Hai Ishq Mera Kaamil (Epi-10 updated on 16/05/2017)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happy Holi guys.. Its me, Napsha..
Thank u so much for showering so much love on me..
Guys my exams are still on the way and got again in may too..

Herez my new ff 'Hai Ishq Mera Kaamil'.. This is a sequel to my very first ff 'Tera Hone Laga Hoon' as requested by some of u to continue and unite the love birds..
If u haven't read THLH, herez the link:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/suhani-si-ek-ladki/4650576/tera-hone-laga-hoon-yuvani-ss-part-8-on-pg-7

Epi-1:

Dadi is reading newspaper.. She sees pratima and calls her..
Dadi- howz yuvraj now?
Prat- just like he was two years ago, after suhani left this world; just like he was a week ago, when u got that girl here to take care of him..
Dadi- Pratima.. Her name is Barbie.. And shez very beautiful.. Just a week has passed.. Yuvraj will be fine soon..
Pratima- Let's see maaji..

Barbie comes to dadi and asks for money to buy yuvraj's medicines for the month, as most of them were finished.. Dadi gives her Rs. 20000.. She keeps the money in her bag..
Pratima asks her- what's there in her bag..
Barbie says 'nothing' and leaves..
Pratima looks at her and says in mind- why do I always feel shez hiding something?
Dadi observes her and says- no need to doubt on her.. Go and see yuvraj..
Pratima leaves angrily..

Barbie comes back and goes to her room and freshens up.. Pratima calls her.. She makes faces and thinks- ufff.. Now she will ask about that abnormal..

Pratima asks her if she has bought the medicines.. Barbie nods pointing towards the packet kept on the table.. Pratima takes the packet and says- today I'll give the medicine to my son..
Barbie looks on worried.. Pratima turns to leave..
Barbie stops her and says, trying to take the packet- aunty ji.. I'll give him.. U take rest..
Pratima asks her to rest instead..
As she turns, the packet falls and the meds scatter on the floor.. They look down..

Dadi thinks to see yuvraj once.. She heads towards his room but stops midway when she hears pratima shouting.. She enters barbie's room and asks pratima..
Pratima- ur beautiful barbie filled the old bottles with water and kept the money for herself..
Dadi gets shocked.. Both of them slap barbie and ask her to leave Birla House..
Pratima asks sharad to get the meds.. He nods and leaves..
Pratima says- now no one will come.. I'll take care of my son and make him live life like before..
Dadi looks on..

Pratima slowly opens the door of yuvi's room.. Her eyes get wet seeing yuvi who was talking to suhani, or say, himself..

Yuv- suhani.. Do u know why I comb my hair?
Su- why?
Yuv- coz I love it when u mess it..
She messes his hair and asks- oh really? Then why do u pretend to get irritated?
Yuv messes her hair..
Su- ouch.. Yuv.. Plz leave..
Yuv- now tell me, whether u loved it or u got irritated?
Su- both.. Yuvraj.. I wana have kulfi..
Yuv slaps cutely on her forehead and says- does anybody want kulfi during winters?
She nods.. He refuses.. She calls him Sadu and makes a sad face and looks away..
He says- ok u can have it.. But u have to smile.. U know na I can't see u upset..

Pratima wipes her tears and turns to leave when yuv says- aunty.. Suhani wants to have kulfi..
She nods smiling and says- I'll get it..
He says- no.. Today we will get it from her favourite kulfiwala..
Pratima agrees to take them..

They are on the way.. Yuv is sitting in the back seat, talking to suhani..
Pratima watches everything and prays to God to make everything normal again..
Just then, their car hits someone.. Pratima and driver rush out to see.. The victim was a lil guy.. He extends his hand towards his stick.. Pratima gives it to him and asks him if hez ok.. He nods..
She helps him to get up.. She scolds the driver..
Prat- but what are u doing here? Where do u stay? And what's ur name?
He says- Sahil.. I stay in Tulip Apartment.. Its my sis' engagement today and I had planned a surprise gift for her.. I was just going to take it..

