Kriyam FF 'True Love' Chapter 16 - The Final Chapter UPDATED on pg 20 - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shiney19



Thank you so much Anjali for your comments.

I loved that chapter too and I loved writing the beach scenes too.

You have followed and commented on my FF from the beginning, thank you!! 😊


Jst Thanx won't do..U'll hv to comment on my SS's last two parts too😆 I'll be posting tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali33



Jst Thanx won't do..U'll hv to comment on my SS's last two parts too😆I'll be posting tomorrow



Of course I will. I have been waiting for you to update your SS! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
How much I loved your ff.. And this part was so emotional. You really understood the characters so well and depicted every scene with such perfection that it seemed to me like I'm reading a book. All the kriyam scenes were my favorite I couldn't choose one. But the epilogue the way you ended it really took my heart away. Her mom being ready to send her to London was so unpredictable. No one could ever come up with such a thing. We will definitely be in touch. But for now I'm reading your ff from beginning cherishing all those kriyam moments. Can't thank you enough for giving us such a treat. Love you!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
This FF was sooo good
Will surelly miss it
My fav part of this FF was the kiss scene on the chapter 11 it was fire ""
I always appreciated the away you PM me every time you update a new chap because it represents your dedication
I think your ff is one of the best FF on kriyam
Love you so much & will miss you

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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my goodness Shaz! I actually feel little emotional after reading your final chapter 🥺 It's amazing that this was your first ff, it was written brilliantly. Coming to this chapter, I loved how you described Krishnas emotions in this and the last few paragraphs were written beautifully. I didn't expect Krishna to leave with Sayyam, but it was such a perfect and romantic ending. I started thinking about them living in London together lol.

I'm going to have to say this is probably one of my favourite chapters and the one where she realised Sayyam was her dream guy! I liked all the Kriyam moments, can't get enough of those lol! I'm really going to miss this ff, I absolutely loved it from start to finish!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: itsAveesha

How much I loved your ff.. And this part was so emotional. You really understood the characters so well and depicted every scene with such perfection that it seemed to me like I'm reading a book. All the kriyam scenes were my favorite I couldn't choose one. But the epilogue the way you ended it really took my heart away. Her mom being ready to send her to London was so unpredictable. No one could ever come up with such a thing. We will definitely be in touch. But for now I'm reading your ff from beginning cherishing all those kriyam moments. Can't thank you enough for giving us such a treat. Love you!!



Thank you! Your comments made my day! Seriously you made me smile. I was nervous whether this chapter will live up to expectations. After writing the previous chapter, I thought everyone would think Krishna would stop Sayyam from leaving. I like to be a bit unpredictable, so I decided to send her with him to London instead.

That's so sweet of you to be reading the FF from the beginning. I will never forget this FF, I really enjoyed it. Kriyam have been such an amazing couple to write about.

Thank you so much for your comments, I really appreciate it!! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Djodishwari

This FF was sooo good

Will surelly miss it
My fav part of this FF was the kiss scene on the chapter 11 it was fire ""
I always appreciated the away you PM me every time you update a new chap because it represents your dedication
I think your ff is one of the best FF on kriyam
Love you so much & will miss you



Thank you so much! I know you have been following my FF for a long time, thank you! Chapter 11 Kriyam moment where they're in the woods is one of my favourite Kriyam scenes. I loved writing that scene. In that scene their actions spoke for themselves. It was a turning point for them as Krishna got to see how much Sayyam loved and cared for her, this in turn made her feelings for him grow even more. The whole weekend away at Bhavna's house was a big turning point in their relationship.

There are so many talented writers on this forum and to say that my FF is one of the best Kriyam ffs is such a big compliment. Thank you so much. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it. I will miss everyone on this forum too!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Faeeqa

Oh my goodness Shaz! I actually feel little emotional after reading your final chapter🥺It's amazing that this was your first ff, it was written brilliantly. Coming to this chapter, I loved how you described Krishnas emotions in this and the last few paragraphs were written beautifully. I didn't expect Krishna to leave with Sayyam, but it was such a perfect and romantic ending. I started thinking about them living in London togetherlol.


I'm going to have to say this is probably one of my favourite chapters and the one where she realised Sayyam was her dream guy! I liked all the Kriyam moments, can't get enough of those lol! I'm really going to miss this ff, I absolutely loved it from start to finish!



Faeeqa! Thank you so much for your comments, it means a lot. Thank you so much for supporting my FF from the beginning.

I thought it would be a bit predictable for Krishna to stop Sayyam from leaving so I thought I would send her to London too! I was actually thinking to myself the other day, if the show carried on, I could've done a Season 2, with Kriyam in London. But unfortunately the show is ending so that is why I decided to end my FF.

I too loved the beach scene where Krishna realises Sayyam is her dream guy. Since I wrote the dream scene in chapter 1, I knew I would use it again for when she realises.

Thank you again for your comments and your support. I'm eagerly waiting for your next Kriyam FF update.
Edited by Shiney19 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow!! an unexpected twist at the end...really didnt see that one coming.
Now thats an epic ending 👏..
whats my favorite chapter?? thats a hard question to answer,they all stood out in their own way but if i had to choose its a tie between chapter 7 and 11 . Favorite scene hmm... oh god there r so many which do i choose ...ok ...krishnas and saiyyams confession , thats my favorite scene.
I dont know what to say other than, ur an amazing writer and i fell completely in love with ur fanfic. I was really disappointed with how the SSEL kriyam track was going so I can't thank u enough for writing such a beautiful ff ... thank you❤️❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amginena

Wow!! an unexpected twist at the end...really didnt see that one coming.
Now thats an epic ending 👏..
whats my favorite chapter?? thats a hard question to answer,they all stood out in their own way but if i had to choose its a tie between chapter 7 and 11 . Favorite scene hmm... oh god there r so many which do i choose ...ok ...krishnas and saiyyams confession , thats my favorite scene.
I dont know what to say other than, ur an amazing writer and i fell completely in love with ur fanfic. I was really disappointed with how the SSEL kriyam track was going so I can't thank u enough for writing such a beautiful ff ... thank you❤️❤️




Thank you so much for your comments! I really appreciate it. I'm finding it hard to choose a favourite too but chapter 7 and 11 are my faves too! In chapter 7 Sayyam cant control his feelings for Krishna anymore and kisses her and chapter 11 is the one with the Kriyam moment in the woods.

I wanted an intense love story for Kriyam but the cvs ruined it, that's why I decided that I would write a FF instead to show the intense romance.

Thank you for following and supporting my FF.
Edited by Shiney19 - 8 years ago

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