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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all the parts one in a go! Awesome story!
Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maniac_

Amzing update mam... I love to see scenes where yuvi's mental state is portrayed nd u did it in a beautiful way.. Loved the convo.. 👏 I know we would never get such deep scenes in the show bt thnx to all the FF writers we get to see what we want..

Thnq so much mam ur a very good writer... Waiting for the next update..😳


Thanks Naina. I want to see that so badly too. But really i wish they don't disappoint us. Because is the right time show the seperation. Thanks naina i am just an ok writer. There are really excellent writers on SSEL form. If I can come close to 1% of them also it's a huge achievement. Really appreciate all of your comments.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Navi16

Nice update ... 👍🏼


Thanks Aman
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blue_Mist

awesome dr...no words...👏 i could see the expressions yuvraj has in these scenes...i loved yuvi-sharad convo ...plzz update soon 😳


Thanks Ridhi. I am craving to see this on the show. Yuvraj and his expression at these emotion scene will be mind blowing. Sahil is an excellent actor to enact such scene. He is very good at everything but when it comes to Show the romance and fear of losing parts he just nails.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
nice to read yuvraj's point of view ,
hows feeling and share with sharad
short but complete ,

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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Part 5
Hope u like it.


The cab stopped at Allahabad Police Station. Suhani got out and told the driver to wait and went inside. There was already Mr. Gupta was present with some papers. Suhani went up to him and asked whether the release papers are issued or not. Mr Gupta said yes we have got the papers. I had to go personally to the Magistrate and showed the video proof and the written proof to him and after reviewing he signed the papers. Suhani saw them and felt a relief and was waiting for her dad to come out. Pankaj came out and took all his belongings with so much pain that Suhani realized that it is going to be a challenge for her now to just to make him smile and to bring back his all happiness and honor. But she was very determine. Suhani went up to him and hugged him and said "papa humne kardiya. Aapko bekasoor sabit kardiya papa. Asli mujrim milgaya" Aab apko kisike samne sir jookaneki zaroot nahi hai. I promise papa ki mai apko pehele jaisi izat, man aur saman saoor dilwadungi.
Aab chaliye mom wait karahe hai. Pankaj still with a strong grief followed Suhani.

Both sat in the cab and suhani told the address of her home. Lata was walking back and forth with worried face. She was thinking what might have happened, she just left in the morning saying she will bring pankaj ji in the evening. Its already 6:30 and still she is not here and she is not picking up the phone. I had to call Bhavana and ask about it and she went to call bhavana and door bell rang. She went running to the door and opened it. It was Pankaj and Suhani. Lata's eyes got wet seeing pankaj it was a relief for her to see him back but not to pankaj. Suhani took her dad inside and made him sit and gave some water to him and sat beside him.

Papa mai aaj bahoot kush hoo. aap innocent prove hogaya. Mujhe aap per pehele bhi yakin tha aur hamesha rehega. Per aap thoda himat dikana padega apne apko
sambalnekeliye. Aur aaj mai ek promise chati hu. Aap mujhe aur mummy ko promise kijiye ki aap aaj ke baad kabhi bi apne apko nuksan nahi pouchayenge.

Pankaj promised her and lata that he will never take that kind of a step in future. But still back in mind he had a fear that how he will face the world. His thoughts broke when lata brought coffee to both suhani and pankaj. Suhani asked for samosa. Pankaj asked when did u started eating samosa again. I thought u left it for Yuvraj. Suhani said yah i did but today i am feeling like eating. Mom can u make some she asked. After all this all of a sudden Pankaj asked about the culprit. Suhani was not in a mood to talk about it she just brushed it off saying will talk about it later.

Back in Birla House Bhavana was thinking about what all happened at the Birla House. She remember what all dadi said about her and her sister. She was not able breathe remembering those harsh words dadi said. She told bhavana and sharad to live the house though before the truth was reveled but it was haunting her since then. Sharad came inside when golu was almost about to fall. He hold him and went and asked bhavana where she is been lost. Bhavana asks Sharad can't we move out of this place and stay somewhere else.

Precap suhani's job search and sharad sharing the news of moving out with birla boys
Edited by sumabkb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
The precap you had written is the most wanted..Please do it ..I am fed up with the show..Suhani should never easily forgive birlas and make them go through the same pain that her family went through..Dont spare yuvraj too..What job will she be in..I am eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Nice update Suma...& in precap those two points u mentioned very intresting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great one show mai bhi aisa hona chahiye but iss show ke CVS se hum ye hope nahi karsakte anyway update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Loved it, suma. I am so looking forward to the next part.

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