Hey I-F
I really liked the concept of their blog... And its a great effort from their side to start blogging just for their fans... Thats so sweet of them..
I have a message for Hiten & Gauri about their blog.. If possible, do convey this to them...
I am really sorry Hiten & Gauri, 😭 much that I hate to say this but unfortunately, I found a lot of spelling mistakes in Gauri's writing.. 😕 So many grammatical and spelling mistakes. If possible please get these rectified..
For example, in teh very first line, My journey in the world of entertainment began initially with modeling as after my 12th. exams in Pune I joined the Ace Academy for charismatic excellence just as a pass time during my vacations. Instead of having a full stop after Pune, its after 12th
The commute between Pune and Bombay was becoming more and more difficult so I convinced my parents to let me stay in Bombay for a while. So convinced my parents to let me stay in Bombay for a while. This line is repeated...
After this, there are no commas or full stops.. I do understand that while writing you just go with the flow but somehow in reading, I found (i dont know about others), its looking very odd..
Just to give another example, I was still holiday mood, this should have been, I was still IN the holiday mood.
Correct me if I am wrong guys.. My apologies again, 😭 its just that I felt that somebody should let you know about all this..
Besides these small small things, everything's great in their blog, each and every section is in place, perfect..
If I have hurt anybody in any sense, I do apologise once again... Specially to Hiten & Gauri, but I want you guys to be perfect like your pair and screen presence... Love you loads...
Monika