SS: A Walk to No where (Updated pg 7)

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Asiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

sorry guys ... i couldnt udpate the next part as i had written it ...but unfortunately it got delete ...so i need to write again... sorry for the delay

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ForeverForU

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

hey ayesha...ur intro was superb...continue it Plzzz and PM me too...

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Asiya

@pinkgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Part 2

Both were shocked on seeing each other

" tu yaha itni raat mein akele kya rahi topper" asked yuvraj in concerned voice

"Woh mein...mujhe thoda time akele spent karna tha..isliye yaha aai thoda walk karne... Mujhe thodi na pata tha ki tum mujhe yahan bhi follow karoge" replied Suvreen in irritated manner

" Aacha he tu walk karne lagi he...ise bahne tera thoda weight toh kaam hogai ga" joked Yuvraj

" Tum na ... Tum kabhi seedhi se baat nahi kar sakte... Aur mein itni bhi fat nahi hoon... Ki mujhe walking aur jogging ki zaruat padhe ...mein toh khate pite khandne ki ladki hoon ...tumhari delhi walo ki tara nahi jo ik fixed diet plan ko hi follow karte hain" replied Suvreen

" magar zyada weight problematic ho sakta...agar kabhi tu filmo ki heroine ki tarah behosh hogai to...tera hero toh tujhe uthi nahi payega.. Aur tu toh baade jaldi he delhi walo ko pehcan gai...tujhe yeh bhi pata hona chaiye ki itni raat mein akele delhi mein ghumna safe nahi hota...par abhi tujhe daarne ki koi zarwat nahi he...main jo ho tere saat" rplied Yuvraj by raising his collar

" tum tension mat lo mera hero body builder ho ga... Mera Ranbhir kapoor ki tarah ..aur mujhe pata hai itni raat mein ghum na safe nahi hota par mujhe room irritation ho rah tha"

"Kyu" questioned yuvraj

" woh kya ha na ki yeh acting shacting mujhe se nahi hoti... Aur aab Surya Prakash Sir ne mujhe khud select kiya hai ... Is play ki lead role mein...mujhe nahi pata ki main yeh kar paogi ki nahi...aur main nahi chati hoon ki meri wajah se hamari college ise inter-college competition har jai"

A small smile came on Yuvraj's face seeing her innoncence

He replied "topper mujhe nahi pata tha ki tu inter-college play competition ki judge ha..jo tunne abhi se hi result declare kar diya"

Suvreen shooted an angry look to Yuvraj

"Aab mujhe itne gusse mat dek..maine toh tujhe yeh keh raha ho ki tu itna tension mat le aur play ki chinta mat kar...mujhe paka pata he ki har exam ki tarah tu isme bhi top kare gi...after all tu meri topper jo hai"

Yuvraj's words gave Suvreen assurance and little courage but still she was scared

Reading Suvreens facial expression yuvraj said " kyu na hum abhi thoda rehersal karte hain"

Suvreen agreed for it and they started pratcising for the scene where Julliet reliases her love

Mujhe toh yeh ...toh yeh pyaar...pyaar ..pyaar mein...vaishwas tha... I mean nahi tha...mein ek baar firse try karti hoon ha ...mujhe toh yeh...vaishwas..nahi pyaar..nahi vaishwas..gosh

Yuvraj mujhe se yeh sab nahi hoga she finally gave up

Yuvraj walked up near Suvreen n said " topper...meri taraf dekh...aapni aakhe band kar aur jo dil mein aata woh bol"

Suvreen followed Yuvraj she closed her eyes n started " mujhe toh yeh pyaar pe kabhi vishwas nahi tha par jab mein tumhari aakho mein dekha ..mujhe aahsaas bhi nahi hua ki mujhe tumse pyaar hogaya" she slowly opened her eyes resulting her getting lost in those mesmorizing eyes... They stood there forwhile unware of surrounding..

With a yuvraj phone ringing they came back in reality
Yuvraj answered the phone as it was rathi as he was shocked at not finding his bhai in room at 4:00 in night

Yuvraj told Suvreen that now her problem is sloved she should go home n rest as they have practise tomrrow

Yuvraj offered to drop Suvreen at her place as it was really late

Suvreen was now all set for the play while Yuvraj was happy to find a perfect Julliet

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Edited by pinkgal - 13 years ago

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pratishaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I love the fact this forum is getting more active. It was so out of it before.

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isnat

@isnat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Partner!!! Just read both of the parts...it was too good yar...you described everything so well..ans awww Yuvi is soo cuteee..he helped Svi in the dialogues..ughh why did Rathi disturb ?? :( its ok..I am sure in the next parts it will be better and no on ewill disturb YuvReen 😉
Thanks a lott for pm...and loveddd it..do continue soon!

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Ritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Good job yaar Asi...thanks for the PM!!!

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Manish B Shetty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

its awesome update soon cant wait for the next part!!! 😆

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Anikz003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Awesome work asi...and sorry for commenting late

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Asiya

@pinkgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: isnat
Partner!!! Just read both of the parts...it was too good yar...you described everything so well..ans awww Yuvi is soo cuteee..he helped Svi in the dialogues..ughh why did Rathi disturb ?? :( its ok..I am sure in the next parts it will be better and no on ewill disturb YuvReen 😉
Thanks a lott for pm...and loveddd it..do continue soon!

thank u partner i was waiting for ur comment ... i need ur help for next part