yuvreen FF :Teri Meri Kahaani last upd pg 73

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shaily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

i am real IMPRESSED...!!!

love your writing ...give us ,more.e...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pm me...and yes yu have indeed a wonderfull imaginationm...!!!!!!

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raabta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

wow truly heart touchhing...😭

great yaar...

it's really difficult to imagine such emotional part...

hope u'll continue soon..😊

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suruchi rajpal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

i also felt like crying wen ur best buddy is not with u😭

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kovila

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

😛 kuku bhuvu!!!!!!!im here !!!!!!!!!!welll as you know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i really love z story!!!!!!!!!!!!😃 u see z wide smile on my face...tooo happy for u...soo many people like so story n among zem is...guesss...me...ur story rocks...i ve already told u...i love z dialoks n i can visualize it...it's as if taking place in front of me...esp.z dialogues...its rocking yaaar...what has touched me z most is the last part of z last update...yaar ...today iwas thinking about it all z time n i realize hw lucky am i to get friends like u all...must thank u,aswi,sheet,ashmu,iksha,vanessa,nausheen,dristee n all ozrs...yet yaar...vry sad for yuvi...who got a true fren for a short term but he iz really lucky coz he got the frenship of such a person who gave a true example of frienship n made his life meaningful...hats off to that guy...as said...true friends may seperate but their existence is always with us in terms of memories which iz most golden n precious thing of our life...thank you for being wiz me n give my life a meaning😊

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bhavnah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: kovila
😛 kuku bhuvu!!!!!!!im here !!!!!!!!!!welll as you know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i really love z story!!!!!!!!!!!!😃 u see z wide smile on my face...tooo happy for u...soo many people like so story n among zem is...guesss...me...ur story rocks...i ve already told u...i love z dialoks n i can visualize it...it's as if taking place in front of me...esp.z dialogues...its rocking yaaar...what has touched me z most is the last part of z last update...yaar ...today iwas thinking about it all z time n i realize hw lucky am i to get friends like u all...must thank u,aswi,sheet,ashmu,iksha,vanessa,nausheen,dristee n all ozrs...yet yaar...vry sad for yuvi...who got a true fren for a short term but he iz really lucky coz he got the frenship of such a person who gave a true example of frienship n made his life meaningful...hats off to that guy...as said...true friends may seperate but their existence is always with us in terms of memories which iz most golden n precious thing of our life...thank you for being wiz me n give my life a meaning😊

hey fnx a lot sweatheart... ya will never leave u sis or forget u don't worry

n thnx 4 liking the story

i'll pm u okii u nid to come onli9 alri8...

big kisses to you ⭐️

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kovila

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: bhavnah

hey fnx a lot sweatheart... ya will never leave u sis or forget u don't worry
n thnx 4 liking the story
i'll pm u okii u nid to come onli9 alri8...
big kisses to you ⭐️

hihihi🤪 ...i hope so u nvr leave me...n anyway even though u wanna to po pu capav blie moi bhavs...no thanks in frenship...oki...hope u continu like it...hoho...okie😃 bzw...mo le den zoolie...haha...

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bhavnah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: kovila

hihihi🤪 ...i hope so u nvr leave me...n anyway even though u wanna to po pu capav blie moi bhavs...no thanks in frenship...oki...hope u continu like it...hoho...okie😃 bzw...mo le den zoolie...haha...

ya it's nice... like all my post alri8... or else i'll beat u... lolzzz 😆

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kovila

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Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: bhavnah

ya it's nice... like all my post alri8... or else i'll beat u... lolzzz 😆

dhamki...u...atan mo apel u phunk la miss...jhameen...abeh kaun hain be too mujhe dhamki dene wali...aeihhh...😛

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bhavnah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: kovila

dhamki...u...atan mo apel u phunk la miss...jhameen...abeh kaun hain be too mujhe dhamki dene wali...aeihhh...😛

oho jhameen lolzz! remember the joke😆... gr8 one 👏 invented by me of course

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bhavnah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#200

p.s heys guys here the update... hope it's ok...niwez zer is a suprise in it..hope u like it 😳 and plz ignore gramatical mistakes didn't read wen posted will edit later😉

