YuvReen SS -Unpredictable (part 6 pg#20)

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tumdeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

nice isnat thanks for pm and please continue soon👏

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isnat

@isnat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: -Zeffa-
Its official.

You are the queen of cliff-hangers now.😆

A nice update, as always true to the spirits of the leads and so much cute banter! There is something I've always thought- When you converse in Hindi there is an entirely different feel to it, it suits the leads very very much and so I like it very very much. :D

Queen of cliff-hangers?? 😲 Idk sometimes I find them interesting 😆
Thanks :) even I think so...that's why I put dialogues in hindi although it's not even my language 😕
btw ...as u r a writer too..feel free to point out mistakes please..:) Free advices de dena kabhi kabhi 😆

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ASMITA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

luved it zinat

ver ywell done

wowww it was amazing to see the way yuvi cared for suvreen

but y is every 1 goin to hospital

waiting eagerly for next part

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seoulbeats

@seoulbeats

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: isnat
Queen of cliff-hangers?? 😲 Idk sometimes I find them interesting 😆
Thanks :) even I think so...that's why I put dialogues in hindi although it's not even my language 😕
btw ...as u r a writer too..feel free to point out mistakes please..:) Free advices de dena kabhi kabhi 😆

Yeah, you too.😉