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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: smritisonkar

subhan allaha....kya khani hai...really a gr8 cumback...ek bar padna suru kia tho ruka he nahi gay..u have a really bright future in stories.....



thanx smriti
nice to see u after so long😛😛
well its not that much good as some others but i m trying my best😃

lolz
ana😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

hey ana!!
Post was really great!!!!
now waiting 4 ur some more entertaining update!!!!
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thanx dear
i m gonna cont now in a bit😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

hey ana yaar missing ur post!!!!
u will not believe but i have read ur full posts 4 times coz its really interesting!!!
waiting 4 some cool and funtertaining update 😉



yaar i missed this too..................but kia karoon............hadn't have any time.............just got some and here i m😃
thanx for liking it so much dear

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

No probs Ana, we'll wait... Nice to see you are writing another fic on AR 😛



i just love Shilpa Karan jodi as AR
so thought to right one for them tooo

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: princessunara

Hi Ana..i jst finished reading ur FF n 1 go..im new 2 dis forum n nw only started 2 luk around.n i found ur FF..ts realy grt..👏👏👏

im enjoyed myself a lot while reading t..ts realy cute...da light hearted teasing btwn da friends n da sweet romance btween da jodis..im specially waitin 2 read bt dips n karan's story😳...

anywa ts jst lovely..im gonna 2 be a regular reader 4m nw on😳



thanx dear
and welcome here😳😃
if u ever need any help, we are SS members are always there for yoy
i m happy to see a new friend in our group now😃😛

lolz
ana😳


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Posted: 17 years ago
(I m sorry guys for not cont............actually as i told you earlier about my uncle being in hospital........he died on June 1st.........so actually got busy out there............but now i will surly try to update as soon asi can............luv you guys)

The day went smoothly later…………….the friends enjoy there day while watching movie and stuff…………….but all missing ajay really……………especially someone who was alone while two other couples were going around with each other

They were trying to not make her feel left out…………shaina, Aryan, neha, dipika, karan sit in thearte in order………….but still neha was not in mood to have a happy swing……..she was happy for her friends but for herself…………a big NOOOO

They reach there respective homes and all lay in bed, when Neha's cell buzzed

"Hello" she was moaning in anger

"Hey Hunny, how are you……………mujhe patah that um abhi tak jagg rahi hogi…….so how was ur day?"

"Will you take a breath ajay" Then ajay realized that he said all that in a breath

"Well abh kia khamosh rehne ka irada hai" Neha was annoyed on him as he didn't said a word in a minute

"Ok I will go, main theek hoon…………actually we all are fine here………main abhi tak jagh rahi thi kyunki meri 6 sense keh rahi thi ke kissi stupid ka phone aayega………and our day was great…………we had great fun"

"Ki yaar mujhe jala rahi hoo…………..wahan tum loog fun kar rahay hoo yahan meri band bajji howi hai…………maa har subah 6 bajay utha deti hai, yeh karma hai……..woh karna hai………mujhe lagta hai k Shreya or Sapna ki bajaye meri sadi ho rahi hai…" he said and laugh while neha too chuckled

"so shadi kaisi ja rahi hai…………I think last night was Mehndi………haan?"

"ya…………that was totally superb…………Shivam aur Harsh bohut acche hain……bhagwan bachay unhain meri behnoon se" He laugh again

"That was rude……………..main shreya or sapna ko kahoon gi……"

"Oops sorry meri maa……………..galti se bhi na kehna…………..warna meri jagha koi kaana, yaan andha ajay wahan hoo ga" She knew he was joking as he loved his sisters and so didn't stretch it further

"You need to know something………….aj Dipika or karan…." She paused with excitement

"Dipika aur Karan……….." he too said in a same too

"They were…….."

"They were what hunny……………..don't say I miss something really cool"

"Sorry to say, but you did…………..you know………today while watching movie…….we found them in stare lock" She smiled as she remembered the moment

"OH Gosh!................these two are too fast………mere peeche peeche"

"nahin tumhare agay agay hona tha…………." Neha said while mocking

"Ha ha ha………..very funny neha………..well I am sure Dips too get feelings for him……….just now have tio wait k who kab realize karti hai"

"ya I m waiting too" She tossed on her bed

"accha yaar" ajay said yawning……… "I need to goo…………….abhi yahan 6 bajay hain…….maa utha k gai………..will call you later………….bye babes"

"Ajay" she said in angry tone while he chuckled and put the phone down

"Why he always irritate me…………..usay patah hai k I don't like being call as babes" But her thoughts were interrupted by another call…………on seeing the name she just smile and receive

"Hey sweetheart" She said in excitement

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Dipika roll down on her bed and absorbed her face in pillow................she was trying to hide the blush, clearly apparent on her cheeks, remembering the today event

Flashback

They all take there seats after having popcorns.....................Shaina and aryan, rather concentrate on movie.............actually concentrate on each other.................having love talks and sweet things which were making them blush................Neha was actually concentrating on movie trying not to remember ajay and him.............none of them was there with her right now..........but she was there, for there friends................Dipika and Karan were trying to concentrate on movie too..................but from the corner of the eye, actually looking towards each other.

