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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
it was beautiful.

kya baat hai aryan and dipika mocking each other with the questions and the answers.

how will aryan stay in bed for two monthes for his recovery?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: maisoon

thanks for not making her crying yaar 😊....i thought it would have failed somthing in too 😕 dont know what!!

and dont say that.......your story is hundered time of greater worth than we say.......than we can appriciate in words😃
you are very great writer 👏

Thanks Amna...

Yaar me too naa... In the epi where Dipika hugged Aryan she didn't cry out, she was just upset and one or two tears peeped out that's it...

And I felt if Dipika did cry out it would be in a state where Aryan can openly console her....😉 And that is a long way off for now...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam78

it was beautiful.

kya baat hai aryan and dipika mocking each other with the questions and the answers.

how will aryan stay in bed for two monthes for his recovery?

Aryan and Dipika mocking at each other has always been happening naa sam... Well from Aryan's side atleast..... Ghonchu knowing that Dipika loved him he kindles her feelings naa... Isliye😃

😆 Sam tumhe lagta hai Aryan will be in bed for two full months😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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As soon as Boxer and Ajay left… Shotgun and Zubin approached the bed and talked to him… Neha also partially bent over him and started talking to him….

Dipika moved a little back, and with a slight tilt of her head observed Aryan….. 😳

Neha: Thank God everything is fine Aryan…. We were all so worried!

Aryan: (Softly so that only Neha could hear) All!!?? 😉

Saying this he just gave a glance towards Dipika and avoiding Neha's bemused look looked at Shotgun and Zubin talking to him… Neha looked at him once and at Dipika and held a private smile on her lips…. 😳

Shotgun: Aryan pet kaisa hai? Dard to nahi ho raha naa? ❓

Aryan: Nahi… Bas kuch strange knot feeling hai because of that stitch knot…. (With a funny expression on his face) 🤪

Shotgun, Neha and Zubin just giggled at his expression… 😆

When Aryan had looked at Dipika she had immediately averted her eyes… But now she again gave a glance towards him…. 😳 She looked at him earnestly talking and secretly said a lot of prayers to the Gods for fulfilling their wishes… Seeing him talking, smiling tears of joy peeped out from her eyes… She turned a little to wipe away them…

Just then door opened and Dr. D'Souza came in followed by Ajay and Boxer…

On the way the doctor gave a small pat on Dipika's arm and smiling broadly went towards the bed… Neha moved back and the doctor went near Aryan….

Doctor: (Smiling down at him)Hello…. Aryan! Kaise ho? I am Dr. D'Souza… Is hospital ka dean aur tumhara doctor… 😛

Aryan: Fine… Thank you doctor….

The doctor started to check his pulse all the while talking….

Doctor: You should be… I should say Aryan you do have wonderful friends here to take care of you….. 👏

At this Aryan just looked around at all of them with pride in his eyes…. 👍🏼

Doctor: (Checking his heart beat) Roz subah shaam sab milne aa jaate the aapko… Whether you are awake or not…. Just seeing you was enough for them….

As Aryan looked on the others felt embarrassed that the doctor was exaggerating…. But Aryan knew he was not…. It was genuine… His friends really had so much care for him…. Including Dipika he knew! 😉

Aryan: I know doctor… They are my life's best possessed wealth…. ⭐️

Now it was the turn of the others to look at Aryan proudly….☺️

Doctor: (Checking his eyes) Very good! I should say wonderful improvement… You are fit and fine as never before….

Everyone became happy on hearing this…. 😛 But for Aryan it was more than happiness… It was freedom from this hospital environment…. He had been here for one day that too awake only few minutes but he had begun to feel stuffy…. 😆

Doctor: (Placing the stethoscope around his neck) Bas ab maine jo precautions kahee hai uska dyaan rakhiyegaa, then you would be very well in no soon a time….

Aryan: (Confused) Precautions?!?!? 🤔

Doctor: Oh… Yes… No need to worry… Maine aapke doston se keh di hai… They will take care….

Aryan just looked on at the others wondering what sort of precautions they were? He knew they were all very concerned about him… So they would strictly follow what the doctor said… But that would mean he would have to undergo lot of Do's and Don'ts lecture…. Shaking himself….

Aryan: Doctor… When can I get discharged?

Doctor: Discharge??? ❓ Well as I said tumhare condition ko mujhe check karna hai after you start on your regular diet which is from tomorrow… So after one week or so you can get discharged if I am satisified.. (Stressing on the 'if') 😳

Aryan looked at him with a wild expression… One week!!!!!!!!! That was eternity for him….. 😕

Aryan: One week?!?!?! Doc I am fine… Dekhiye….

Saying so Aryan started to get up and immediately catching his head fell back on his pillow… He felt dizzy…. 😲

The doctor caught him immediately and made him lie down back…..

Everyone immediately made an attempt to take a step forward… Dipika came to the foot of his bed concern written all over his place….

As for the doctor he was very angry…. 😡

Doctor: Aryan…. I didn't tell you to get up…. (Straightening) Main yahan ka doctor hoon aur mere patients hospital me kab aaa sakte hain kab ja sakte hain main decide karta hoon…. So just stay put….

Saying this the doctor turned and went off… When he passed Dipika….

Doctor: (Indicating the door) Dipika….

Dipika nodded and with a look at Aryan went outside to talk to the doctor….

As soon as they left the others came over concerned to Aryan…..

Outside Aryan's Room…..

Dipika: (Worried) Uncle Aryan theek to hai naa? 😕

Doctor: (Smiling) Oh… He is a super man… Fit… But I still insist on my precautions…. He is very sensitive now… See any sudden movements like even getting up can make him weak… He should get back to his normal routine slow and steady….

