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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
sachhi thoda sa incomplete sa laga. 😕 😕 par the story is damn cool yaar 😃 😛 .u too have a great sence of imagination.keep going 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: smritisonkar

sachhi thoda sa incomplete sa laga. 😕 😕 par the story is damn cool yaar 😃 😛 .u too have a great sence of imagination.keep going 👏 👏

☺️☺️☺️Thanks you Smriti, incomplete ko edit kar diya.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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The ambulance entered the Hospital. Ganesh drove the ambulance directly to the hospital entrance. Dipika and Neha immediately opened the back door and came out. Ganesh and Magan too came out. Magan immediately went inside.

Seeing an ambulance come to the door, the compunders and nurses of the hospital came running with stretchers. They unloaded Aryan from the ambulance and took him inside.

Dipika: Neha, tum Aryan ke saath hi rehna. Mein andar jakar Doctor ke liye poochti hoon.
Neha:Theek hai..

Dipika was about to go inside when, Ganesh called..
Ganesh:Madam, mein ambulance park karke aata hoon.

Dipika looked a second at him, nodded and hurriedly went inside.

Boxer had followed the ambulance to the hospital. The watchman at the gate told him to park the vehicle in the parking lot and gave directions to it.

Boxer drove to the parking lot, parked the jeep. He, Ajay and Shotgun literally running went into the hospital. Aryan stretcher was been taken inside the hospital. Ajay went upto Neha followed by Boxer and Shotgun.

Boxer:(looking around)Neha, Dipika kahan hai?
Neha:Dipika reception me doctor ke bare me poochne ke liye gayi hai.
Boxer:(patting her on her shoulder) Okay, I'll come.

As he crossed Aryan, he stopped the stretcher, gave Aryan a look. Two drops of tears dropped onto Aryan's hands. He immediately wiped his tears and went inside.

At the reception...

Dipika:Excuse me...
Receptionist:Yes, madam..What can I do for you.'

The stretcher had by now come behind Dipika.
Dipika:(indicating behind)Hum Special Squad se hein. Its an emergency. Bullet hit. Critical situation hai.Please koi doctor ko bulaiye.
Receptionist:Don't worry madam. Mein intezam karti hoon.

The Receptionist picked up the phone and called over the intercom.Boxer came near Dipika, Dipika turned towards him and nodded. Neha, Ajay and Shotgun were with Aryan at a distance behind.

Receptionist: Doctor, ek emergency case hai. Bullet hit.

.............(doctor talking)

Receptionist:Unke saath Special Squad se aaye hein.

................

Receptionist:Okay Doctor..

Receptionist:(looking at the nurse who was carrying the saline bottle) Neena, unhein ICU tak le jana. Dr.Catherine D'Souza unhe dekhne aayenge.

The nurse nodded.

Receptionist:(to Dipika) Madam ICU second floor main hai. Aap unke saath jaiye.
Dipika:Thank you very much.

This she did really mean it from her heart. Aryan was to be treated immediately and at the present moment nothing could be more important for the SS team.

Dipika looked at her team and indicated them to follow. By now Ganesh had also come and they followed the stretcher.

The compounders carried Aryan to the lift. They went inside. As there was no place in the lift, the others took the second lift.

They came to the second floor. The compounders were already carrying Aryan into the ICU.They went to the ICU and waited outside. Just then a doctor came hurrying from the end of the corridor, to the left of the ICU.

Dipika was shocked and surprised to see her. Even the doctor saw her, stunned for a moment and understanding the emergency immediately went inside without speaking a word.

All of the SS team members and Ganesh were really tensed and didn't really know what to do. No one spoke a single word during this time. Each gave each other a look of comfort alone.

The doctor came outside after half an hour, with a serious expression.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
oye kya suspence hai yaar 😉 😉 mera tho dimag he dahi ho gaya.chak de patte story tho hit hai ji hit hai 👍🏼 great going yaar
Edited by smritisonkar - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Hoi, kya Smriti tum Punjaban ho? Tumhare encourage karne ka andaz he alag hai. Shukriya ji. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Hoi, kya Smriti tum Punjaban ho? Tumhare encourage karne ka andaz he alag hai. Shukriya ji. 😆

nahi re😕 .main tho pakki illahbadi hoon yaar😛.par wo andaz mujhe bahut pasand hai.is lea i compliment in that same andaz😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
hey..good going again....im guessin the doc is some old frnd of deepikas??? 😊 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
Andaz naya hai aur hume vo pasand hai. Isi mein continue karna. Oiy kudi!!!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: widluv2aryan

hey..good going again....im guessin the doc is some old frnd of deepikas??? 😊 😉

Awwwwww😕 Mera surprise gaya! Phir jayega kaise nahin, aap Guru hain mere, to meri soch ka pata aap ko chale ga hee.😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
sssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhh...!!!! theek hai...hum kuchh nahi bolenge!!! 😊

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