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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Even I hv xams from 6-27 March..So I won't be able to read..Problem solved😆😆 lol


oh...so best of luck dear...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice! I like the fact that they are all friends with each other, will love to see all the bonding between them and there won't be much negativity!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_writer


oh...so best of luck dear...😳

Thank u..N best of luck to u too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faeeqa

Nice! I like the fact that they are all friends with each other, will love to see all the bonding between them and there won't be much negativity!


glad u loved it dear...
thnq😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Thank u..N best of luck to u too


thnq dear..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiii guys...
ok i am back after my exams...
n i have changed the prologue in full english...n i will update the chapters in english only...i hope no one have any problem with this as some may connect more properly when they are in hindi...
actually i did this as i am going to post this story on telly updates also...

n ya chapter 1 will be updated within 2 to 3 days..

thank you :)
Edited by angel_writer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiii guys,
i am back after my exams...
so here is the first chapter..
hope u all love it
plz ignore the typos and grammatical mistakes...

so here we go...

CHAPTER 1

If two people are meant to be together, eventually they'll find their way back...


Srivastava Apartment

A girl in her 20's was sleeping in sitting position on the chair with her head on the table. And her sleep was disturbed by the sun rays and she turned her head to other side to protect herself from the rays. And she slightly opened her eyes and saw the time that it was 5:30 am and she realized that she was sleeping on her table.

Girl-" Krishna...you are naa...is it a place for sleeping...if mom would have came na then..." and she stretched her arms and stood up from the chair and went towards the balcony. She then looked at the morning scenario and took a deep breath. In the mean time, saumya entered inside the room calling out Krishna

Saumya-"Krishna wake up" and saw Krishna standing in the balcony and went towards her

Saumya-"today you woke up yourself.."and Krishna looked at her mom

Krishna-"aa...ya mom...actually today my sleep broke early..."

Saumya-"oh...ok.." And her eyes fell on the bed and she saw that the bed was properly set and duvet was also kept in proper way and she turned to krishna

Saumya-"oh..so you woke up early and even set your bed..." And Krishna immediately looked at the bed

Krishna-"y..yaa..ummm...actually today I thought to do all my work by myself..that's why " And saumya hit Krishna's shoulder with her hand

Saumya-"you again slept on the chair naa?.." And Krishna smiled sheepishly

Krishna-"ya"

Saumya-"Krishna... how many times I have said to you...not to sleep like this..but you..ok now go freshen up and come for aarti"

Krishna-"ok.." And saumya went from there. Krishna went to freshen up.

Birla Mansion

A boy was jogging in the garden. A girl and a boy were running behind him.

The boy running behind called

Boy-"hey stop na..." And stood there and put his palm on his knees and panting

Girl-"bhai stop na..how much you will make us run" And at this point the boy running in the front stopped and turned to them.

Sayyam-"at least in this way both of you did your jogging ..." And yuvaan sat on the chair in the garden and yuvaani went upto sayyam

Yuvaani-"bhai...ok you did your jogging...and we our's...so now come.."

Sayyam-"where?" And yuvaani pulled him upto the chair and made him sit and then sat beside him.

Sayyam-"what happened...??"

Yuvaan-"we want to ask something..." and sayyam looked at both of them confusingly

Sayyam-"hmmm...say"

Yuvaan-"actually..."

Yuvaani-"we want to talk about your marriage..." She said it in one breath.

Sayyam-"not again...i have said na that I don't have no problem with this relation..."

Yuvaan-"but.."

Sayyam-"why you both are not understanding...and from now I don't want to talk on this topic"

Yuvaan&yuvaani-"hmmm" and both of them silently stood up and went inside the home.

Yuvaan's room

Yuvaani-"bhai is lying.."

Yuvaan-"I also know that...now we have to use our master stroke...but if that also don't work then?..."

Yuvaani-"it will work...be positive...ok now call krishna" and yuvaan dialled Krishna's number.

Srivastava apartment

Krishna and saumya finished their puja. And then Krishna's phone ringed and Krishna ran towards her table on which her phone was kept. And she picked the phone

Krishna-"ya yuvaan say .."

Yuvaan-"what to say... sayyam..." he said in little bit irritated tone

Krishna-"you mean...he didn't understand" And took her seat on the dining table.

Yuvaan-"no yaar...we talked yesterday also and today also we tried to talk to him...but he ended the topic before we could start (mimicking sayyam) I don't want to talk on this topic..."

Krishna-"why he is not ready to undertand..?" and yuvaani took the phone from sayyam's hand.

Yuvaani-"Krishna..now you are the only one who can make bhai understand..."

Krishna-"ok I will talk to him...but I can't say...stubborn will understand or not ..."

Yuvaani-"nw you are the only hope..."

Krishna-"ok..i will call him to come at my place..."

Yuvaani-"bhai will undertand...think something else..."

Krishna-"ok...let me think of something else...ummm...I have an idea..today I will not go by my scooty to office...and then in the evening I will call sayyam to pick me up...and it will soung genuine to him..."

Yuvaani-"yah that's good idea...u are the best Krishna..."

Krishna-"voo..calm down...first let him understand ..."

Yuvaani-"ok..then while going to college, we will drop you to the office..."

Krishna-"ok...bye.."

Yuvaani-"bye.." n cut the call and gave phone to yuvaan

Yuvaan-"what she said?" and yuvaani told him everything said by Krishna

Srivastava apartment

After ending the call, Krishna went in the kitchen to help her mom

Saumya-"whose call was that??"

Krishna-"yuvaan"

Saumya-"what happened??"

Krishna-"your sayyam na...he is so stubborn...he is not ready to understand anyone's saying.." Krishna was really angry on sayyam

Saumya-"what happened..??" and krishna sat on the kitchen platform

Krishna-"mom you know na..his marriage has been fixed.."

Saumya-"yah...everyone has to marry one day...but you are the only one who don't want to marry.." Krishna made a irritated face

Krishna-"mom...here we are talking about sayyam not me.."

Saumya-"ok...so what is the problem in this marriage"

Krishna-"problem is that, he is not happy with this marriage but still he doing this marriage. And yuvaan and yuvaani are now got fed up with his stubbornness. And now they have given me this task of making sayyam understand.."

Saumya-"yah you are saying right but you know na...suhani ji didn't like if someone interfare in their matters.."

Krishna-"mom if sayyam would have been happy then I would have said not a single word but here he is not happy and if for his happiness I have to make suhani aunty miffed with me, then I don't have any problem.

Saumya-"you are not going to back off, so its no use...so now came and have breakfast.."

hope u all loved it...
do hit like and comment...

thank you😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome..N no one can avoid making Saiyyam a stubborn guy..Not even in ffs..Lol!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Awesome..N no one can avoid making Saiyyam a stubborn guy..Not even in ffs..Lol!!


Glad u loved it dear...
Yah we cant avoid his stubbornness LOL
Btw thnq 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely chapter! I'm loving the story so far, it's nice to see all the siblings interacting in your ff. I want to see how Krishna will talk to Sayyam about his marriage. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Edited by Faeeqa - 8 years ago

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