FF:AFTER THE RETURN FROM PRISON CHAPTER 5 UPDATED ON PG:4

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All the problems are sorted now.Yuvraj through Suhani's superwomen efforts is released from prison and Dadi overwhelms with joy and declares a party for Yuvraj and accounces Rohan as the chief guest.Each and every soul in the Birla house including our Snoopy are getting ready for the party but Yuvraj birla is lost in his own thoughts because tomorrow was a special day in his life it was not for the sake of the party but it is his 1st year wedding anniversary.The relationship which he had been forced to take in like the sour medicine or even poison is now celebrating it's 1st yr birthday.But Yuvraj no more had that paticular thought he had now realised how he has got habitual with her and found a great friend in her hence he no longer wants to loose her.As a result he plans a suprise for his wife on their anniversary and eagerly waits for the moon to set and the sun to dawn.Alarm tick tock rings in yuvi's room it is 6 o clock he immediately with his gift rushes to ma's room but Suhani has vanished from there, his heart nearly missed a beat and he then rushed to their meeting spot the garden where he found Suhani with her luggage with tears rolling down her cheeks and Rohan who has been insisted by Dadi to stay at the Birla's house was standing beside her maintaining a distance and trying to pacify her.
If u guys like it i will continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds great 😃
Please continue 😃
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Not start can't wait to read more please continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh please do continue. Let's give the cvs lots of hints about what we want.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u guys for the comments .I will continue soon.But keep expressing ur own perspectives regarding my story.Thank u soo much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is great! U gave a nice start!!
Do continue soon!
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Nice start 👏 .plz continue
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Thank u soo much guys for ur comments.Now let me move on to my next chapter.
Yuvraj couldn't believe his eyes he was completely frozen at that moment .He even thought that it would be his ridiculous nightmare but it was not as such, the girl who he imagined to be ONLY HIS BESTIE IN THE WORLD as he was selfish when it comes to her but she is ready to leave him now and stopped by a third person who was out of their world.
Rohan tried his best to convince her but he couldn't, the way he cracked jokes and the way he rolled his eyeballs would make any girl on this world to laugh but Suhani was not normal but she was super sensitive.As Rohan continued his funny stuff,tears just rolled from Suhani's eyes like pearls.Yuvraj was standing on the other side was not able to attend her anymore. Hence he walked few steps ahead and called her name both Rohan and Suhani turned towards him.Rohan immediately replied in a sarcastical tone that Prince charming, What was the matter? but Yuvi roared like a lion and said that is none of ur business but Rohan was non stop in his conversation and asked him that whether he wants to talk with MOTHER INDIA.Yuvi in an angry mood questioned him that how he would refer to his wife as MOTHER INDIA,if she becomes a mother to all how she will be his wife and requests Rohan will he leave some privacy for a husband and wife and Rohan's face immediately turns pale and he leaves the place with sorrow.Now Suhani replied,What is the issue?Yuvi immediately exclaimed that he was not there to create any catastrophe and says that he has no right to make her stay with him but for his mom's who is returning home today, so he requested her to stay for another one day at his house.Suhani who was loveable towards his mom accepted it.Eventhough Yuvi made Suhani accept his deal but he wanted carpedium in his life he wants to sieze that particular day of their anniversary his thoughts extended to a metaphsical world.Ma returned and greeted them and Dadi in the party announced that she has found a new bride for her grandson and asked Suhani to make the preparations for shaadi,Everyone was shocked but Suhani who still loved Yuvi accepted Dadi's offer and decided to stay at birla house until his marriage.PRECAP:Suhani was watering the plants in the garden and Rohan is staring at Suhani and Yuvraj who comes there with Snoopy throws fire balls on Rohan through his eyes.
-TO BE CONTINUED-
Edited by rerose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lol loved the ending and god another of Yuvraj's wedding that su has to do god help her stupidity I can image her arranging another wedding for her dost
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But this time u won't be disappointed with Suhani's works for his shaadi becz Rohan will make it interesting .Thank u for ur comments.

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