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Posted: 18 years ago
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finally ab jaaker main apna fanfic add ker rehi hoon yehaan{like finally hamne tumhe apne rang hi diya,jab aryan deepika ko kehta hai}😊.waise friends,yeh mere nazariye se to thik hai ab aap padhke dekho.phir bhi utna khaas nahi hai.but meri fav.jodi hai na isliye😃.
part 1-

8 july 2005

9:30 am

Special Squad Office

Aaj sab SS officers ka duty ka 1st day tha, isliye sab half hour pehle hi office pahuch Gaye.

Neha bhi jaldi apne section mein ja rehi thi.usi time ajay bhi samne se aa reha tha.dono

Bahut jaldi mein the, to dono apne section Jane ke jaldbazi mein ek-dusre se takraye.

Neha-hey, tum dekh ke nahi chal sakte kia?

Ajay-arre khudki galti hote hue bhi mujhpe chilla rehi ho? Tum janti nahi main chief

Investigator officer hoon.

Neha (Shocked)-what...tum Aryan khanna ho?

Tabhi office mein announcement hoti hai-for new officers, please attend the meeting.

Neha-I m so sorry

Ajay-ha thik hai thik hai ab chalo meeting mein

Neha meeting mein chali jati hai aur ajay bhi


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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
u brought out ajay's character so well 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am waiting for the next part.Good beginning. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start yaar.keep it up.plz post other parts soon as possible 😊 😊 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks guys.aap sabko itna accha laga,i m so happy.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 2-

Meeting room
9:50 am

Sab apne chairs par baith jate hai, ajay neha ke pass hi baithta hai.per dono ke
Ek-dusre ki taraf dhyaan hi nahi hota.
Aryan-ok…guys main hoon chief investigating officer Aryan khanna
Neha-what…
Ajay ka dhyaan neha ki taraf jata hai.woh shock ho jata hai.
Aryan-haa, kyun? Kya hua?
Neha-ager tum Aryan khanna ho to phir woh kaun tha.
Ajay apna face chupane ki koshish karta hai.
Aryan-arey…ajay desai aapko kya hua?
Neha ajay ki taraf dekhti hai
Neha-tum…u lier
Ajay-arre…Maine kya kiya?
Neha-kya kiya…off god…ager mujhe tumhare saath kaam karne padega to main
Yeh job chod rehi hoon
Aryan-nahi…nahi…neha nair dekhiye, aap ek kabil Chief Techonology Officer
Hai aur ajay desai ek Assistant investigating Officer Hai…isliye aap dono ko
Alag alag kaam karne padega…to ab please…baithiye.
To dekhiye humne aap jaise bahut hi kabil officers ko chuna hai.to ab humein
Humare first Case ke liye shuruvat karni chahiye…lekin usse pehle aap sab logo
Ka introduction
Shaina singh, Assistant Investigating Officer
Boxer, Assistant Investigating Officer
Ajay desai, Assistant Investigating Officer
Neha nair, Chief Technology Officer
Zubin Driver, Photographic Expert and Sketch Artist
Jogi, Pathologist
Ved Rahi, Forensic Head
Priya, Assistant Pathologist
Shotgun, Latent and Prints Specialist
To humara pehla case hai searial killer ka, case ke files aap sab logo ke samne rakhe hai,
Please padhlijiye.ab sab log apne kaam ki shuruvaat kar sakte hai.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
great job!ajay aur neha really rock! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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11:00 am
In Forensic Lab
Forensic lab mein jogi, priya, ved and shotgun apna kaam kar rahe hote hai, tabhi ajay aata
Hai
Ajay-hi jogi and ved uncle, hi shotgun and beautiful priya.i m ajay desai, ofcourse tume mere
Barien mein janti hi hogi
Priya-ha bahut kuch jaan chuki hoon meeting mein
Ajay-to tum aaj shaam kya kar rehi ho?
Ved-ajay, woh meri beti hai.use flirt karne ki koshish bhi mat karna
Priya-don't very dad.main flirt hone bhi nahi wali hoon.kyunki main inke ex-girlfriend se
Jo ki humari receptionist hai usse bahut kuch jaan chuki hoon.
Ajay-arrey, mujhe ek bahut zaruri kaam yaad aaya main jata hoon.
Sab ajay ki taraf ghusse se dekhte hai lekin phir apna kaam karne lagte hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
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11:45 am
Neha's Section
Ajay-hey neha is amod parekh ke barein mein zara dhundo to
Neha-ajay tum phir aa gaye…
Ajay-arey main sirf kaam ke silsile mein aaya hoon
Tabhi ajay ke cell pe call aata hai
Ajay-hey geetu…how r u? Kya humare collage ki trip ja rehi hai? Accha thik hai.
Aane ke liye try karunga.
Ajay phone band karte hi neha use shocking nigah se dekhti hai
Ajay-kya hua? Ab maine to kuch nahi kiya haa.
Neha-tum college student ho?
Ajay-haa.lekin usmien chauk jane ki kya baat hai?
Neha-phir bhi tum job kar rahe ho?
Ajay-haa mere bachpan mein hi mere dad ki ek accident mein death hui, baad mein mujhe mere
Mom ne palpos ke bada kiya.lekin pichle saal uski bhi death hui (Ajay ko lagta hai ki use rona
Aane wala hai, isliye woh wehan se chala jata hai.)
Neha ko ajay ki life story jaan kar bahut dukh hota hai.use ajay par proud hota hai ki usne kitne
Jaldi apne life se samjhota kar liya. Use ajay bahut pasand aata hai. Ekdum use apne kaam ki
Yaad aate hi woh apna kaam karne baith jati hai (ajay ki yadon ko leke).
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh...... Ajay kahan bhi jaye apni shararaton se baaz nahin aata ne. Great going Shefali! 👏

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