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sania_58

@sania_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

remember me Geeta Didi.

Finally I am back with my comments.😆

& a big SORRY for late response.

Chapter ten & Eleven.

awesome parts.

Loved Krishna & Suryodhan.Lord Krishna is playing flute to entertain Suryodhan.Thats interesting.

Then Vasusena in Pandavas tent.

Loved the descriptions.

I am visualizing every scenes.

He started accepting them & also craving for recognization.

Special mention to the last part, Karna & Sahadev.👍🏼A big woww.

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Chapter 12 & 13

As usual nice chapters.

Loved the moment between Vasusena & Nakul.

Who abducted Kunti?

Another unexpected twist.So appropriate title U gave to your fic.

But I loved every twist.

Now, the son is going to save the mother who left him in the river in most helpless condition.

So, your story on the way to recognization.

& what happened with Suryodhan??

ohh, its getting super interesting.

Loved your narration & descriptions.

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#213

aww! that was so nice.. gee darling! the first part union of suyo and banu..and now the very plain but touchy union of brothers... u r an excellent writer dear.

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Wonderful chapters Geetha😃

A nice ending👏

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Chapter 14

ohh just Fatafati update Geeta didi.
I think I used this term before.Its means rocking.
I loved the first part when Vasusena saved the wounded soldier.
He fulfilled a soldiers duty.A salute to his humanity.A great man.
Then, the rescuing part.
ohh lovely.
superb descriptions.I am visualizing.But its always Aham as Karna.
Great going Geeta didi & very well written.

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Brahmaputra

@Brahmaputra

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

GC maate 🤗 kya jhakkas ending hai. Happy shappy family reunion!!!!! Beautiful, unforgettable and nicely written !!! Kaash MB ka ending aisa hota. It could have been forgiven even if the Ps were not punished.😆

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Chapter 15 & 16

Lovely updates.

Well written.

Loved the convo between Suryodhan & Krishna.

Its a treat to read characters in your stories & also the unexpected incidents.

As a reader I never able to predict the happenings in your stories.

Then the GrandFather & Grandson convo.

superb updates.

Throughly enjoying reading.Thumbs Up.👍🏼❤️

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Last Part.

Awesome, superb, mindblowing.

Just loved the ending.

Its a treat to read your stories.

Thanks for this beautiful story with so many unexpected twist.U are an excellent writer.

Everything here is so perfect.

All characters are so real & reactions are so natural.

Suryodhan-Bhanumati & Karna with his brothers,very nicely described.

Loads Of Love.

Waiting for another one.

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Rg2015

@Rg2015

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Hurray... Tooo gud... Finally... It's awesome... Am happy... It's was neat... Fantastic... I loved it... Am sorry I couldn't comment to few of ur previous chapters as I was out of station.. But enjoyed them all. This one is way special and magnificent... Plz update soon.

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

@KURT15

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: sania_58
remember me Geeta Didi.
Finally I am back with my comments.😆
& a big SORRY for late response.

Chapter ten & Eleven.

awesome parts.
Loved Krishna & Suryodhan.Lord Krishna is playing flute to entertain Suryodhan.Thats interesting.
Then Vasusena in Pandavas tent.
Loved the descriptions.
I am visualizing every scenes.
He started accepting them & also craving for recognization.
Special mention to the last part, Karna & Sahadev.👍🏼A big woww.

Hi Madhu, so glad to see u back, don't say sorry. Am really glad u cud catch up. Thank you for the detailed comment. 😊