FF:AFTER THE RETURN FROM PRISON CHAPTER 5 UPDATED ON PG:4 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am back with my next chapter.Hope u guys enjoy.
Every soul in the Birla house was not resting in peace even the dangerous Ragmen was lost in a turmoil regarding Dadi's decision, they were not prior informed about that so they immediately rushed to BQ and asked about the new sadas of their family.Dadi didn't let the cat out of her bag and told them that it was a suprise and they have to wait and watch for it.Yuvraj birla's heart was bursting like a volcano and his face was just like an apple turned hot red.He started questioning himself, Why everyone are playing with his life?Is he a doll which does everything when given a key.His heart sank and he took his gift for suhani and broke it with a sudden force it was a glass painting with both of their images combined together and with a logo Happy wedding anniversary Jhansi ki rani.It felt down and a glass piece came with a force and hits Yuvraj's head,he screams in pain and Suhani immediately rushes to his room and started applying cream to him but it was not a proper aid for him so he took her hands in his it was soothing.His headache had disappeared into somewhere in the universe .Main tenu samjhawan...plays and he comes back to reality and recognizes it as his imagination.as he derived his senses, his head was aching as if it was been cut into mere pieces by his beloved wife,he slowly went to Ma's room and saw her sleeping then he returned back to his room, took their wedding photo and started staring at it when each time he saw her face some sort of thing made his dhill to suffer an enormous pain and tears rolled down ,he had not slept that night.Suhani too had not slept by now it is 2 o clock in the night she was not able to live a life without her husband becz he was her soulmate whom she had admired from top to bottom,his charm,looks,simile and saaf plans were tremendous but the most important thing was he was an achaa insaan but she consoled herself by saying that she is not fit for him and the new girl of Dadi's choice would be his better soulmate.It was morning as the Suraj raised above the Birla house and Suhani was busy in her kitchen work meanwhile Rohan entered the scene and asked Suhani that he wants to make dosti with her she didn't reply anything for a moment but after a few seconds started similing at him ,he immediately extends his hand towards Suhani and they both shook their hands,Sharad hears them and asks, Can i join with u people? from today i will call u guru, Is that so? Rohan replied and thanked him,Sharad again thanks him for saving his guru and now he has become his badhi guru.Then Rohan helped Suhani with her work and he made a big mess on the table Suhani immediately asks him to clean up otherwise Yuvi will show his saduness to him. Rohan began lecturing stating that the people who always wants to be clean are fools becz our body itself comprises of numerous bacteria so nothing can be done, he cracked jokes in such way that Suhani started laughing loud, Yuvraj who is at the edge of the kitchen getting angry on his jokes and laughter.It was a pleasant evening by now and Suhani is watering the plants and Rohan is just simply starring at her thinking about her life story and all her good qualities.Yuvi is playing catch with Snoopy,the ball falls out and Yuvi with Snoopy runs to the garden where he finds his belonging being snatched by someone else he threw fire balls through his eyes at Rohan and wanted to bash him to death for eyeing his wife.Before Yuvi could react to it, Suhani who is known for her talent of unsteady walk flirts and Rohan catches her.Yuvraj was broken into pieces, it felt as if he had reached his death point with a sort of guilt and grief. There was an eyelock between Rohani but Yuvraj nevertheless broke their eyelock by grabbing Suhani from his arms.He was about to talk with her but by that time Dadi's voice was heard and he went of with anger and jealousy,his heart has now felt it for the second time but for now he had a special attribute clinging to him,it was pssessiveness.Dadi announced that his fiancee is on the way and asks him to wait, Suhani and Rohan both come inside.After an hour a car arrives at the birla house ,a beautiful, good looking ,fair girl walks in the birla house.Dadi introduces the girl to the family as Miss.Rhema khanna, the CEO of Rhema industries and private limited everyone are suprised to see her and Yuvraj just kept his eyes out of her.PRECAP:The people in the Birla house are found playing musical hair and Rhema accidentally hits Suhani's leg and she falls into Rohan who is next to her and they roll together yuvraj is left in shock.
-TO BE CONTINUED-
Edited by rerose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I will update the next chapter after recieving comments from u people.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow nice FF...
Great concept..;
enjoying the jealous Yuvi...
Rohan seems fun,... interesting precap..
