Hai Ishq Mera Kaamil (Epi-10 updated on 16/05/2017)

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amaya15june

@amaya15june

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

awesome epi yuvani scene was cute

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Napsha J

@NAPSHaJ

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Epi-6:

Dadi goes to anika's home..
Dadi- thanks jaya ji.. For helping us..
Jaya- even u will be doing a lot for our son.. Thanks..
Dadi- sahil is such a cute boy..
They smile..
Dadi- 2 years ago, suh met with an accident and...
Jaya interrupts- what a coincidence.. Even anika had a serious accident..
Sahil- and u know.. After that accident...
Jaya stops her and says- we were so scared.. But thanks to the doctors.. God bless him..
Dadi asks about the name of the hospital and date of accident.. Shez shocked to know that it was the same hospital where suhani was admitted, and both the accidents took place on the same day.. She leaves..

Jaya- what were u going to tell her? That she had a plastic surgery?
Sahil- yes..
Jaya- beta plz.. Anika not only lost her memory, but her face too, that was her identity.. She was too depressed when she lost her memory.. If she gets to know about her face too, she will be broken..
They hug each other..

Dadi comes home.. Shez shocked to know that they are going to recreate everything at night..
She thinks- if shez suhani... She will recall everything and stay here forever.. I can't let this happen.. I won't let this happen..

At night...
YuvAni play in the garden.. Suh runs out of the main gate.. A truck comes as per the arrangements and suh falls down.. there is a pool of blood on the road.. Yuv starts to recall that dreadful day..
He calls out her name and rushes towards her.. he kneels down and wraps her in his arms.. he tries to wake her up..
Suh sees flashbacks of the same scene but cant understand whats it.. she thinks it was that accident in which she lost her memory..

(haan mujhe bhi ho gaya' slow duet version tune plays in bgm)
Yuv cries- suh u cant leave me.. my life is nothing without u.. I'm nothing without u.. plz wake up.. I beg u.. plz.. wake up.. taunt me, fight with me, argue with me.. plzzz..

SUHANI'S POV:
"How can somebody love someone so much?" I thought..
He continued to cry so hard that it could melt a heart of stone.. and I was a human with a heart, that wanted love; that love which yuv had in his heart for his beloved.. Yuv had that person in him which I always wanted in sambhav.. I changed the plan on the spot when I felt I couldn't control my tears anymore..
I murmured his name slowly.. He thanked God and hugged me tighter saying I would be fine.. The slight smile on his face at that moment; not even a million dollars could buy it.. I too hugged him back for the first time..
Sharad bhaiya called for ambulance and I was taken to the hospital..
Doc said- shez fine now and she will be discharged in the morning..
I was resting in the OT, and recalled yuv's concern for me.. To be honest, I regretted for making him cry unnecessarily.. Suddenly I felt someone coming and I closed my eyes..
...
Yuv goes inside and stops.. He sees her lying unconscious..

"Naina " plays in bgm..

Jhootha jag rain basera
Saancha dard mera
Mrig trishna sa moh piya
Naata mera tera

Naina.. jo saanjhe khwab dekhte thhe
Naina.. bichhad ke aaj ro diye hain yoon
Naina.. jo milke raat jaagte thhe
Naina.. sehar mein palke meechte hain yoon

Juda huye kadam
Jinhone li thi yeh kasam
Milke chalenge hardum
Ab baant'te hain ye gham
Bheege naina..
Jo khidkiyon se jhaankte thhe
Naina.. ghutan mein bandh ho gaye hain yun..

He slowly walks towards her.. his shirt is stained with blood, his face is smeared with tears..
He sits on the tool.. He holds her hand, and rests his face on it.. He cries and asks her to wake up.. An emotional suh couldn't see it anymore but somehow manages to stay strong..

Next morning...
As she wakes up, she finds him in the same position.. Their hands were smeared with his tears.. She moves her hand slightly, and yuv wakes up..

After two hours..
The doorbell rings.. Ramesh opens the door.. YuvAni come with pratima and shawana.. Yuv looks at ramesh.. Ramesh nods..

Yuv asks suh to come with him to their room and rest.. She nods and they go upstairs.. Suh opens the door of the room.. Its completely dark.. Yuv covers her eyes with his hand from behind and turns the light on.. Her face brightens on seeing the room decorated with balloons and flowers.. On the mirror, its written "Welcome back Mrs. Suhani Yuvraj Birla :)"

Therez a broad smile on her face.. Yuv too smiles..
Suh turns towards him and asks- thanks yuv.. But what was the need?
Yuv- so that u stay happy and get well soon..
Suh- I'm not in a hurry to get well.. I'll take my time..
Yuv- oh.. So u want me to hang around u and take care of u..?

Suh nods smiling.. Yuv pulls her closer.. Their noses touch.. Suh feels shy.. She closes her eyes..
Yuv- r u liking me around u?
She opens her eyes and meets his gaze..
Suh- yuv...
Yuv stops her by putting his finger on her lips.. He closes his eyes.. He comes closer to her.. But before his lips could touch hers, she pushes him away.. Yuv looks on..
Suh- I've got some work..
She turns to leave, but he stops her holding her hand..
Yuv- u take rest, I'll leave..
He makes her lay on the bed..
Suh watches him as he steps out of the room..
Suh (in mind)- what's happening to me?

