 years ago
Til now romance was in d air
but now jelously is gonna be in d air
hope tis jelousy makes their relationship much stronger
N also Would luv 2 see yuvi jelous( as in d serial they had shown suvi jelous due d entry of vajayanti mala)
Eagerly waitin 4 ur next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow ritwick entry thats grt n as per precap uv jeolousy i guess grt going bhavnah n thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
dis was suprisin yaar...
i thought puppa guggal was d eemy nw dis new entry s also d enemy..
jealousy??tats gonna b gr8 to read...
tanx 4 d pm...
updte soon
raabta thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
u r really amzng ...😊
wat a twist yaar truly unexpected
love it continue soon...
excited to read wat is dere in next turn...
thnx 4 pm
Edited by raabta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love it very much ❤️keep writing the stories😛
all the best bhavu 4 next part😉

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