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Posted: 10 years ago
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Crafted beautifully. It's always suhani's mind which speaks in the serial, for once we could feel how and what Yuvraj's thought process could be.
Keep writing👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: samcek

I'm glad you guys liked it! It means a lot to me 😳

I write them as OS's because they can be read as such, or you can join them up and make a multi-chapter fic.

If I continue them, then it will will play out as follows:

1: Suhani finds out the truth and leaves (done)
2: Yuvraj ponders the meaning of marriage and wives (done)
3: Yuvraj and Saumya's showdown (from Somu's POV)
4: Yuvraj tries to visit Suhani (from Bhavna's POV)
5: Dadi's intervention (I want to write this from Dadi's POV, but I don't know if I can!)
6: Suhani ponders the meaning of marriage and husbands (Suhani's POV)
7: Suhani's parents discuss her moving on (Lata's POV - I really want to write a mothers POV)
8: Pratima knows a secret... (Pratima's POV)
9: Suhani agrees to meet potential matches, but Yuvraj refuses.(Both POV's)
10: The divorce papers
11: Yuvraj see's Suhani... with another man (Yuvraj's POV).

Thats as far as i've gotten... If you guys want anything added let me know and i'll squeeze it in somewhere.

Happy Holi!


Pratima knows a secret, that sounds interesting and I am thinking what it could be, please please start writing.

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