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amaya15june

@amaya15june

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

superb epi n amazing yuvAni scene

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Napsha J

@NAPSHaJ

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: amaya15june
next part pz

Will post today..

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Napsha J

@NAPSHaJ

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Hi guys.. So sorry to keep u all waiting.. My exams got over on Saturday.. :) and got again in may.. :( so I may not update regularly now..

Epi-7:

After 2 days...
Suh is sleeping.. Suddenly she opens her eyes and finds yuv standing in front of her with his arms crossed and admiring her.. Hez smiling..
Suh says very sweetly (smiling)- good morning..
His smile disappears..
He looks at the clock and says pointing towards it with a broad smile- good afternoon..
Suh- for me, it's a new morning..
Yuv sits beside her and asks- may I know why?
Suh- coz I saw ur face when I opened my eyes..
They smile and have an eye-lock..

Bgm plays...
Deedaar tera milne ke baad hi chhoote meri angdayee,
Tu hi bata de kyun zaalima main kehlayee,
Kyun iss tarah se duniya jahan mein karta hai meri ruswayee,
Tera kusoor aur zaalima main kehlayee...
Deedaar tera milne ke baad hi chhoote meri angdayee,
Tu hi bata de kyun zaalima main kehlayee...
Tu hi bata de kyun zaalima main kehlayee...

Shez about to get up when he stops her.. He asks her to rest..
Suh puts her hand on her forehead and says- yuv.. if I rest so much, I will surely fall ill..
Yuv pinches her nose..

And suh actually wakes up, realizing it was just a dream!!

SUHANI'S POV:
I walked towards the window.. I placed my palms on the railings and admired the beauty of the nature; or shall I call it the beauty of my life.. I felt blessed to have met this family; I got pratima maa, pa bhaiya, Bhawana di, and Yu... I stopped.. I recalled the way he cared for me those two days.. I turned around and took up suhani's pic from the table..
I said- our faces are same.. What about our hearts? Are they too same? Do they beat for the same person?
I kept her pic back and said shutting my ears- no.. therez nothing between me and yuv.. I'm just helping him..

Just then, I heard a voice- hez normal now.. U can leave BH.. What are u waiting for?
I looked on.. It was my reflection.. It smiled and disappeared..

I recalled pratima maa's question- why did u change the plan in the meantime??
I stayed quiet.. I myself didn't know the answer; what could I tell her..

I was in a dilemma.. I couldn't understand what was happening with me.. What I was feeling for yuv at that moment, wasn't a part of any plan.. It just happened..

I decided to leave BH before it becomes more difficult for me.. I opened the cupboard and started packing my bag.. Pratima maa came to me..
Maa- suh.. I have a good news for u..
The happiness on her face vanished as she saw me packing my stuff..
Maa- where are u going?
I replied turning my face to the other side..- my job is done.. yuv is fine, so I should leave.. Once he comes back home, I'll tell him everything and leave..
She turned me around and asked- oh really? Then why didn't u leave two days ago by pretending to be dead? Why did u give my son this new life?
I looked at her..
She left my arms and said- If u wana go, u can go.. I wont stop u.. I just came to tell u that sharad and bhawana will be leaving with sahil tomorrow for Bangalore for his operation, so u should meet him once.. but now that u'r going...
She left.. I resumed packing and left when I was done..

I reached my home.. I hugged maa and touched her feet.. She blessed me.. I went to see sahil.. He was sleeping.. I sat beside him and spoke my heart out to him, and said about yuv.. I had already told maa about my breakup with Sam and she explained it to him in her way..

Suddenly he sang- ho gaya hai tujhko toh pyaar behna...
I got up and asked- as always, u were pretending to be asleep?
He nodded laughing and said- don't change the topic..
I smiled and said- therez nothing like that sahil.. ya I like him, but...
Suddenly my phone beeped..
It was sambhav's message- who will be responsible if yuv meets with an accident and dies on the spot?
His message was scary; he could do anything.. I paniced.. I called yuv immediately.. He didn't respond.. I called maa and asked her where did he go.. Even she had no idea.. I was worried for him.. I called sambhav and warned him to stay away from yuv else I would kill him.. He laughed and disconnected the call..

I asked sahil to rest and promised to come once I see yuv, and left from there..
I couldn't understand where to go.. My phone rang and sambhav's name flashed on the screen..
I accepted the call but didn't say anything..
Sam- yuv's car had an accident.. if u think I'm joking then come near Hotel Red Star..
I immediately left to see and prayed for yuv's well-being on the way.. I didn't want any bad news.. As I reached there, I saw the crowd.. I managed to make way for myself.. I saw his car damaged badly.. I was shocked!!
I screamed- yuvrajjj...
Tears started flowing from my eyes..
I ran towards the driving seat but no one was there.. I looked around for him..
Suddenly yuv came from behind.. Seeing him alive and perfectly fine was like a treat for me.. I hugged him as tightly as I could and closed my eyes.. He caressed my hair and said softly- suh.. all are watching.. lets go home..
I said- let them watch.. I don't care..
...