Dipika: I understand doctor… I'll take care… Doosron se bhi keh deti hoon….

Doctor: Waise Dipika poochna chahata tha? Aryan ke ghar se koi nahi aaya itne maheenon me?

Dipika: (Sad) No doctor Aryan ka koi nahi hai…. 😭

Doctor: Oh… I am sorry beta…. Phir to after discharge uska khayaal?!!!???

The doctor stopped on seeing Dipika's expression…. He just gave an assuring squeeze on her shoulder and went away…..

Dipika was dazed…. 😒 Only when the doctor mentioned did it strike her that where would Aryan stay after his discharge? Of course he has his home…. But he wouldn't take care of the precautions the doctor had said….

Composing herself she went back inside the room… They would have to find a place for his stay….

Inside Ajay was making Aryan smile with his funny jokes…. 😊

Dipika smiled seeing Aryan smiling…. She was happy and relaxed…. Her future was safe….. Her expression changed to one of question mark…. Was he really her future??????

Seeing Dipika stand there Neha came to her…..

Neha: Dipika kya kaha doctor ne?

Dipika: (Looking at her) Aryan is fine…. Precautions par dyaan rakhne ko kaha hai…..

Neha: (Sighing relief) Thank God!

Dipika: Lekin….

Neha had made a move to go back when Dipika's words stopped her…. She looked at her puzzled…

Dipika: (Glancing once at Aryan and then at Neha) Neha discharge ke baad Aryan kahan jayega?

Neha: (In a as-a-matter-of-fact tone) Why? Of course uska gha…..

She stopped understanding what Dipika said… Even if Aryan went home who would take care of him???? 😕

Neha turned to look at Aryan and found him looking at them…. He was having a questioning expression… She smiled at him and whispered to Dipika….

Neha: Dipika Aryan yaheen dekh raha hai…. Ek hafta hai… We'll think of something… Ab chalo…

As Dipika nodded she and Neha made way to Aryan's bed….. 😊


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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
it was very nice.

one place he can go and stay. it is dipika's place because she is the only one that makes aryan understand things.

other friends are great, but front of aryan they will bend the rule, dipika will care for his health.

he should stay with dipika.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam78

it was very nice.

one place he can go and stay. it is dipika's place because she is the only one that makes aryan understand things.

other friends are great, but front of aryan they will bend the rule, dipika will care for his health.

he should stay with dipika.

Ha... Are you sure sam he should stay with Dipika😉 I have lots and lots of doubts in that.... Dipika din pe kaam ko nahi chali jayegi😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 itne jaldi..........aur shadi ka bagar🤡
jinta mein kritu ko janti hoon wo waqat itne easliy nahi aya ga sam 😉
and yeah dipika have to work most part of the day.....maybe from the special squad someone would be staying with him
but they have wrok too.....

question:who would be the person stay and taking care for aryan?🤔

aanswer:allah janey😕

i loved the part with aryan getting wild expression......"EK hafta...!!!!!"

imagine aryan running from hospital, disclimbing a water pipe in his hospital robes 😆

bahut maza ayaa great part 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
hehehehe
that was a a bit funny part
i luv the expressions u showed or aryan
lolz 😆 .........he is definately gonna prove hard to handle 😆

dipika's feelings are comming out..........aryan atleast got a hint....... 😉 .......now i know they will be together soon

Vishal better leave SS b4 aryan comming back........otherwise i m sure aryan will kick hi hard 4 having an eye on "HIS" dipika 😳

Lolz.......the part was fab............SS team realy show a sweet relation..........doc is a bit strict but thats what aryan need now 😳

Sweeto..........Mummye or Chachi tumhare bhalay k liye hi yeh kar rahi hain...........but still.......who gonna handle him after discharge........lolz........getting evil thoughts 😳

lolz
ana 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: maisoon

😆 itne jaldi..........aur shadi ka bagar🤡
jinta mein kritu ko janti hoon wo waqat itne easliy nahi aya ga sam 😉
and yeah dipika have to work most part of the day.....maybe from the special squad someone would be staying with him
but they have wrok too.....

question:who would be the person stay and taking care for aryan?🤔

aanswer:allah janey😕

i loved the part with aryan getting wild expression......"EK hafta...!!!!!"

imagine aryan running from hospital, disclimbing a water pipe in his hospital robes 😆

bahut maza ayaa great part 👏 👏 👏

😆Amnaaaaaaaaaaaaa🤣 Aryan...... disclimbing the pipe... Imagine karte hi main ye type bhi nahi kar paa rahi hoon😆

Hey Sam dekh Amna is right... Shaadi ke bageir kaise😉 Waise kisi aise ka ghar jahan din me bhi use dekhne ke liye ho aur Aryan unki baat maane bhi???? Aaj pata chal jayega😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cool_SK

hehehehe
that was a a bit funny part
i luv the expressions u showed or aryan
lolz 😆 .........he is definately gonna prove hard to handle 😆

dipika's feelings are comming out..........aryan atleast got a hint....... 😉 .......now i know they will be together soon

Vishal better leave SS b4 aryan comming back........otherwise i m sure aryan will kick hi hard 4 having an eye on "HIS" dipika 😳

Lolz.......the part was fab............SS team realy show a sweet relation..........doc is a bit strict but thats what aryan need now 😳

Sweeto..........Mummye or Chachi tumhare bhalay k liye hi yeh kar rahi hain...........but still.......who gonna handle him after discharge........lolz........getting evil thoughts 😳

lolz
ana 😳

Hoie hoie... Such me ana ye Amna bhi naa😆 As for Vishal... Poor guy... Pyaar kiya pehli baar vo bhi aise... Cho chaad😕 Lekin Aryan se mile bagair uska jaana ????? Nahh,..... FF me dum nahi rahega naa😉

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