My first ever ff on Yuvani

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello all i am attempting my first ever ff on Yuvani. I hope u guys like it. This occurd me after seeing the new olv where Gauri has been proved the culprit. So here it goes and please bare with me and my English which is horrible and forgive if there is any mistakes.


Can it really be possible? The girl whom i met at Suhagi who was so innocent and child at heart can be this harmful? Am i really thinking too much on this matter that i am suspecting every one who comes across me? She sat for a while looking at the roof and remembered all the events that took place the day Gauri entered the house. Everybody was against her but me. I have supported her in every aspects from teaching how to talk to how give back. But today she was the one to blame my dad for the horrible act which i couldn't even think of. She went near the table and searched for something without knowing what she is even searching for. She found the phone the one she got at Birla House. She tried to switch on the phone but was out of charge. She put it to charge and went to see her mom. Her mom was sleeping peacefully since Suhani promised that she will prove her dad innocent by tomorrow. Tears rolled down she wiped it and looked her once again and went near her and put the blanket on and switch off the side table lamp and went to kitchen to drink water. She slowly switch off the light and checked the main door once again and came back to her room. By now the phone was charged about 20%. She thought let it charge a bit more and thought of calling Yuvraj.

Yuvraj was at the dinning table with the rest of the family. Everybody was busy enjoying the food that Bhavana made. He glanced once at Gauri who was serving Adi his favorite mushroom curry and remembered the day she was yelling at Ramesh for not getting Mushroom for him. He had a small smile on his face thinking how childish she is and how much she is fond of Adi. He looked at the chair next to him which was empty and took a deep sigh. Today everybody was taking care of their partners nobody was even bothered to ask yuvraj. His eyes got wet thinking about suhani who was always there next to him serving him his favorite food. At that time his phone rang and saw It was from Suhani and got up without eating and went to his room.

"Hello Suhani" What's the matter is everything ok?

"Haan Sab teek hai bus tujse baat karne kha mann kiya"

There was a long silence from Yuvraj side.

"Yuvraj" kya hua? kuch bologe"

"Suhani kya mai todi dhere aa sakta hu kya?"

"is waqt kyu yuvraj kal mai hi aaungi na"

No, just like that, I thought of seeing u. its fine I will see u tomorrow.

"ok Yuvraj good night"

"Suhani".. I...Miss you.. please come back soon.

"Hmmm ok Yuvraj mai kal milti hu". She hung up the phone. " I miss you too Yuvraj"

She went up to the table saw the phone was charged more than 50% so she pick it up and sat on the bed with some pillow behind her for support. She switched it on and was just browsing and thought of seeing the photo's but their was none. She thought whose phone this could be. She noticed there was a video on it. Her eyes got filled with tears seeing the video. She couldn't believe what she was seeing. She started weeping, this couldn't have happen. How is this possible? No i am not believing it.

"ye kaise ho sakta hai" Per kya ye video jhoot bol sakta hai kya. Per mai kaise manlu. mera mann nahi manraha hai. If this is true then i won't spare anybody.

She thought tomorrow is a big day for me and everybody involved in this matter. No matter what I am going to expose that person. I don't care what everybody thinks. But i will make sure my dad is released from jail tomorrow. Now i got this evidence and i will prove my dad innocent. All of sudden she felt more confident and strong.

In the morning she got ready quickly and called somebody and told to come to Birla House. Her mom came and asked. What is it Suhani? Whom were you talking too and why did u call them to Birla House? Suhani just gave her a smile and said mom don't worry papa will be home by evening and left to Birla House.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai mam..Wonderful effort😃I wish I could get an update soon.give the heck for that psych and add what we wished..Psych turning violent and pouncing on Suhani
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Hai mam..Wonderful effort😃I wish I could get an update soon.give the heck for that psych and add what we wished..Psych turning violent and pouncing on Suhani


Thanks sri glad u liked it. I will see sri may be that can come true or even a better one but definitely some kind of separation will be their I promise
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice start mam... Waiting for the next update.. Hopefully here we can see suhani bashing the real culprit left, right nd center..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start...well written..!!
Plz update soon...eager to knw the culprit..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start mam, yuvi dinning n thinking ant her... Well wriiten mam..
Sry 4 late reply..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good job, suma. And I can read 3 at a go! New wrriters always welcome. May you do many more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anita_m

Good job, suma. And I can read 3 at a go! New wrriters always welcome. May you do many more.


Thank you so much Anita. It's means a lot me and that too from an excellent writer.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anita_m

Good job, suma. And I can read 3 at a go! New wrriters always welcome. May you do many more.

same thoughts
now its better to read FF on forum and enjoy the best time
show mein her dafa kuch na kuch ghare bhare ho hi jati hia
please compile all the parts
well written👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinseen

same thoughts
now its better to read FF on forum and enjoy the best time
show mein her dafa kuch na kuch ghare bhare ho hi jati hia
please compile all the parts
well written👏


Thanks Shinseen. Sorry I don't know you name. you r absolutely right. We have to fulfill our dreams through ff's only.

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