The time went smoothly till an hour..............Dipika, titally engross in movie, move her hand into the popkorn bin which was in Karan's hand................Karan too move forward his hand, and accidentally...........instead on having popcorn, he hold Dips hand..............Dipika look down at her hand and then at him...............Karan notice a stare at him and look towards dipika who was not able to utter a single word.............they both look into each other eyes.............try to find out there answers

They look forward into depth of each others eyes and fell themselves drown into it.............None was aware of surrounding..............it was like swimming in a pool full of love.............love for each other.............love of there lifes which were now belong to each other

It was interval time...............Screen went black an light turned On.................Neha Shaina and Aryan stand up to go outside for having some refreshments but stop in a mid way, on realizing that Dips and Karna didn't move a bot................they turn and left surprize seeing them in a starelock...............Shaina, Aryan and Neha smiled to each other

"See, here they goes....................waise tau Dips inkar karti hai..................par abh dekho, kaise ghoor rahay hain" Neha said hiding her smile

"They are looking so cute" Shaina just hold aryan hand tighter and put her head on his shoulder while admiring the couple

"Abhi inh ko neend se jagati hoon" Neha move forward to jerk them but aryan stopped her

"Hunny, wait..........." Neha and Shaina look at her questingly........while he just smile and continue

"Don't you think we should catch this moment" aryan said raising a brow

Neha and Shaina just give a wide smile and the three take pictures of them in there mobiles

"Ahem-Ahem" Shaina make a voice just to make them realize but not a single moment

"Yeh aise nahin hosh main aayein gay" Aryan move forward and move his hand between there faces to just brake the eyelock and that work

"huh......ha...................kia howa" Dipika stand up with embarassing look while other raise a brow

"Why are you asking us Dips....................we should be the one asking that" Neha said crossing her hands with a meaningfull look

Karan stand up while blushing and said

"Guys i need to go for a moment....................catch you after the break" Karan was about to leave suddenly but aryan hold his hand and make him returned

"What?" Karan asked with a confuse look

"We need an explaination?" Aryan said with a meaningful look while Shy and Hunny, too nod

After having no reply for about 5 min................Shaina called out

"OK guys, just leave it here for now......................we have totally 15 min left now...........we can talk about this after going home ..............k" Dipika and Karan have a sigh of relief and move outside...................while other just smile and follow them

Flashback End

Dipika smiled at herself.................There was something strong in his eyes, something very captative...........which left her speechless.

She was still in her thoughts while she here a knock on door, and got it who must be there but to avoid the questioning for now, she just turn off her lights and remain in bed without any noise

"Dips are you awake?" Shaina ask knocking again

On having no answer, Neha said

"I think, for now we just left her alone..................she need to explore her love for bro.." Neha said with a small smile

"I think you are right hunny..................but we can definately catch up in the morning" They both wink and left a dipika, who was trying to find out her emotions for karan

"Why i got jealous, when he didn't give me the same attention as to Neha and Shy on airport..............why i feel bad when he didn't talk to me in college..............why i can't feel to be at rest, without seeing him..............is this simply attraction or..................something more than that

No dips, its not attraction.........................it is definately something strong you share with him..........something that keep you both bound with each other..................He already told ou that he love you................why can't you just accept the fact that you too love him"

She stopped at this thought.......................what it was..............did i really said that i love him...............or it was a question for my heart....................no no.................definately i love him..................i love you Karan.............i love you alot and i will tell you as soon as i can

She went to sleep with a smile on her face realizing her love

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"Did you talk to her?" Aryan asked as like always he called shy at night o wish her good night

"No, i didn't..................Hunny said we should give her atleast tonight to sort out her feelings for Karan..............but will definately talk in the morning" Shaina said laying back on bed

"I know, she got those feelings as Karan have for her..................she just trying to neglect them" Aryan said explaining his thoughts

"No, actually she is scared...............scared to have a weak patner.............karan is emotional.....we all know that...............but Dips don't want to have a patner in life who lives emotionally...............she need one who can support her in her down times.............not one who always search for support in her even in her down times................she is just scared to confess so she might not feel weak....................she hate being weak" Shy got a bit temper

"i know it shy, calm down love................" Shy cool down herself and said

"Thanks aryan, for listening me and for undrstanding Dips feelings"

"Ah, your welcome" and he tried to make her mood lighten up

"But you still give me that, for which i called?" Aryan said smirking

Shy got it but tease him "What? i don't get you?"

"Don't act smart, honey................please" aryan was really eager to hear those words

"I love you" Shaina said knowing he can't hold it now

aryan got a big smile and replied "I love you too.............and now go to sleep with my dreams and don't miss me................because i will accompany you there in your dreams" Aryan said that and give her a kiss on phone

Shy smiled and reply "Good Night"

Both put down there phone and just smiled thinking of each other

Edited by cool_SK - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry about your uncle Ana!


😳 Finally maan hi gayi bachchi 👏 Ab pyaar ka izhaar hoga kaise? Thoda romantic karvana like AS Ana 😊

Ab Neha bhi... And Ajay ne use phone kiya, not others hunh 😉 Oh ho... Kahani me twist? Koun hai vo sweet heart ?

Hai... AS to AS hain, no one can beat them... Aur Aryan itniiiiiii romantic baatein kar raha hai.... Cutie pie 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago


Sorry abt you uncle Ana.


It was a really cute update...me still blushing 😳

Don;t have words to say anything... 😳


Good work 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ana really very sorry abt ur uncle 😕

well ur update was as usual amazing, mind blowing, fantabulous!!!!!!!!!!!

👏

Chaloo yeh tu hona he tha k Deeps ko karan k liyee kuch kuch honee lagaaaa....

👏

waiting 4 some more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Actually "yeah dil mange more"
Edited by cute gauri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hello Anum,
myself pooja,one of ur ff reader.
sorry about ur uncle.
Anum you are really fantastic.superb idea ss ke story se ek dam hut ke,mindblowling. loved the story.
👏
Edited by ruha - 17 years ago

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