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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
10:18 am
in forensic lab
papaji,priya,ved aur shotgun lab mein hote hai hai.samne deathbody padi hoti hai
par uski koi bhi autopsy nahi kerta.sab upset hote hai.tabhi neha lab mein aati hai.
neha-aap sab aise kyun baithe ho?
Shotgun-neha,tum hi batao ki ajay ke jane ke baad kiska yehaan dil lagega.
Papaji-woh office mein aata tha to hamesha lab mein aata hi tha.aaj woh nahi
Hai is office mein to aaj such mein kisika bhi man nahi lag reha yehaan
Ved-office mein ek alag sa hi sannata cha gaya hai jaisa meri wife ke death ke
Waqt…yeh office ab special squad ka office nahi balki ek kabristhan lag reha hai.
Priya-par kuch bhi ho use wapas aana hi hoga.hum sab wapas uske hasi se is
Special squad office ko khilta hua dekhna chahte hai.
Neha-boxer kehaan hai?kal se nahi dikha?
Tabhi zubin lab mein aata hai.woh neha ka question sun leta hai.
Zubin-woh to jabse ajay gaya hai tabse sirf apne cabeen mein udaas baitha hai.
Main use samjhane gaya to usne rona hi start ker diya…woh keh reha hai ki
Ajay ko wapas aana hi padega…hum sab ki khatir…usike barine mein batane ke
Liye main yehaan aaya hoon.
Neha-sirf ek din ajay nahi hai to kitna bura haal hai na hum sab ka…ajay humare
Sason ki tarah tha jo ek din bhi na le to…
Priya-neha aisa mat keho…aakhir sanson ko bhi humara saath zindagi bhar dena hi
Padta hai…I hope ajay bhi usi tarah zindagi bhar hum sabke saath rahega.
Ved-hum sabko boxer ko samjhane ke liye uske cabeen jana chahiye.
Papaji-haa…priya tum neha ko leke deepika ke cabeen mein jao…kyunki wehan
Deepika ne bhagwan ko rakha hai…aur bhagvan ke mandir jaisi jagah udaasi
Nahi chayegi.
Priya-ji papaji…chalo neha chalte hai.
Priya neha ko laker deepika ke cabeen mein chali jati hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
10:25 am
in ajay's house
Aryan aur shaina ajay ke ghar pahuchte hai…par darwaza khulte hi unhe ek bahut
Hi bhayanak sa scene dikhta hai…ajay ne khud ke khoon se apne ghar ki diwaron
Par har jagah neha ka naam likha hota hai.ajay ne table per ek letter bhi likha hota
Hai jo bhi khoon se likha hota hai.aryan aur shaina us letter ko padhte hai.usmein
Likha hota hai ki…neha mujhe maaf kardo…main tumse door ja reha hoon…bahut
Door…jehaan se main kabhi bhi wapas na aa sakoo…
Yeh sab dekhker Aryan aur shaina ko shak hota hai ki kehin ajay ne khudke saath
Kuch…matlab suicide to nahi kiya hoga…
Aryan aur shaina jaldi se ajay ke pados mein rehne walo se puchtach kerte hai,tab
Ajay ka ek dost batata hai ki ajay to delhi chala gaya…shayad hamesha ke liye
Gaya hai…kyunki jaate waqt uske saath bahut sara saaman tha…aur usne office
Se resign bhi kiya tha.
Aryan aur shaina ab musibat mein fas jate hai ki office jaker sabko kya jawab de aur
Neha ko kaise samhale…bahut sochne ke baad aakhir woh dono sabko such batane
Ka faisla kerte hai aur special squad office aane ke liye nikalte hai…us letter ko leke.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
abhi khatam nahi hui hai haa story...padhte rehna...topic padhte rehna...thanks yaar...main isse pehle saarrthi mein 2 fanfic likh chuki hoon.wehan ek diya tha to ek aisa hi pada reha hai.lekin yehan pura karke hi rehoongi yeh fanfiction.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
Cho saad............ 😭

That's the spirit........... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
that's the way gal!!!keep it up!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
kya hua????kidhar ho sweety???ek main hoon jo aaapki story ka itni besabri se intezaar kar rahi hoon aur ek aap,joh humein intezaar hi karaate ja rahe ho!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
hey rashmi sorry yaar .maine tumhara fanfic main koi reply nahi kia.actually mere lucknow jane ki wajah se aadhe se zada fanfic choot gaya tho aaj maine usse copy paste kia hai.as soon as i finish it i will post my comments. 😊
waise jaha tak padha hai waha tho tho fantastic hai ji. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
teri story bhi hit hai ji rashmi ji 😃 😃 sachhi ek bar padna suru kia tho ruka he nahi gaya.main tho fida ho gaye aap ki kahani pe.
wakai aap tho kamal ki story writer nikli.mazza he aa gaya.sadda tho bheja he hill gaya.waddi soni story hai ji 😃
please agla part likhne main der mat lagana
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
I've just read 1st part 👏 👏 good start Shefali...Ajay-Neha are also my fav jodi ni SS other than S-A 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
wow this is good! you should continue!

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