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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continued...

Its evening... Suhani goes to the market to shop some new dresses for herself... She feels tired comes to a garden and sits...She keeps those bags besides her... Talks to herself-... am I doing right???... Humne ye decision toh le liya k hum meditation centre join karenge... par kya sach mein ye sahi sabit hoga...will it prove right for me???... But what if not???... Agar ye sab karke bhi kuch yaad na aaye toh??... Her eyes got moist... She recalls her family...Mummy, papa, Bhavna di...They all are so close and hold an important place in my life... They all are with me...But... Do I have met some more people in this last one year???... Who too hold an important part of my life???... Who are those??... She closes her eyes... And misses those people... She sees Yuvraj...tears flow of her closed eyes... Kaun ho tum???...Her mind asks... Kya rishta hai tumhara hamare saath... Jo tum humein chain se jeene bhi nahi dete...??...kyu baar baar aise humare aankho k samne aate ho..???... Why do you always come in my mind???... What relationship we both share??... She opens her eyes and sees a married couple a bit romancing each other... Husband getting irritated with his wife...wife is convincing her husband romantically... Suhani laughs at them...and connects herself to that woman... says... How similar our behaviour is...Agar hum bhi married hote toh.. Even I would have troubled my husband in the same manner and later on convinced him with love... She decides to leave...
...Yuvraj is in the living room... He checks his call log...and reads his last call with Suhani... Y- its almost 3 months you are away from me... I can't express how I have passed these days without you...There you have all your loved and close with you... But here...I have no one with me... to share my feelings... Don't know when you will come back to my house... But please... Main tumse request karta hoon k tum mere paas jaldi aao... I am waiting desperately for your return to Me... We both are incomplete without each other...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short n sweet..esp yuvi's thot..tfs..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's simple & superb prathamesh...👏👏
Thank u...😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you and you both welcome..!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Luvly...thanx 4 posting it,waiting what will happen next 😳
Edited by shadow18 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short and Sweet update dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its a bit late😆But cute..Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnq so much for updating prathamesh... Amazing part although it's short bt still so cute esp Suhani's introspection...👏. Hoping for the new long update soon..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maniac_

Thnq so much for updating prathamesh... Amazing part although it's short bt still so cute esp Suhani's introspection...👏. Hoping for the new long update soon..😳


Welcome maniac. ... I will try to post a long update next time...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short & sweet ... 👍🏼 thanks for this beautiful ff ...Tfs ...plzzz update soon ...

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