Pratima asks the driver to take care of yuv.. She takes sahil to the photo studio on the opposite side of the road..
The owner says- ur gift is ready.. Shall we pack it?
Pratima- sahil.. Shall we see it once?
Sahil- no aunty.. I want my Anika di to see it first..
Pratima smiles and blesses both of them.. Sahil takes the gift.. Pratima says she will drop him home..

PRECAP:
YuvAni (Yuvraj-Anika) hug each other.. Anika says- I love you..
The screen revolves around them..


I have chosen the name Anika coz Yuvraj+Anika=YuvAni..

I don't think the epi was too good but I'll try to update asap if u think I should continue, and will write better in the next epi.. So do leave ur comments.. 😊 😊

Edited by NAPSHaJ - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u dear for yuvAni ff.THLH meri favourite h aapki savi ff m.now coming on epi its superb nice start dear but mera ek que h suhani has died fir yuvAni ki story aage kaise run hogi or suhani ke bina yuvaani incomplete h.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ek req h story yuvraj suhani ki ho.anika nhi suhani name kar do
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice plss update it soon and me too want name as suhani😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for ur response guys.. 😊 😊
I will clear all confusions in the next epi as i feel many of u couldnt get it clearly..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys.. Thanks for ur response in the first epi.. Before beginning with today's epi, I would like to clear that:
1. Anika's name has been used but her role is played by Rajshri mam only..
2. Anika is Suhani..
3. How did she survive after the accident and became anika, that will be revealed in the upcoming epis..

So, let's begin with today's epi..

Epi-2:
Sahil asks pratima for yuv- whoz he? Why is he talking to himself?
Pratima tells YuvAni's love story in brief.. Sahil feels bad for yuv and looks at him..

The car stops outside the apartment.. Pratima walks in with sahil..
Sahil says- we stay in a rented flat on the 1st floor..
Pratima- okk.. Come..

YuvAni argue in the car.. Suhani gets out and runs inside the apartment..
Pratima enters the house with sahil.. The guests were already there.. Both of them look around..
Just then, a guy comes to him and asks- sahil where were u?
Sahil- sambhav jiju.. I went to...
He interrupts and asks about pratima.. They tell him everything..
Sam touches her feet.. She blesses him.. He asks her to come in.. Her phone rings and she excuses herself..

Anika comes with 2 girls who bring her from her room.. (Shez none other than our suhani).. Shez looking gorgeous in red lehenga.. Sam and anika smile looking at each other..

They stand infront of each other.. Sam makes her wear the ring..
The moment pratima turns towards them, the lights go off.. Anika too makes him wear the ring and hugs him..
She says- I love u.. I love u so much..
The lights turn on..
He caresses her hair and replies- I love u too..
She breaks the hug hearing that voice, and finds sam standing behind that guy (Yuv)..
Pratima is taken aback seeing all these..
Yuv holds her hand and says- come suhani..
She frees her hand and asks- who are u?
Pratima asks yuv to come with her and holds his hand.. He continues to say- I won't go away from suhani..
YuvAni look at each other..
'Haan mujhe bhi ho gaya' fast instrumental plays in bgm..
The ring falls from yuv's finger.. Pratima takes him home saying suhani will come in sometime..

Sam- who was he Anika?
Anika recalls the scene and says- I don't know him, but I don't know why I feel I know him..
Sam- what do u mean?
Anika- nothing..
She picks up the ring..
Sam- leave it.. It happened for the 2nd time that we couldn't get engaged coz u couldn't make me wear the ring.. I think I'm not ur destiny!!

Yuv is lying unconscious.. Shawana ask pratima to rest, they will look after yuv.. Prat says she needs to talk to them..

