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Hey guys...I decided to make a fanfic for SSEL😊Tell me how you guys like it😃



Chapter 1



Suhani was sitting in her room,staring blankly at the wall.She hadn't forgotten everything that happened.Yuvraaj's words echoed in her ears,making it hard for her to breathe.Each tear falling with each word."Main tumhari saat khush nahi thi!"Mujhe tumse shaadi nahi karna tha!" And suddenly,she got angry.Very angry.Everyone betrayed her.Everyone lied to her.She was nothing else but the victim of a huge lie,nothing else.No meaning,no trust.Why is she falling weak?Why is she crying her heart out?Why can't she recover?She was almost shaking.She didn't know what to feel or say.Suhani finally decided to leave the house.To leave everything and everyone.No one can use or play her again.She opens her closet and takes out her clothes and belongings.She packs her bags and storms out of the room.But before she could do anything,she bumps into Yuvraaj.She felt his strong arms hold her,her eyes closed.They stare into each other's eyes,but Suhani pushed aside,and Yuvraaj was confused and strucken with fear on seeing her bags."What is all of this Suhani?",he said.On hearing his voice,Suhani felt a comforting and warm feeling in her chest but she pushes it away and firmly says,"I can't do it anymore.I'm leaving,Yuvraaj"."No Suhani,you can't leave,you just can't leave...",Yuvraaj says wordlessly.He holds Suhani by the arm and she manages to get out of her grip,and says in between tears shaking lay,"Kabhi Khushi,Kabhi Gham"😉"What else can I think of my life?"Now it's only gham..Nothing else is left,Yuvraaj."Yuvraaj wasn't able to control anymore and he helplessly hugs Suhani.Suhani is left with her mouth wide open,and hesitates to hug back.As all of this is happening,Rags and Menaka are recording this.Ragini Nagini😆is shocked and records this,while Menaka is smiling behind her shoulder."Now all we have to do is show this to Soumya and Dadi,I was sure koi na koi chakkar chal raha hai en dono ki bech,"Ragini says grinning."Rags Jiji,now all we have to do is show this to Soumya and Dadi,then work is complete!",she says smiling as if she earned a trophy."Shut up Menaka that is just what I said right now",Ragini says irritated.


Rags and Menaka show the recording to Soumya.She is shocked on seeing Yuvraaj hugging Suhani and trying to stop her from leaving.But Soumya is absolutely full of hatred and jealousy for Suhani and desperately goes to find Dadi.Ragini and Menaka try to keep up with the angry Soumya,but they are all unaware that Suhani is standing at the doorway,seeing all of this.She started thinking about Yuvraaj and his plan.Even though she didn't want to be a part of it,but she no matter what she had always cared for every little thing for Yuvraaj.But still today she had to stop Soumya from showing Dadi the recording.


Precap:Soumya angrily calls Dadi from the top of the staircase,everyone is sitting on the couches.Suhani runs behind Soumya,and just as she is about to go down the stairs furiously,Suhani holds her and tries to stop her,pleading her.But Soumya pushes Suhani off the stairs.



Tell me how you guys liked it!My first fanfic on this forum!😃Updating it very soon!:)

Ch. 2-Pg.2
Ch.3-Pg.3
Ch.4-Pg.5

Edited by LuvYuvAni14 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's really good...
Liked it 👏
Do continue...
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This is good post the next part soon thanks
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Originally posted by: wayback

It's really good...
Liked it 👏
Do continue...



Thank you and I will soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humzy

awsm continue soon



I will,you guys also tell me if you have any ideas for the further track of the story,I will make sure to include those as well😃
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Originally posted by: rbb1

This is good post the next part soon thanks



Thank you!I'm glad you liked it😃
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Originally posted by: kishu789

Awesome work! Please continue!



Thank you for liking my work😃Will be sure to continue soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay guys,here's the next part!Lol,just hope you guys like it!:)😆I know this was a bit short but didn't know what to write further on,so I just did whatever came in mind!:)Tell me if you want the third part today as well,I bet I could be able to write that today too😃





Chapter 2


Suhani runs behind a desperate Soumya in the halls,calling her name.But Soumya ignores her and walks on.Suhani runs to Snoopy,and says,"Come on,Snoopy,come on help me,...go fetch the phone,go fetch".😆She runs along with Snoopy and is shocked to see Soumya calling Dadi from the top of the staircase.Everyone is sitting on the couches.They all stand up confused.Suhani holds Soumya by the shoulder and pleads her to stop."Suhani,leave me!"Suhani,leave me I said!",Soumya's angry voice thunders in Suhani's ears.Snoopy barks and barks at Soumya,due to which she gets scared and pushes Suhani,causing her to fall down the stairs.But Suhani actually falls down only a step or two,because before she knows it,Yuvraaj holds her.👏They look into each other's eyes dreamily,but it's interrupted by Dadi's harsh voice,"What is going on here?!",she yells."Dadi,Dadi,Dadi,I-I ne-ed to show you something...",Soumya replies,fumbling.She looks everywhere not being able to find the phone.Yuvraaj,ignoring all of this,picks Suhani up gently and takes her to their room.Suhani all of a sudden,takes out something from her dupatta.The phone!She managed to take it after all."In this phone,Ragini Bhabhi and Menaka Bhabhi recorded earlier how you...",she doesn't manage to say the rest,but shows Yuvraaj the recording.Yuvraaj is shocked to see this.He's also relieved and proud that finally Suhani has done such a brave task,well,unlike her tasks.😆"Thank you Suhani",he says,his eyes bright and friendly."For?",she says."For actually caring for my plan and saving this from happening",he says.Suhani just nods and walks off.


Precap:Dadi throws Suhani's bags out the front door and dragging her,throws her out of the house.Dadi is about to slap someone when Suhani holds her hand.


Ugh!I know,it's terrible,just getting stuff off my mind!Hehe!Lol:)😃😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just posted part 2!Tell me if you'd like to see part 3 today as well!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ya please update the part 3!! Its very good!😊😉. I am eagerly waiting!!
Edited by anujaashok - 10 years ago

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