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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
well done,
at least you show your anger with your writing scale and put some sensible scene and storyline which made us some releve .
thank you for New Story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet cherry

Simply amazing, the actual story of show was doing my heading, I prefer ur story so much I'm glad gauri got a slap, now I wish suhani mum slap gauri and that nasty evil dadi, I would so love that.
Continue soon

I guess you are ManEet fan😃hai and thanks for your review.I was pulling my hair off and was aghast after the episode..Its just the frustration which made me write this story😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinseen

well done,

at least you show your anger with your writing scale and put some sensible scene and storyline which made us some releve .
thank you for New Story

I was to shoot them as I was very hysterical and frantic after the episode..😡I would show more anger and a revengeful Srivatsav's..Wait for it😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written sri i can clearly see ur frustration through the words. How i wish to happen like this but no we didn't get 10% of this also. We can only get what we want in ffs only. Thanks sri very nicely written. please continue want to see yuvraj's after math reaction. what is he going to do and how is he going to bring her back.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suhani and Bhavna was worried of their mother whose condition worsened as she developed temperature and was stubborn not to have a check up saying Until I see my husband in front of my eyes I wont have any food or visit doctor .So please do leave me alone..They try to convince but all goes in vain..The sister descend quietly and discuss of when they will bring their father back home..Suhani was quizzical whether Dadi will withdraw the case after the showdown today and shared the same with her sister..Bhavna replies determined If not lets file a case on Gauri..Suhani was in denial mode defended that she was a child after all and mentally unstable too..Bhavna was firm in her stand Why not she be accused..Let she be a child or whomsoever. She is the only reason behind our misery and why do you pity on her..Have you lost it Suhani.How can you have any love left for her..Have you forgotten or neglect the fact that she accused you and threw tantrums on you unbiased..How could you pity the girl..She keeps mum being lost her defense...She thinks over it once not being satisfied with Bhavna's decision..She drags Dhii..But think on ..She is just a child now and did this act driven by Dadi's advise..So..Bhavna cuts in the middle.Just stop showering your love..I cant take it any more..Enough of the suffering and insults daily we face..And the girl whom you loved the most has stabbed you and how can you have pity for her...Suhani was stunned by her sisters anger and determination as she had watched only her calm and composed figure althrough her life and she was the rebellious among the two..She gave in as she felt there is no purpose of contending any more.She says dhi teek hai..Lets discuss the remaining in the morning as she was feeling sleepy and bids good night..

