YUVANI SS: BEYOND THEIR PASSIONATE LOVE - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

awesomw update i had read your story much before n latest part was awesome..memory loss track👏



again a big thanks yaar ... hope enjoying this one 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Navi16

Plzz update next part soon...



updating today 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thankyou 😳 😃 😉
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Chapter -5
Same scenes
Yuvraj to himself impressive...
Then suddenly he's phn rong it's from Dadi... he took a deep breath and picked the call...
Dadi : Yuvraj beta tum kanha ho?? aye nhi ab tak... Sab theek hai na, tum theek ho na ...
Yuvraj dosn't reapply... again Dadi asked ""beta kuch bol kyun nhi rahe ho""
This time Yuvraj speekup
""Aapko Jyada stresses lene ki koi zarurat nhi hai.. main Apna khyaal khud rakh Sakta hoon"" and he cut call...
Dadi to herself ""kab tak naraz rahoge beta humse tumhari yeh narazgi Hume palpal ghut ghut ke marti hai..."" and tears felling down her eyes ** ( who knows it's true or ya her another darty deeds)

Otherside Yuvraj ""aap ne jo kuch bhi kiya tha wo shayad mafi ke bhi layak nhi hai... Kuyn aisa hota hai Jin par hum sabse jyada thrust karte hai Dhaka bhi wohi sabse pehle dete hai""
Suddenly a voice come behind him...
""If your family drama is finished them we will start our meeting""
Yuvraj : yes sure...
And go in to the cabin of Suhana...
Suhana set first and then Yuvraj...
Suhana speekup ""so Mr.Birla how can I help you??""
Yuvraj : Actually we Birla always present something new in market... for our new product we need a freash face and my friend *** suggest me your name for our new freash face... Maine personally Apna background check kiya hai..or aapne bhut km time me hi bhut badi kamyabi basil ki has...
Suhana : I know waise Maine bhi a apka background personally check kiya hai... last kuch salon se a apka business bhut hi ghate me chal raha tha... and kuch police case bhi huge they... Khair woh baat to an purani has... Lekin Apke is new project ka bhi hal aapke pichle kuch project jaisa hua toh??? Or aapko ad at hogi Hearne ki but mujhe mere name pe koi dag nhi chahiye!!!
Yuvraj : don't worry main aapke guaranty deta hoon ke he project successful rahega...
Suhana : really but agar koi problem huyi tb aap kyaa krenge??
Yuvraj : I know is bar koi bhi problem nhi ho sakti hai... or agar yeh project successful rha to aapke liye bhi golden chance bn sakta hai ... a age aapke future ke liye...
Suhana ; aap kuch Jyada hi confidence nhi lag rahe..I mean aap itna sure kaise ho skate hai..
Yuvraj : maybe is bar met a lady luck mere sath ho!!!
Suhana : what you mean??
Yuvraj : nothing !!! So deal done...
Suhana : okk then deal done.. tell me the date..
Yuvraj : main aapko sari informations mail kr dunga...
(And he leav )
Suhana looking him surprisingly "" koi itna confident kaise ho sakta hai..Kya main sahi kiya uska proposal no yes krke??? (first time she has doubt for her decision)
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Meanwhile. ...
Yuvraj looking a file... last night he called someone and order him to checked someone background and after few hours... the call him back.
Men : hello Yuvraj sir aap ne jo kaam diya tha mujhe who maine kar diya hai sari information Ek file me collect kr di hai..
""Yuvraj : thankyou so much ...""
Now he ready to open the file..
""Suhani ab Sara sach mere Samne hai ab koi confusion nhi hai yeh project to bas ek bhana hai ab mujhe har halat me Tumhari wo yaadein wapas lani ho.. main aka tak Zindagi ke sabse bade dard se guzar raha hoon. Or tum Sab kuch kaise bhool sakti ho mujhe tumhe sab kuch yaad dilana hai take mujhe meri Suhani wapas mil sake "" tears felling down in he's eyes he wiped it and smiled. ...


