SS: Dil ne jise apna kaha - Chapter 6 pg 9 5/1/2015

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This is my new short story. Apologies I know I have another story which I was in the middle of but I was sick and have been recovering. Will try and continue with that one. In the meantime I thought of another story line which is based ahead in the future.



Prologue

Suhani found out from Soumya that Yuvraj actually loved Soumya and not her and Dadi added fuel to fire by telling her that her father blackmailed Yuvraj into marrying her. Yuvraj confirmed that the above statements were factual. Suhani at the moment signed the divorce papers that dadi had had prepare and left the Birla house forever wishing that Soumya and Yuvraj find happiness in each other.

Suhani doesn't meet her parents but leaves a letter as she knew they would stop her and make her stay with them. But she needed to leave this town and so she did.

It is now 2 years later. A lot has changed, the Yuvraj who never took any interest in the business or the ongoings of the house was a changed man.

Chapter 1

Sharad, please arrange a meeting with the marketing agency in Delhi for the launch of our new skincare range' Yuvraj requested. Sure Guru, it will all be done' Sharad piped back.

Suddenly Yuvraj's phone rang, he looked at the name flashing on the caller id SOUMYA' annoyance came over his face. He takes the call WHAT?' he barks through the phone. Darling chill, what's with the attitude, I just called to say that my credit card is maxed out and I using yours, but what's your limit?' Soumya replied back in a sultry voice. Listen Soumya you know I'm in the office and I don't like any disturbances of any kind while I'm working. Use all the money you can get your hands on, I don't care just leave me alone' and he hung up on her. Yuvraj receives a picture text two seconds later. The picture was of Soumya blowing a kiss and the words I LOVE YOU' as the caption. Yuvraj just rolled his eyes and continued his work he didn't feel the need to respond.


TELL ME WHAT YOU GUYS THINK. Should I continue? Please like and comment.


Prologue - pg 1

Chapter 1- pg 1

Chapter 2 - pg 1

Chapter 3 - pg 3

Chapter 4- pg 5

Chapter 5- pg 6

Chapter 6- pg 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh wow please do I cnt wait for the next chapter and I hope u are ok now
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept and I like how Yuvraj has changed, wonder when he will meet Suhani again
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Nice concept😊
Continue soon
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Nice prologue n chapter... But chapter 1 is very small... Next time big one pls...
So Yuvaraj is looking after business n sharad is his assistant.. I can visualise it and i really want this to happen in ssel too... When yuvaraj took over i want sharad to work with him..

So where is suhani?? Why i have a feeling that she will be in that marketing agency???

Sowmya no comments😡😡😡..

Hope my Yuvani meet soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: qwerty012

Nice prologue n chapter... But chapter 1 is very small... Next time big one pls...

So Yuvaraj is looking after business n sharad is his assistant.. I can visualise it and i really want this to happen in ssel too... When yuvaraj took over i want sharad to work with him..

So where is suhani?? Why i have a feeling that she will be in that marketing agency???

Sowmya no comments😡😡😡..

Hope my Yuvani meet soon




I WISH YUVANI MEET AGAIN TOO BUT I DO LIKE HOW YOU SAID WHERE IS SUHANI
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Thanks for coming back. I was waiting for the second part of your first story but since the story has moved forward a new story is needed. I am glad I have another fan fiction to add to my list.
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THANK YOU for the lovely comments and likes. Hope you like the next part!😃

Chapter 2

Yuvraj arrived home earlier than usual as he had a splitting headache. As he entered he noticed a lot of commotion, seemed like hundreds of people running around! His headache increasing with every moment and he couldn't understand what the fuss was all about and frankly he didn't give a crap. He just wanted some peace and quiet and a bed. Hi Baby' Yuvraj heard Soumya call out to him. What do you think of the arrangements? I was getting bored so thought we would throw a party to celebrate us being together for 2 years! Isn't it exciting?' Soumya practically squealed. Look Soumya, I'm really not in the mood today I have a splitting headache and I have to leave early tomorrow morning to go to Delhi' Yuvraj spoke frustrated.

Don't be a spoil sport baby. Work can wait. Just take some tablets and your headache will be fine. I can't throw a party for us and you not be there. We are the hosts. I've invited all our friends and press. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE' Soumya did her best pout and puppy dog eyes.