Anika is thinking about yuv.. Sahil comes and says- di.. I've a surprise for u..
He hands over the gift.. Anika smiles..
Anika- what's this?
Sahil- ur engagement gift.. Open it and see..
She opens it.. Its a big framed collage where their lovely moments are collected..
She loves it and thanks him.. They talk about birlas.. Sahil tells about YuvAni's love story..

Shawana are shocked to hear about anika.. They decide to convince her to help them in making yuv normal..

Next morning...
Pratima and Shawana come to meet Anika.. Pratima apologises on behalf of yuv first..
Anika- its okk aunty.. Sahil told me about him.. I really feel sorry for him.. I wish I could help him...
Sharad interrupts- only u can help him..
Anika- I didn't understand..
Pratima shows YuvAni's pic.. Anika stands up in shock..
Anika- do u want me to stay with all of u??
Pratima nods..

Anika turns around and says- I can't do this.. I'll be getting engaged to sambhav soon..
Pratima- then why didn't it happen yesterday?
Anika looks on and recalls Sam's words- It happened for the 2nd time that we couldn't get engaged coz u couldn't make me wear the ring.. I think I'm not ur destiny!!

Pratima says- u can do it for ur bro.. Don't u wana see him walking on his feet, running, jumping, etc..?
Anika looks at sahil from the window.. Hez sitting on a bench, watching other children playing in the garden.. Her eyes get wet.. She agrees to help them..
They thank her..

Bhawana gives her a few video CDs of their family moments.. They ask her to observe suhani and her habits closely, and also tell about the family members..

After 15 days...
Shez shown in a pink saree like suhani.. She packs her stuff and keeps sahil's gift too.. She hugs her Mom and sahil and leaves saying she will be back soon..
Sam comes and says- they are trapping u anika.. They won't let us unite..
She replies- if u'r my destiny, I'll come back to u..

She opens the door of the car and gets in..
Bhawana hugs her and says- suhani...
Anika turns back to see..
Bhawana- from now on, u'r suhani..
Suhani- but how will I come in front of yuv?
Sharad- don't worry.. We have a plan..

PRECAP- Anika's entry in BH.. Later, Yuv shows their photo albums to suh (Anika)..
Suh- I wana see if u really remember when these pics were clicked..
Yuv tells about every pic.. Suh looks at the pics, then at yuv.. It continues..
She says in mind- u'r so lucky suhani.. Yuv remembers everything about u even in this state.. Will sambhav also love me this way?

Guys I hope u like it.. I've exams on 15th and 16th, and got study leave on 17th and 18th, so I'll try to post the next epi by 17th..
Don't forget to comment..😊😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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my interest increase day by day in it.i enjoined ur ff.yuvAni imagination too good.i m waiting for next epi .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks a lot guys.. I'll try to update asap.. 😊 😊
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Epi-3:

The car stops outside BH.. Suhani comes out of the car and looks at the house.. She starts visualising watering the plants, playing with yuv/ snoopy in the garden, etc.. But the visuals weren't clear; the faces weren't clear..

As she opens the main gate, snoopy comes barking to her.. Suhani gets scared and steps back..
Sharad- don't get scared, hez our family member..
He introduces them to each other and makes them shake hands..
Suhani smiles and says- hi snoopy..
Snoopy too smiles..

The door bell rings.. Ramesh opens the door.. He gets shocked seeing suhani.. Others too are left with their mouth wide-open..
Dadi- pratima? Whoz this? Now don't say shez that girl's twin sis.. I won't let her stay here.. Ask her to...

Pratima shows her hand and says- No maaji.. U got barbie here, now I got anika.. She will help us in making yuv normal..
Dadi leaves fuming and rags-men follow her..
Pratima shows YuvAni's room and blesses suhani..

Pratima goes to yuv's room and finds him having his salad..
Prat- yuv beta.. Wherez suhani?
Yuv- what aunty? Shez sitting here..
Prat- beta.. I've an idea..
Yuv comes to her and asks- what idea?
Prat whispers something into his ears.. Yuv gets excited.. He hugs her and says- thank u aunty..
Pratima smiles with tears of joy in her eyes..