Next day in Allahbad..
Birla house..
Maa still on her bed after Suhani leav Birla family maa has a mental attack and she surviving for her life... itne bade attack ke baad bhi unhe kuch nhi hua because she know Ek na ek din unki babu kam beti zaroor wasps aayegi or issi ummed me wo aaj bhi saaein le rahi hai... or unhe pura bharosa hai ke wo wapis zaroor aayegi... she got up from the bed and come to a family picture... she look at the picture quietly...and feeling some would-be happened but kya ????
Tabhi Yuvraj As jata hai... and put he's hand on ma's shoulder. . .maa turned ...
Maa : Yuvraj tu aa gays beta (with smiling face)
Yuvraj : hana ma
And quickly hugged ma tightly

T.B.C.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one smriya.. It'd be interesting to see yuvraj striving hard to get suhani back.. Update soon...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love this determined Yuvraj n his onging to get back Suhani..Great going dear👍🏼👍🏼
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Hiii thanks buddies for all you comments and such a good response... here's the another chapter hope you guyzz will enjoy this... and give your feedback .love**Piya. Chapter : 6 He hugged maa tightly...Mas with smiling face ; Yuvraj tu gaya beta... Kaisi rahi Teri meeting!!! Yuvraj : wo sab Chodiye maa mujhe aapko kuch btana hai kuch aisa jise sun kr aap khushi se pagal ho jayengi... Maa: haan beta pehale bta toh ke baat kyaa hai...waise bhut dino baad tere chehre par yeh khushi dekhi hai.. Yuvraj : haam maa sahi kaha aapne or aap sunengi to aap bhi Kushi se pagal ho jaengi... Mas surprisingly :Asia kyaa hua hai. Yuvraj : nhi maa main aapko btaunga nhi infect dikhaunga balks milwaunga... Maa : aisa kya dikhaunga..or kisse milwayega tu?? Yuvraj : bas maa bas thoda sa or wait kijiye fir hum Sabki Zindagi ka adhoora pan khatam ho aayega!!!"" Maa : jaisi Teri marzi...beta"" ************************************************* . .Evening times in Mumbai. . A father daughter are arguing Girl : yeh sab kyaa hai dad... kabhi kabhi aapka behaviour mujhe bhut ajeeb lagta hai.. aap aise kaise kisi bhi stranger ko humare bare me bta sakte hai...aak jal aapko samjhna mere liye bhut difficult hota ja rha hai...She closed the door of her room hardly Father : Suhana meri baat to Suno beta.. He trying to stand on he's wheelchair but couldn't.. And he started thinking about was what happened.. why Suhana boiling in anger... ~~~Flashback~~~ A man knocking door after 3 -4 time door opened he told that servant he's name and ..he entered in the house... servant ""sir koi aap se milna chahta hai... Old Men : kon hai woh bhi itni raat meHe look at he's wrist watch it's showing 1:30 Am...Men comes inside ""sir I'm Yuvraj Birla kyaa aapse aapki life ke 20 minutes maang sakta hoon"" Old men: butt kon Yuvraj??? Aap hai kon or kyaa chahte hai...!! Yuvraj come to him ,, set beside the chair near by him...""Aap mujhe nhi jante par shayd main kuch aisa janta hoon jisse aap bhi nhi jante hai... Old men: matlab main samjhna nhi!!With surprised face Yuvraj: main aapse Suhana ke bare me kuch Janna chahta hoon... Old men: Suhana!!! Meri beti hai uske bare me aap kyaa janna chahte ho?? Yuvraj : main aapki ki bet I ka Patti hoon.. (he throw out a picture from he's pocket and showing it to Mr. kapoor it marriage picture of he's and Suhani)Suhana father shocked ""Husband""???? Us be shaadi kab kar li??? Or mujhe pasta bhi nhi.. .Yuvraj : aap galat samjh rahe hai.. meri shaadi Suhana se nhi balki Suhani se huyi thi.Again he shocked : Suhana! ! Suhani! ! Yeh sab kyaa kah rahe hai aap?? Yuvraj : pehle aap meri puri baat suniye!! Actually meri shaadi 6saal pehle Suhani se huyi thi.. jo aaj aapki beti Suhana hai!! Bas aap mujhe itna bta dijiye ke exactly hua kyaa tha..?? ""Suhani Suhana kaise???He's words cut by Mr.Kapoor""Yuvraj : sir bas main bhi wohi janna chahta hoon... main janta hoon Suhana hi Suhani hai I can feel her presents...around me... Mr. Kapoor : ek sach Ye hai ke Suhana meri beti hai to wonhi dusra sach yeh bhi hai ke wo meri apni beti nhi hai!!! (He's eyes becomes wet...)Par mere liye to woh