Dadi who was watching the scene in yuvraj's room was churning her mind for her next move and walked towards his room when Gauri runs to her and pleads her to convince her viyu..Dadi assures that she will taking her to Yuvraj..She thunders into the room shouting Yuvraj tum us ladki ke liye apne behan ko itna arab sharab bola aur tappad mara..Us ladki ne apne sare hade par kar rahi thi aur tum chup rahi..Us ladki ne hamari parivar ko toda hai or tumhari behen ki is halat ki ek akeli waje hai..Yuvraj was infuriated and his anger crossed all the limits..Toh Gauri ne jo kiya wo sahi thi..Uski papa ke upar itni gatiya ilzam jo lagayi wo bilkul teek hai..Suhani ko kuch kari koti sunayi wo teek hai jab wo hi akeli waja thi iske yahan is ghar me wapas ane ki..Kya Dadi bolti kyu nahi..Jawab nahi na..Abhi ap chup kyu hai..Boliye na..He shakes her up ...Kya jawab nahi hai apke pas..Yuvraj ab mujse bhi badtameezi karogi who bhi us ladki ki waje se..Woh jis din se is ghar mein gusi hai tab se lekar aaj tak hamari chain khoyi hai..Woh is ghar ke liye ek kala saya hai..Enough Dadi..Enough..You wont utter any more ill words for my wife..Aur kya yek ladki who ladki laga rahi hai ap..Uski nam Suhani hai..Suhani Yuvraj Birla hai aur aapko sunai de rahi hai..Iske bad meine ek shabd uske khilaf suna mujhe pata nahi mein kya karongi.Aur kya kaha apne who is ghar ke liye kala saya hai..Iss ghar ki kala saya aap hai Dadi aap..She was frantical Yuvraj,...Kya galat kaha meine..Kar roz koyi nayi tarika doondti ko Suhani ko besart karne ki or tamasha kada kar leti ho apki swart ke liye..Apne yahi chahti thin a who is ghar se chali jayein toh aaj apko party karni chiye jo apki kwahish poori jo hui hai..Woh is ghar aur muje chodte chali gayi..chali gayi(breaking)..Kya boli thi uski waja se meri behen hi is halat hui hai..Jab sach ye hai ki Gauri ki waja se uski poori parivar ki zindagi daav pe hai yahan tak ki uski papa ko isne majbbor kiya ki khudkhushi kar lein..Aur aap bol rahi ho ye nadan hai aur ek bachi hai..Ye bachi hoti toh isse pata nahi hota ki kaise dushmani nikalna hai aur kaise savdani se apni plan ko execute karni hai..Aap maaf kijiye mujhe mein isko maaf nahi kar sakti..She tries Lekin Beta..Lekin wekin kuch nhi..Aur kan kolkar suniye ab aap mere sath chaleg aur case wapas lengi warna samaj lijiye ki apko bhi mein maf nahi karongi..Jo bhi kehna mein bol liya..Ab apki marzi..And shows the way out I will be expecting you in car within 15 minutes..So please..Dadi was aghast by yuvraj's outburst as she thought she would succeed in convincing him..She takes Gauri to her room thinking of her next step..Yuvraj takes Dadi to police station and make her withdraw the case which she was reluctant to..He drops her and goes on a long drive to breathe some fresh air..

Suhani had been wandering about in her room still confused with what can be done next if case is not been withdrawn..Her thoughts were broken when Sharad messages that Dadi has withdrawn the case..She was happy on it and was lost in her thought about the show that happened the day in BH..She didn't expect in her wildest dreams that her sister would turn aggressive n rebellious rising a voice for her..Her thoughts were disturbed when she thinks of Yuvraj as she could not believe yet he insulted her when he knows she never takes a stand without being assured that her intutions were right..She was baffle when he had yelled hysterically at her and did not turn to her even after Gauri has confessed..She was wondering why he hadn't stopped her from leaving..Was he so upset with her that he not even apologized for insulting her after knowing she was correct..She lies down on her bend and cries not being able to bear gauri's betrayal and his rude behavior..Gauris taunts were ringing in her ears constantly and she thought where she went wrong in loving her .She was guilty that she had hurt Gauri to such extent that forced her to do such an act..She stood near the window as the mental agony seeped into her slowly which was eating her conscience..She makes herself responsible for her fathers state..The night was silent with her room still having an eerie silence filled around..She could not think any more and her turbulent mind had gone strangely vacant being tired of the pressure she took in..She forced her to sleep but her mind was in denial to allow her even have a nap..She sat still in her bed middle of the night..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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FULL OF SPEED YOU GO ON,
really very nicely you write every emotion ,
and fully energetic part ,
afterall we all forstate to CV's
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love the update especially how yuvraj have shouted at his dadi, I simply can't stand her, she is the most nasty person, I would love for dadi to be kick out nd suffer with her two followers.
Continue soon
Look forward to read the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet cherry

Love the update especially how yuvraj have shouted at his dadi, I simply can't stand her, she is the most nasty person, I would love for dadi to be kick out nd suffer with her two followers.
Continue soon
Look forward to read the next part

Thank u😆Even I want him to be hysterical with his age old obsession dadi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well written Sri...👏👏
I really expect this type of reaction from Yuvi in show bt cv's diappointed...bt u made it true sri i loved so much the way u wrote how Yuvraj bash dadi...pls continue it's really awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunitha28

Well written Sri...👏👏

I really expect this type of reaction from Yuvi in show bt cv's diappointed...bt u made it true sri i loved so much the way u wrote how Yuvraj bash dadi...pls continue it's really awesome

Thank u mam😆Show mein we got a big tullu..He was clam n polite to psych🤢

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