Part 12

I don't for how long I have been trembling and crying in her arms, but she hugged me tight trying to soothe the pain zat I had to endure. Little by little I felt zat I was gaining control being my own self. I broke the hug and looked at her, she was looking at me I could see through her eyes zat she was genuinely concerned for me. I was overwhelmed for her concern on me. I decided it was time to make it up to her. I went towards her and took her hand in mine and looked in her eyes and softly said

"suvreen! Hope u forgive me. Wen u talked about class in z morning I suddenly remembered my brother! Am sorry suvreen am really am.!"

She held my hand more tightly and took her other hand and touched my left cheek she looked into my eyes and said

"yuvraj u don't need to be sorry! I know u were depressed but am ok wiz it. I didn't know z real reason and I just asked u zis question without thinking. I tell u sometime na my mind goes off mode!"

"oh ur mind goes off mode! Interesting! It goes off mode is it a habit or it's bekuz of me?"

She stared at me, sensing suddenly the change of mood, she then smiled.

"by the way suvreen! U r looking really cute in ur pajama! Nice huh! I thought u like Bugs Bunny but Minnie zats a change!"

"r u making fun of me?"

"no! y would I! I thought u were from z family of rabbits but I was wrong, now I understand ur from Minnie mouse family!"

"yuvraj how dare u make fun of me wait! Look what'll do 2 u!"

With that she began to run after me, I made her run round and round of the bench till both of us were out of breath. I took her hand in mine and we sat on the bench trying to catch our breath. After a few seconds she put her head on my shoulder and she was catching her breath. I looked at her taking all the details of her facial features in my mind.

"she looks so beautiful and she's mine!"

I chuckled at my thought she straighten up and look at me.

"why r u smiling?"

"why? Is zer a tax for smiling zat too wen am thinking of my girlfriend!"

She lowered her gaze and again her cheeks were developing a deep red shade.

"suvreen u know wen u blush like zis na u look like a tomato!"

She gave me a small punch on my shoulder and again started to blush. I was amazed to see her like zis! I never thought zat one day will come zat we'll b in a park holding hands and on top of that in love wiz each other. I felt an immense joy knowing zat we love each other a lot even after the incident in z morning she's still here wiz me. I interwined my fingers with hers more tightly.

"suvreen I love you."

She looked at me and stayed quiet for a few seconds and then she said

" I love u 2 yuvraj."

I brought my free hand to her right cheek and leaned towards her face, by that time she closed her eyes and she was breathing a bit heavily. I inched my lips towards her lips, our lips were milimeters away before kissing her I wanted her permission.

"suvreen remember I told u, u must get use to my kisses! Now I ask u suvreen can I kiss u?"

She didn't responded, I thought maybe she wasn't ready and I didn't want to push her either then suddenly she nodded. I was elated

"she said yes I can kiss her!"

I touched my lips with hers, I felt her warm lips against my cold ones,I felt a tingling sensation at my spine. We stayed like zis for 3 minutes. I broke away from the kiss, wen I looked at her, her cheeks were fully red, I couldn't resist I pulled her towards me her mouth made the shape of 'o' obiviously surprised by the sudden pull.

I grabbed the opportunity and again placed my lips on hers this time deepening the kiss, we again broke to catch our breaths, she wounded her arms around my neck and hugged me tight, I hugged her back saying to her

"thank u suvreen for my 1 kiss. It was great. I loved it."

She was still in my arms wen I heard her whisper

"thank u yuvraj for giving me my first kiss. I enjoyed it"

With that I hugged her more tightly and added

"I love u baby"

"I love u 2 yuvraj"

p.s hey guys here the update hope it was ok.. n u liked it

plz like and comment guys

p.p.s silent readers give ur views plz

Edited by bhavnah - 12 years ago