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Posted: 18 years ago
Vishal's cabin……

Dipika was pacing the room in between the tables and Vishal was seated watching her, voicing her thoughts…..

Dipika: Ek baat hume sochni hai Vishal… Humare theory ke hisaab se first floor me khoon hua tha, to kisine gun shot suni kyun nahi?

Vishal: Shayad silencer use ki gayi ho…

Dipika: (Shaking her head) Nahi Vishal… Silencer nahi… Kyunki Gun powder residue mili hai…

Vishal: (Sitting up straight) Kya? GPR??!! Matlab firing short range se gui thi?

Dipika: (Nodding) Haan… Ye information tumhe batane waali thi jab tum us watchman ko leke aaye the… Aur haan time of death kal raat sade saath baje…

Vishal: Hmmm…. Same time when the dance was going on…. To phir gun shot sunayi naa dene ka kaaran ye ho sakta hai…. Us samay dance show chal raha tha to it is obvious ki sound effect zyada hogi… To kisi ne nahi suna hoga…..

Dipika: Hmm… That's possible…. 🤔

Just then Haseena came knocked on the door and came in….

Haseena gave Dipika a piece of paper… Looking at Vishal and Dipika in turns answered….

Haseena: Vo phone number Hotel Samrat, Pune ka hai….

Vishal: Pune me hotel ka number???? Shayad ye aadmi wahan teheraa ho…. Main wahan ke police inspector se investigate karne ke liye kehta hoon….

Dipika nodded…. While Vishal picked the phone to call Pune police head quarters Dipika turned to Haseena smiling…. 😛

Dipika: Thank you Haseena…. Humari madad karne ke liye….

Haseena: Nahi madam… Thank you… Aapne mujhe itna trust worthy samajhkar ye kaam diya…. 👍🏼

Saying this Haseena went off to her place.... And seconds later just as Vishal put the phone down Neha stood near the entrance catching the door open….

Neha: Dipika tapes edit kar di….

Dipika: (Nodding) Theek hai Neha… Tapes play karne ke liye ready karna hum aate hain….

Neha nodded and went of to get ready… Vishal having heard the news came up to Dipika….

Vishal: Maine wahan ke police commissioner se baat ki hai... We should get some information soon enough.... (He and Dipika coming out of the cabin)Time of death kal raat sade saath bajhe thi… To us samay se kuch pehle aur baad me saare tapes ke parts check karenge to clue mil sakta hai…. 😊

Dipika agreed with him and both went to check the tapes….

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Posted: 18 years ago
thankru dear
i was just about to ask u 4 another part 😳

the parts were just fab

👏

bhabhi happy..........atlast everyone make her feel like a part of SS 😳 (bhai hotay tau bohut khush hotay) 😛

Vishal got change..........and made everyone got stunned

but the one who has to noticed didn't............poor vishal

being best friend, she should ask him what changed him 😉

the case is superb..........why can't i get any mystery idea

waiting4more

lolz
ana

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Posted: 18 years ago
Ana ko mera salaaaaaaammmmmm.... Ana sweet comments yaar... 😳

Hmm... Such me bhaiyya hote to bahut khush hote... Waise bhaiya ko pata chal jayega... Roz shaam ko jo bhabhi aur bhaiyya milte hain 😉

Hmm... Dipika ne bhi notice kiya hai Ana... Mere previous part ko padha to yaad hai when Dipika thinks that Vishal is the not the same he was when he came... How they became good friends?????? Wahi... Bas abhi poochne ki bari hai, aur jaldi poochegi bhi Dipika... 😛

Mystery ideas ana yoheen pop nahi karte.... Eventhough these are made ups they are a lot influenced by what I see in movies, read in novels and papers... Ek chota sa clue milta hai and I develop according to the needs in the FF... Try karna tumhe bhi zaroor milega 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey I got the time to read all parts of this FF
Rithi I must say that you are a good writer
waise I like this Vishal I think he is cute 😆
but still im missing my AS jodi in this FF

waiting for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
this case is great.

vishal is changing, but at the sametime dipika is changing as well.

dipika is now giving haseena to work on the case, that is very nice of dipika.

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Posted: 18 years ago
hmm..case complicated to lag raha hai...may b dat tapes would help dem.....
if dipika will ask vishal d reason, will he tell hr d truth??!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey...christmas ka to best gift diya tumne kritika...ab new yr par kya de rahi ho???!!!!!!!hehehehe 😍
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Posted: 18 years ago

Edited by cuteboomer9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Edited by maha_prakrti - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: brid

hey I got the time to read all parts of this FF
Rithi I must say that you are a good writer
waise I like this Vishal I think he is cute 😆
but still im missing my AS jodi in this FF

waiting for the next part

Thank you Mahi ve.... Miss AS here Mahi... Tabhi to Ana ke FF par hum fida honge😉

Vishal is cute??? Now that's my pleasure.. You like the character I invented😳

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