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great part 😃 Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do update, rerose. But unless Suhani is planning their own wedding, I will slap her silly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice updates wow Dadi found someone else for Yuvraj nice she treats him like a puppet and he doesn't do anything
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER-4
Her hair was black as ebonny wood,her lips was red as blood,her teeth was white as pearl,her face was like an angel from heaven and she was Rhema Khanna, no man in this earth not even in the universe would refuse to love her or accompany her but our Sadu was completely irked of her surrounding,he even regreted to look at her face,his complete attention was on Suhani and Rohan, he was not able to digest the fact that they both were standing together,he was constantly side eyeing their centemeter distance and thought of sending Rohan to some other place even to some other planet so that he would be away from his wife.Dadi then said ''Beta tum,Rhema beta ke pass time spend karthiyo"'Yuvi was trembling with fear as if Dadi had told him to jump into hell fire.Then with a lot of hesistance finally Yuvi accepted the offer and took her to the terrace .Rhema was an hyper active girl just as Suhani,she had a good heart it was competely shown off through the way she carries herself but the only contrast between them was Rhema concentrated more on her beauty,she was busy in her talk, she was crazy about him ,she was locked in his eyes and loved his charm but our Sadu was staring at some other one Suhaniii, she was playing in the garden with Snoopy and he said to himself ,How cute she is? Rhema finally concluded by saying bye and Yuvraj took her when they came back Dadi announced that tomorrow will be a short party that is a Sagaii for Yuvi and Rhema(I am competely fed up with the same setting of SSEL hence I am shifting to a new background setting) at the famous theme park in Allahabad.Yuvi was left in chaos and the Sun from the immense seashore dawned and a gave a smile.Yuvi just managed to escort from the party but Dadi called his name and Yuvraj hurried to her and all were dressed up in the Birla in a sadmood except Dadi and Ragmen with Rhema in the scene,Dadi made Yuvi and Rhema to sit in the same gaadi and Suhani was left over hence Rohan got away from the other car and asked Suhani to give him a lift. She was suprised and Rohan replied in her scooty Suhani nodded and they left the place and Yuvraj who was viewing this through the side mirror was speechless considering his wife's attitude, he blabbers to himself that whether she had completely avoided his existence in her life and he started driving the car. Yuvraj was completely lost in his own world thinking about what would be happening there, when he applied the brake he was not even able to imagine the speed breakers forcing of the streets that would create mere chaos and slapped himself.They all the reach the place and Dadi announced that they will play musical chair Yuvi was still upset he was not in a mood to play but at the juncture when he saw Rohan standing with Suhani holding her hands, Yuvraj immediately said to himself that, What a kind of guy is that lawyer,he must be given Mr.CONSPICIOUS for this talent of escaping from one place to another especially to my wife's presence.Yuvi then Grabbs Suhani's hand from Rohan with such a force and beats on Rohan's back and says come on guru let's go and the music is played by Dadi and in the 1st round Rags is out followed by others and finally Yuvi,Rhema,Suhani,Rohan were left over, when dhill wali girl friend plays... Rhema in super excitement accidently hurts Suhani's legs and she falls into Rohan who is next to her and they roll together. Yuvi face was now a bursted balloon which had lost all his Oxygen his Suhani.Yuvi regained his senses and Sharad rushed to them and immediately helped them and asked them whether they both were fine they nodded and the Saagi started, Dadi gave two diamond rings each to Yuvi and Rhema, when Rhema was about to make him wear the ring Yuvi fainted.Everybody was shocked and Suhani rushed to Yuvraj but Dadi stopped her and said just don't touch him .Suhani's eyes was filled with tears and Sharad spatters water on Yuvi face and he regains his conscious and requests Dadi to leave him alone for a few hours and he walked outside as he was walking down that street his memories crept on the things that happened today and Rohani's moments made his dhill weak and he was suffering with a pain that was his guilt and tears rushed just like rain from his eyes and Suhani was so disturbed hence she left the place to follow him while Rohan went after her.Yuvraj was walking on the road with his mind in a complete dream land and a lorry was fast approaching, Suhani screams at him. The lorry was fast approaching and a man falls, it was Rohan he had saved Yuvi from this terrible accident. Blood flows like a stream from Rohan's body and Yuvi and Suhani completely freeze like a statue.PRECAP:Yuvi asks Suhani Does she feels Rohan as the best patrner for her and whether she is in love with him?Suhani gives a tight slap to Yuvi.
Edited by rerose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u guys for all ur wonderful comments i have posted my chpt 4 in pg 3 do enjoy reading it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very lovely awesome chapter update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow wonderful update...
awww yuvraj so jealous!!! luved it..
hope Rohan is fine..
continue soon

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