Yuv- suhani.. Get up.. Let's play hide n seek.. Ur favourite game..
Suhani gets excited and hugs him.. Yuv hugs her back..
Prat (in mind)- today the chapter of imaginary suhani will end forever..
Yuv- u go out with aunty.. I'll hide in this room and u will have to find me..
She nods.. Prat leaves with her and locks the door from outside..

Shawana bring suhani and ask her to go in.. Shez worried.. She opens the door and calls out his name.. The room was completely dark..
Suh- yuv.. Why did u turn the lights off? I'm leaving..
She turns to leave and the lights turn on.. He covers her eyes with his hand from behind..
Suhani feels something by his touch and gets thoughtful.. Yuv moves his hand away and she opens her eyes.. Yuv smiles..
Suh (softly)- why are u smiling?
Yuv- coz u lost the game..
Suh- so.. Will u punish me?
Yuv shakes his head smiling and says- never..
Suh looks on.. He hugs her but she doesn't hug him back..

She breaks the hug and says- u know yuv.. My friend and her hubby played a game.. They wanted to remarry, and decided to live in separate rooms till they get married again.. I also want to play that game..
Yuv (excited)- yes.. Okk..
Then he makes a sad face..

Suh- what happened?
Yuv- but what will I do if u will not stay here?
Suh- don't worry, we will spend the entire day together.. But we can't sleep together till our marriage..
Yuv- then i'll sleep on the couch.. U sleep on the bed..
Suh tries to convince him but hez too stubborn.. She finally agrees..

Dadi recalls bribing the doctor saying suhani shouldn't survive.. She thinks suhani is dead, then whoz anika..
She calls that doc and asks- is suhani birla alive?
The doc starts sweating and says- no madam.. As u said, we didn't treat her and left her to die.. I'll talk to u later..
Saying that, he disconnects the call..
Dadi says in mind- hez hiding something.. I've to find out anika's history.. if suhani is found alive, i'll kill this doc..

Yuv shows their photo albums to suh..
Suh- I wana see if u really remember when these pics were clicked..
Yuv tells about every pic.. Suh looks at the pics, then at yuv.. It continues..
She says in mind- u'r so lucky suhani.. Yuv remembers everything about u even in this state.. Will sambhav also love me this way?

Next morning...
Suh gets up.. She checks her phone..
Sam's msg- gm darling..
She replies smiling- gm..
Sam- shall we meet today?
Suh- i'll inform u if i'll be free..

She walks towards the bathroom.. Her phone starts ringing.. Sam's name flashes on the screen.. Shez about to accept the call when she sees yuv shivering due to cold and his blanket lying half over his legs and the other half making their way to the floor.. She puts her phone on silent mode and walks towards yuv.. Her phone continues to ring..

Suhani comes near yuv and pulls the blanket over him.. As she turns, she stumbles, screams and falls over yuv.. Her phone falls and the call gets accepted.. Yuv wakes up.. They have an eye-lock..
Sam receives no response and says- hello.. hello.. anika?? Are u there??
Suh gets up and apologises..
Yuv- I don't mind romancing with u early morning..
Suh- Romancing?? Do u think I like falling over u??
Yuv- do u mean u don't?
Suh- no..
Yuv- I know u like it.. and one day u will admit it..
Suh goes to the bathroom..

Sam fumes after hearing their conversation over the phone.. He thinks- she doesn't have time for me coz shez busy romancing with that abnormal guy..

PRECAP:
He makes her sit infront of the dressing table and picks up her towel from the bed.. He wipes her hair slowly..
They look at each other via mirror and have an eye-lock..
Later, Suh takes out her engagement ring from her finger and throws on Sam.. He fumes.. She stares at him angrily and leaves..
Sam (in mind)- anika.. u will have to pay for this insult..

Guys I hope u enjoyed it.. 😊😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb epi yuvAni scene was awesome

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