KriYam OS: Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo... - Page 2

Originally posted by: obegum

Thank you so so so so much for this!!!

I was dying for someone to write a beautiful KriYam story and you fulfilled my wish!!!

This was stunning, but I'm sad it's just an OS- it has great potential and I think you know it! ;)

Please continue!!! Xxx

Originally posted by: parboni

Best thing I read today!Beautiful OS.Would like to read more of KriYam. 👏 😃

Originally posted by: vinlora

Beautiful os..loved it yaar...keep writing...love to read kriyam ff's...

Originally posted by: Shiney19

This is really good! Well done! If only this could really happen on SSEL. Krishna needs to be his support but to do that she needs to see Sayyam for who he really is. Right now she just thinks of him as evil because he forced her into this marriage and he is the son on sambhav who killed his mother. Once she gets past this and can see the soft side of Sayyam in sure we will get some romance! Can't wait. Thanks for this, it will keep us going until we see some romance on screen.

Originally posted by: divyaak123

this was ...so beautifully written...!!!!!!!!!!

just luved...it..aa lot...

i just love kriyam...waiting 4 their love story 2 start...

Originally posted by: nasreeta

Naaabs! OMG girl what a masterpiece you've written. 👏 Thanks you so much Naz! That is a big compliment 😃

I can't keep a hold of my emotions! 😭 It's just so perfect! Trust me i was as much emotional as you were while writing it! So many feels...

The way you captured the inner turmoil our Kriyam are going through & that moment of realisation that they actually HAVE each other, they are not alone anymore. I'm an emotional wreck right now!!!!! Same though! I just wanted to write something where Krishna saw Sayyam's different side you know. And both of them have been lonely so..make sense they realize that they aren't alone anymore! THEY HUGGED! *the feels are attacking* ❤️ Yuuuzz I had to make them Hug..because i have been wanting to see them do that in the show. The feels are too real right now..i get you boo i get you!

I was hoping for them to kiss but then decided I'm actually too young and unmarried to die. 😆 Trust me I am too young and unmarried to die either...plus I would have to write it..imagine..that OS would never even be posted because the writer mysteriously died in between writing the kiss scene *blush*

The dialogues were just on point SUPERB! Like literally was imagining Karan & Srishti saying those lines. Makes so much sense and so in character. That was the hard part, keeping them in character cause Sayyam is usually so..rude and sassy..so had to make it appropriate..Krishna is neither an abla naari and nor a very rude girl..so had to mantain the balance. I LOVE IT!!! And I agree with Mads, the standout line for me was also when Krishna explained the true meaning on loneliness. So deep & heartfelt. 👏 I am glad both of you liked that line soo much. It's one of my fav's too! Heheh. Didn't know a better way to explain what actually being alone feels like.

I never wanted it to end! You've seriously made my day sweetie. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this & share it with us. PLEASE WRITE MORE. 😃 ❤️ Awww thank you for this amazing comment Naz. Seriously it means a lot to me. And I will continue to write more. They are slowly becoming an addiction 😃 Love ya! 🤗

Originally posted by: zannatulferdous

okk i can't find words what to say bt i have to say one thing u're amazing👏hats off to u❤️

u should be the writer of ssel sachme😊each & every line was perfect..kriyam hug ❤️😳&the line krishna said Kyunki akele woh nahi hota jisske pass koi nahi hota akele toh woh insaan hota hai jis ke as pass log hote hue bhi koi nahi hota & last main tiger😃i wish ssel me ye hota..btw superbb os..loved it waiting for another part..❤️❤️