Yuvraj, Soumya is asking you so lovingly, you can't refuse such a beauty' Dadi commented. But dadi I have to go to Dehli tomorrow and I'm just really tired' Yuvraj tried to explain. You work too hard Yuvraj, you need to relax and attending the party will help' Dadi counter attacked. A deflated Yuvraj had not choice just to accept dadi request. Dadi patted Yuvraj on the shoulder whilst smiling Don't worry Soumya will pack your bag'. Soumya looked up smiling and said I've got to get ready for the party so I will get Ramesh to do it' This comment irked Dadi, but then again this is what she had choosen for her grandson beauty above all else.

Yuvraj dejectedly walked to his room and lay down on the bed, his hand resting on his head. He felt a warm hand start to massage balm in. He suddenly opened his eyes to see Pratima looking down at him. What's wrong beta?' she asked What is hassling you so much? Talk to me, so I can help you. Pratima practically begged him. Yuvraj basically became a workaholic a few months after Suhani left. Pratima longed to see that old smiling Yuvraj. That smile that reached his eyes, he still smiles now but there is this hesitancy. She finished massaging his head and gave him is tablets and asked him to rest.

Yuvraj lay alone in his bed. His thoughts travelled to the fact that today is the day two years ago that Suhani walked out of his life, not asking anything from him, not angry but simply wanting him to be happy. How much things had changed Yuvraj thought. When the truth came out he felt terrible as he knew it would hurt Suhani and he didn't want to hurt her as she was a victim in all this. But at the same time he was relieved that he didn't need to bear the burden of an unwanted relationship. Suhani was an amazing girl, but not for him and his family, that is what he kept telling himself. He thought they would sit down and calmly discuss what the next steps would be, but everything happened so fast. Dadi demanding that Suhani sign the divorce papers and she will be given a blank cheque which she could fill in herself and that should cover her and her family costs and if for any reason that should not be enough that she ask dadi for more. Suhani without a word went and packed a small bag and she left the room she came to the living area and signed the divorce papers that were left there by dadi. She picked up the blank cheque and walked towards dadi and said Dadi, I will not be needing this, I've never been interested in money all I wanted to earn was you and your family love and respect. I know I have made a lot of mistakes and made you angry numerous times, but please accept my apology.' Suhani than when to Pratima and took blessing and hugged her, she whispered something in her ear which no one heard. Suhani said bye to everyone and she finally reached him. He didn't know what to say. He wanted to hug her and apologise, but didn't have the guts to. It was late at night and he requested that she stay till morning and then go but she was adamant. He then insisted on driving to which she said I need to learn to do things on her own.' These words hit him hard but he didn't understand why. He figured she would have just gone home to her parents and figured he would talk to her calmly tomorrow about everything. Meanwhile dadi and Soumya were already making wedding plans.

The next day first thing in the morning Yuvraj goes to Suhani's house. He had to admit he was excited to see her and he wanted to explain he didn't want/mean to hurt her. He knocked on the door. Lataji opened the door on seeing Yuvraj her face sank. Yuvraj asked for Suhani and Lataji told him that she had left without meeting them and just left a letter. Lataji frustration could be heard in her voice. How could you leave your wife like that? You vowed and promised to take care of her and protect her and all this time you have been lusting over her best friend.' He had nothing really that he wanted to say to her at that point he wanted to find Suhani. Fear overtook Yuvraj, he read the letter that Suhani had left her parents basically saying she was fine and she just needed to time alone and she doesn't blame anyone for the events and it was kismat. He promised himself that day he would do everything in his power to find Suhani and make sure she was ok, he owed her that much.

He awoke at Soumya bouncing into the room and demanding he got out of bed and ready for the party as guests were already arriving. This was going to be a long night he thought to himself. Little did he know what surprises tomorrow would have in store for him.


PLEASE remember to comment and LIKE! THANK AGAIN FOR READING AND HOPE YOU ENJOY! 😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey hi...i am new to this forum..
well wonderful concept...loved it
waiting suhani-yuvraj meeting
plz update soon...
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really nice update, aww poor Suhani hope she is ok, I like how Pratima wants Yuvraj to be happy and was being a mum to him, I wonder what Suhani said to Pratima hope we get to find out soon

Soumya god she is terrible and so is his dadi

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