meri aulad se badkar knhi hai...we adopted her i mean meri wife jo ab is duniya me nhi hai...or maine... kuch patch saal pehle main or wife Allahbad ke apne farmhouse gaye the chuttiya bitane.. wonhi pe humse bhut badi galti ho gayi thi... or humari gadi se kisi ka accident ho gaya tha.. Yuvraj : if I'm not wrong to who Suhani thi... (cut him between) Mr.kapoor : haan!! Hume kuch samjh nhi aya ke woh kon hai?? kanha se aayi?? Use treatment ki zarurat thi isiliye Hm use apne saath Mumbai le aaye... humara background acha toh doctor be police ko inform karne ke pehle Suhana ka treatment kiya per uska koi fayda nhi hua. An tak wo apne pichali life ke bare me Sab kuch Bhool chuki thi... ..docter ne hi Hume suggestion diya k hum use apne sath rakhe kyun hume uske bare me kuch bhi pata tha toh kanha chood dete... kitne dino tak to wo chupchap hi rahi so Charlie Frito lash jaisi.. fir dhire dhire who moment kanre lagi bathein kanre lagi.. or Hume as her parents accept karne lagi... (a million dollars smile covered he's face) Yuvraj : but uska naam ... Mr. Kapoor : Shanyla humesha se chahti thi ke humare Bache ho or apni beti ka nam hum Suhana rakhe but we are not perfect for being Mother and fatherPer jab Hume Suhana Mili to jisse humari duniya hi puri ho gayi. .. hmne use apni beti bnaya or uske bhi beti hone ka jar farz nibhaya... bhut jam time me hum so perfect family ban Gaye...per bhagwan ko yeh manzoor nhi tha. Or unhone meri shnayla ko mujhse cheen liya... About Suhana ke alpaca mera is duniya me or koi bhi nhi hai... Yuvraj smiling and said... Yuvraj : mujhe maaf kar dijiye par main apni Zindagi aapse manga chahta hoon... Mr. Kapoor : main samjhna nhi... Yuvraj : main hi wo insan jiski wajah se unfortunately maybe fortunately aapki family puri huyi...Par aapki Suhana meri patni hai... or aaj main apni galti sudharna chahta hoon main Suhana ki yaddash wapas Lana chahta hoon use yard Solana chahta hoon me who meri Suhani hai... Mr. Kapoor : sorry to say this beta par an aisa ho na namumkin hai... Agar uske yaddash wapas hi Lana possible hota to hum bhi apni puri koshish karte par docter ne kaha tha agar hum us par jyada pressure dalenge to ho sakta hai wo ... kabhi normal hi na ho paye or usse uske coma me bhi Jane ka khatra tha... Yuvraj : but sir who meri Suhani!! Meri Suhani meri bivi... or main use wapas le Jana chahta hoon and I'm sure jab woh apne char jayegi to use apni past life ke bare me zaroor kuch yaar aayega... Mr. Kapoor : agar tum chahte ho ke use uski past life ke bare me Sab yaad aa jaye to main tumhe nhi rokunga... bas meri ek request hai... (Apne do no hath Jod ke) meri Suhana ko mujhse door mat karna bas.. Shanayla or baad wo akeli is duniya me meri apni apni hai... uske Siva mera is duniya me koi nhi hai... Yuvraj grabbed he's hand and said peacefully... Yuvraj : kisi apne ko khone dard main bhi janta hoon isiliye kuch bhi karne se pehle aapse permission lene aya hoon... I hope aap mujhe samjhenge... (wo Khadr ho ke Jane lagta hai tabhi Mr.kapoor use writs se rock lets hai) Mr.kapoor : meri beti to mujhse door nhi hogi na... Yuvraj : kabhi nhi... I promise wo aapko kabhi nhi bhoolegi chahe bhale hi uski yaddash wapis aa jaye.. Mr. Kapoor : thankyou beta par tum kroge kya??? Yuvraj : woh to abhi mujhe bhi nhi pata bas is baat jo bhi yoga bas Dil se hoga... Both smiled And he leaves ~~Flashback End~~ Mr. Kapoor : I'm sorry beta par ab waqt aa gya hai.. no galti hmne ki thi use sudharna ka agar us din hum tumhe apne sath Mumbai nhi late to shayad tum aaj apne real family or apne pati ke pas hoti... mujhe maaf karo beta ...(in low voice) thanks for reading sorry for spelling mistakes... give your precious feedback...
Edited by smriya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow really nice story please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one...👏,,,,👍🏼,,,,tfs...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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realy realy very nice update,
yuvraj knows everything and come to solve them.
eagerly waiting for next part

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