[FF] Barsaat - Part 19 (pg. 25)

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Prologue

Suhani has been fighting her feelings ever since the accident. Pratima and her mom words kept echoing in her mind. Suhani often wonder what is wrong with Soumya. Soumya knew she did not cause the accident then why is she blaming her. She also often felt weird seeing Yuvraj helping Soumya out after the accident. She been feeling like Yuvraj was moving far away from her, the way he was when she first entered the house.

Soumya tries to get close to Yuvraj by the excuse of her injuries. Yuvraj only helps her out because he believes Suhani was the reason of the accident. But after listening to Krishna, he felt the accident was his fault. But he saw Suhani in the driving seat and why did she say it was her who caused the accident. Soumya also confirmed it was Suhani. He ignored his feeling thinking about how disgusting Krishna was.

Krishna after the accident realized that Soumya wouldn't come back to him on his love alone. He needed to become big and powerful. Bigger and powerful then the Birla to ever win her. He wasn't the type to take help from people. But he had to this time, he contacts a friend and begins to pack his bags. He was going to change his life.

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A bag is thrown across the hall hitting the side table. The lamp tumbles and falls. The sound of breaking glass pulled everyone out of their room and into the hall. Everyone comes out to find Suhani and Soumya in the middle of the hall. Soumya bag next to the broken lamp.

Soumya yells "this is enough Suhani." Suhani tries to grab her hand but Soumya pushes her hand away. "Soumya try to understand he is leaving. You have to go with him" she begged. "Why should I? What has he given me? Have you forgotten what he had done to me?" Soumya questioned back, outraged. Suhani looks around at everyone and then back at Soumya. "He realized his mistake, Somu." Soumya yells back, "and I have realized mine. I had left everything for him and what did he do. I can't believe you are taking his side. After all I did for you." Suhani says "that is why. You left everything for him and now he is leaving forever. I just don't want you to make a mistake." Soumya yells back "Suhani, I already made my mistake." Soumya begins walking over the table. "I left my mom, my beautiful house.." Soumya trips over the bag but Yuvraj catches her. She stares at him while he pulls her up. Suhani comes and grabs Soumya hand. Soumya turns in rage and pushes her hand away, "my biggest mistake of all was regretting Yuvraj, regretting his love."

Everyone shocked turns to look at each other then toward to Soumya. Dadi, Rags and Menka begin to grow a smile. Suhani looks at Soumya, shocked "Yuvraj?" She looks over at Yuvraj, who is also shocked. Suhani goes to hold Soumya again. "Soumya, do you know what you are saying." Soumya pushes both of Suhani hands away. "Yes Suhani, I know what I am saying and it's time you know the truth. Yuvraj does not love you but me."

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I apologize for my grammar mistakes. I was never good at them. Also with my job, it's not needed so my English is no longer any good. But I hope you like it.
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Part 2 - pg. 2
Part 3 - pg. 3
Part 4 - pg. 4
Part 5 - pg. 6
Part 6 - pg. 7
Part 7 - pg. 8
Part 8 - pg. 9
Part 9 - pg. 11
Part 10 - pg. 12
Part 11 - pg. 12
Part 12 - pg. 14
Part 13 - pg. 15
Part 14 - pg. 17
Part 15 - pg. 19
Part 16 - pg. 20
Part 17 - pg. 22
Part 18 - pg. 23
Part 19 - pg. 25
Edited by naam-ada-likhna - 9 years ago

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sandiab thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i love it continue soon i cnt wait to read what yuvraj does next. i can just imagine that bitch behaving like that
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start!!
Loved it
Update soon, can't wait 4 the nxt part!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start I hope Krishna becomes big and doesn't take her back that's should teach her a lesson, so finally Suhani knows the truth what will Yuvraj do now can't wait to read the next chapert soon, your English is great beautifully written story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I can definitely picture Souyma blurting the truth really soon the way she has behaving in the show just over the past week. She seems to be getting bolder and bolder each and every episode.

Loved the beginning of your FF and hope you update soon!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think this is wat going to happen to ssel.. Update soon..
Eagerly waiting to know what happens next..
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Very interesting. So the cat's out of the bag, and what about Krishna, going for a fresh start, huh? Nice
Do update soon
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Fantastic start! Looking forward to next update!
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Thanks everyone for your sweet comments.
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Part 2

Soumya pushes both of Suhani hands away. "Yes Suhani, I know what I am saying and it's time you know the truth. Yuvraj does not love you but me." Suhani takes a step back and yells "Soumya! Have you gone crazy?" Soumya yells back, "I was crazy. The day of your engagement when I didnt listen to Yuvraj express his love for me. All I thought of was Krishna, you and your happiness and here you are taking me away from my happiness. Suhani cries back "Soumya, what the hell are you saying? Yuvraj loves me! His rishta came for me! Soumya walks up to Suhani and grabs her by the arm and shakes her a bit "Suhani open your eyes and see. The guy who cant bare a stain on his shirt, who hates dirty and ugly thing, he will bring a rishta to you."
Pratima steps forward but Dadi raises her hand telling her to stop. Soumya continues "Yuvraj thought his rishta was going to me. That night of the engagement he expressed his love for me. I was so blinded by Krishna love and your happiness, I didnt realize I was pushing away my happiness. This house, clothes, jewerly, this family was all mine that I gave to you. Suhani steps away from her "No! This is all a lie! Yuvraj loves me! He gifted me this necklace on our engagement." Suhani touches the necklace and then touches her sari. "He brought this sari for my birthday." Suhani cries and walks over to Soumya and holds her "you remember that navatri night we went to the dandiya raas, he only wanted to dance with me."

Soumya gets angry when she remembers Yuvraj pulling Suhani closer during the dance. Soumya pushes Suhani arms away. She lifts the necklaces Suhani was wearing "This necklace was for me. He brought it to gift me." Suhani thinks back on the day the engagement was suppose to happen. She remembers when he was handing the gift over but then took it back as she reached for it. Soumya grabs Suhani pallu, "this sari was just to make me realize what I was missing out." Suhani remembers him cuddling with her and showing off the sari in front of Soumya. Tears begin to fall from Suhani eyes. "that dance and any other affection he showed towards you was just a act to make me realize what I had regretted. I realized now my happiness is with Yuvraj and his happiness is with me." Suhani has flashback of the day she first met Yuvraj till now as Soumya continued. "I left Yuvraj before for Krishna. I will not leave him again. I will not give away my happiness." Suhani yells, "Stop!"
Edited by naam-ada-likhna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it but its too short please longer next time I really like this FF and update soon.

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