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Originally posted by: sania_58

Chapter 12 & 13

As usual nice chapters.

Loved the moment between Vasusena & Nakul.

Who abducted Kunti?

Another unexpected twist.So appropriate title U gave to your fic.

But I loved every twist.

Now, the son is going to save the mother who left him in the river in most helpless condition.

So, your story on the way to recognization.

& what happened with Suryodhan??

ohh, its getting super interesting.

Loved your narration & descriptions.

Thank you again. Your comments are very nice. 😳

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

aww! that was so nice.. gee darling! the first part union of suyo and banu..and now the very plain but touchy union of brothers... u r an excellent writer dear.

Thank you Dhi. 😊 Am not so good as u or a lot of others, but thank you!! 😳

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Wonderful chapters Geetha😃

A nice ending👏

Thank u Nonie 😃

Originally posted by: sania_58

Chapter 14

ohh just Fatafati update Geeta didi.
I think I used this term before.Its means rocking.
I loved the first part when Vasusena saved the wounded soldier.
He fulfilled a soldiers duty.A salute to his humanity.A great man.
Then, the rescuing part.
ohh lovely.
superb descriptions.I am visualizing.But its always Aham as Karna.
Great going Geeta didi & very well written.

Thank you Madhu. I too imagine only Aham as Karna! 😳

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

GC maate 🤗 kya jhakkas ending hai. Happy shappy family reunion!!!!! Beautiful, unforgettable and nicely written !!! Kaash MB ka ending aisa hota. It could have been forgiven even if the Ps were not punished.😆

Thank you! Am happy u liked this one! But the epic wud not have been so unforgettable without the war... That revealed a lot of things about a lot of people which everyone was unaware of! 😃 😳

Originally posted by: sania_58

Chapter 15 & 16

Lovely updates.

Well written.

Loved the convo between Suryodhan & Krishna.

Its a treat to read characters in your stories & also the unexpected incidents.

As a reader I never able to predict the happenings in your stories.

Then the GrandFather & Grandson convo.

superb updates.

Throughly enjoying reading.Thumbs Up.👍🏼❤️

Thank you Madhu. I cherish this compliment of urs. As a writer, I do wish that readers should not predict what happens next. 😳

Originally posted by: sania_58

Last Part.

Awesome, superb, mindblowing.

Just loved the ending.

Its a treat to read your stories.

Thanks for this beautiful story with so many unexpected twist.U are an excellent writer.

Everything here is so perfect.

All characters are so real & reactions are so natural.

Suryodhan-Bhanumati & Karna with his brothers,very nicely described.

Loads Of Love.

Waiting for another one.

Thank u! Now it's my turn to wait for u to update ur ff! 😃

Originally posted by: Rg2015

Hurray... Tooo gud... Finally... It's awesome... Am happy... It's was neat... Fantastic... I loved it... Am sorry I couldn't comment to few of ur previous chapters as I was out of station.. But enjoyed them all. This one is way special and magnificent... Plz update soon.

Thank you! Don't say sorry, am happy u liked it. 😳 Er.. This is the last part! 😆

Such a beautiful and perfect ending geetha di! Just loved everything about it, just fabulous!⭐️ Especially the happy reunion of the brothers and how karna asks them if his best friend is included! 😆
This story ended here but i am looking forward to reading many many more from you. 😳
You are an amazing amazing writer! 👏 👏

Originally posted by: ramya06

Such a beautiful and perfect ending geetha di! Just loved everything about it, just fabulous!⭐️ Especially the happy reunion of the brothers and how karna asks them if his best friend is included! 😆
This story ended here but i am looking forward to reading many many more from you. 😳
You are an amazing amazing writer! 👏 👏

Thank you Ramya. You are an amazing writer yourself, that appreciation from u means a great deal. Thank you