Yuv looks around.. People smile at both of them and calls him lucky to have such a loving wife..
Yuv- suh.. My shirt got wet with ur tears.. Plz buy me a new one..
Suh breaks the hugs and slaps on his arms..
Yuv- aaauchh.. whats this suh?
Suh- do u think I'm in a mood to joke right now? U have no idea what I went through when I heard about the accident..
Yuv- who told u about it?
Suh- I got a call from an unknown number.. anyways, lets go home..

They reach home.. Pratima gets glad seeing them but thinks she will tell him everything soon..
Prat and suh look at each other.. suh shakes her head (meaning no).. Prat nods smiling..

YuvAni go to their room.. Yuv goes to freshen up.. Suh sits on the bed.. She recalls sam's message and all and fumes.. She tightens her fists.. Suh's phone rings.. Its sahil..
Sahil- anika di.. did u get billa ji?
Suh- sahil.. Hez yuvraj birla.. Not billa.. call him yuv bhaiya..
Sahil- bhaiya or jiju..??
Suh- bhaiya..
Sahil- that means hez like ur bro..
Suh- sahilll... I'll come in the evening..
Sahil- okk di.. love you..
Suh- love you too sahil..

Just then, Yuv comes out and hears it.. YuvAni look at each other..

PRECAP: Suh confesses her love to Yuv.. YuvAni moments..

Ur reviews are awaited.. :)

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yuvani_saraj

@yuvani_saraj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

thank u so much...it was awesome...

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Napsha J

@NAPSHaJ

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Epi-8:

YuvAni look at each other..
Yuv- suh.. whoz sahil?
Suh thinks and says- hez my friend's brother.
Yuv thinks- how could she tell him I love u'??

Suh- yuv.. whatever happened today...
Yuv sits beside her and says- suh... it was just an accident.. and I'm fine..
Suh- what would u do if u assumed me to be in that car?
Yuv looks on..
Suh gets up and says- u wont understand what I went through when I got that news and u couldn't be seen anywhere..
Yuv too gets up and makes her face him..
Yuv- I'm sorry suh..
Suh- its ok..

Yuv sees her stressed and thinks to cheer her up..
Yuv- by the way, suh, if u have to choose between me and sahil, whom will u choose?
Suh- why are u asking this?
Yuv- no.. actually I saw u flirting with him..
Suh raises her eyebrows..
Yuv- I mean, I heard u saying I love u' to sahil over the phone..
Suh understands what yuv must be thinking..
Suh (with a broad smile)- obviously I will choose sahil.. infact, any woman would choose sahil.. hez so cute..
Yuv frowns and turns to the other side crossing his arms..
Suh smiles and says- do u wana see his pic?
Yuv- no.. I don't wana see the pic of my saut..
Suh tries to suppress her laugh and sees sahil's pic with her on her phone..
Suh- u know yuv, we took this pic when...

Yuv looks at her from the corner of his eye..
Suh- why should I tell u?
She kisses the pic..
Yuv doubts and thinks- whats going on? No woman would do this openly.. something is wrong..
He snatches the phone and sees the pic.. He smiles seeing lil sahil with suh..
Yuv- oh.. this is sahil?
He smiles..
Suh- what did u think? Hez ur saut?
She laughs.. he pulls her closer.. She feels shy and looks down..
Yuv puts his finger on his chin and lifts up her face.. they have an eyelock and then they hug each other..

In the evening...
YuvAni come to meet sahil.. They give him chocolates..
Sahil- thank you billa ji..
Yuv- ur welcome champ.. by the way, what did u call me?
Sahil looks at suh and winks.. She blushes..
Suh goes inside to meet her mom..
When she comes back, she gets glad seeing YuvHil's bonding.. She watches them from behind the curtain..

Kaun tujhe' plays in bgm.. Somebody puts hand on her shoulder from behind.. She turns to see.. its yuv..
Suh- yuv.. u were there, then...
He grabs her by her waist and puts his finger on her lips and says- I'm everywhere.. just for u..
She blushes.. Yuv closes his eyes and tries to trace her lips with his own.. Suh smiles and pushes him.. He opens his eyes.. She shows him thumbs down..
Yuv- wait..
She runs moving the curtain aside..

YuvHil are gossiping.. Suddenly they see Suh coming, running towards them.. She collides with the table and is about to fall when yuv holds her calling out her name.. She opens her eyes..
Suh- u were right.. u'r everywhere..
They have an eyelock..
Susahil coughs smiling.. Hez very happy for his anika di..
Sahil- di.. why were u running?
Suh thinks what to say..
Yuv asks her what' through hand gesture..
Suh- coz there was a thief..
YuvHil together- thief?? Where?
Suh- yes.. he left..
Sahil puts his hand on his forehead.. Yuv thinks shse has gone mad..
Suh (in mind)- u'r the thief yuvraj.. u stole my heart.. DilChor kahin ke..
She smiles looking at him..

Guys.. Confession epi has been postponed.. And I don't know when I'll update.. But confession part will be updated after my exams..
Ur reviews are awaited.. :)