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Posted: 16 years ago

Hearing her name Dipika turned around and saw Vishal behind his car…. The dickey opened…

Vishal: Dipika! Tumhara suitcase kahan hai? Wahi laane gayi thi naa? Bhool…

He stopped mid sentence looking behind her, stunned and looked back at her in disbelief…. Seeing him stop talking mid way the others turned around to look at him…. They trailed his eye sight and smiled seeing what had made him stop mid sentence…. They smiled trying to be ignorant of the scene they were seeing but had trouble, very great trouble not noticing it!😃

Vishal folded his arms across his chest in an impressed way as Aryan walked over to his car with Dipika's suitcase and loaded it in his car…

Vishal: (As if Aryan was doing something very much important, in a very sincere tone) Fine! Portery se shuru kar rahe ho!😆

Aryan glared at him as other sniffled laughter and Dipika turned a bright red at his cheeky comment…..

Zubin: (Puzzled) Portery?!?!? Ye portery kya hoti hai? Pottery suna hai! Lekin portery?

Vishal: (Looking at him) Zubin! Pottery matlab pot banane waale ka kaam.... Right? (Zubin nodded in acknowledgement) Portery matlab porter ka kaam…. Tumhare chief jo hain ab porter ban gaye hain! Ab aage aage dekhna hai ki kya kya bante hain! (Putting his arms around his shoulder) Waise tum lecture de sakte ho ki kya kya bante hain…. Experience to bahut hai naa tumhe!😉

Zubin looked at him grinning sheepishly while Purvi standing beside Dipika blushed…. Dipika glared at Vishal while he just gave a shrug and closed the dickey of his car… He never could get enough of teasing her and now even others!😃

The group stopped chatting looking behind Dipika smiling and waving… Dipika turned around and saw Ajay, Neha come out of the house….

She wished Ajay good morning and hugged Neha…

Mrs. Malhotra who was standing with Vishal walked over to Ajay and Neha…. And he took her blessings….

Vishal: Hey newly wed! Aap hi ka intezaar tha… Aunties ka order hai ki aap logon ke nikalne ke baad hi hum sab nikalein… Aap logon ki gaadi taiiiiyaaaaaar hai!😛

Saying he indicated the specially decorated car for Ajay and Neha…. Ajay and Neha looked at each other smiling and blushing…..

Vishal: (Looking about sincerely😳) Waise Ajay… Tumne aaj portery nahi ki?😉

Others laughed out hearing Vishal phrase his newly found word, as Ajay and Neha looked at him puzzled….😆

Cynthia: (Mildly stunned😲) Ye Vishal to sab kuch aise bol jaate hain ki we cannot even retort…. Dipika!

Dipika looked at her helpless…. She looked around and her eyes fell on Sandhya who was locking her own car's door…. Smiling she indicated Vishal and Sandhya smiled her response walking over to him… Okay…. Now at least someone could get at him!

Before Vishal could get into the car she stopped him, one hand on her hip and one hand on the car door handle….

Sandhya: Baaki sab ki chodo…. Tum kab karne waale ho… (As if thinking) Vo kya tha? Po... Porter…. Portery? Haan… Portery!😃

As the others grinned hearing her comment they knew that Sandhya was the only one to whom Vishal succumbs… Else he and his cheeky comments always made people embarrass…. But they also knew he was just teasing and they liked his jovial mood around…. No offence in that…. But it was always good to see the teaser been teased!😃

Vishal: (Mildly stunned) Abhi ke liye uska irada nahi hai!

Saying he tried to by pass her but she blocked his way and retorted….

Sandhya: Ab nahi… Lekin kabhi to irada hoga…. Wahi pooch rahi hoon kab?

He moved closer to her and his eyes darkening said softly, with full emphasis…

Vishal: Abhi nahi…. Kabhi nahi!😳

And without a word he by passed her and went over to Ajay and Neha's car where everyone else was….

Dipika who was talking with Neha turned around to look at Sandhya and she frowned seeing the dark, hazy expression on her face… She had noticed Vishal tell something to her…. What did he say which had made her happy, glowing face go dark so instantly…. She hurried over to her and placing a hand over her shoulder called out to her….😕

Dipika: Sandhya!

Still dazed she turned to look at Dipika…. She responded with a weak smile which made Dipika feel sorry for her….

Dipika: Neha tumhe kab se bula rahi hai!

Sandhya looked over and saw Neha calling out to her…. Smiling she went over and hugging Neha wished her all the best….

Neha: Tum ghar aa rahi ho naa?❓

Sandhya: (Smiling) Sorry Neha… Mujhe aaj hospital jaana hai…. Mere patients mera intezaar kar rahe honge….

Neha: I understand…. Thank you very very much…. Mere marriage ko itna grand banane ke liye!

Sandhya: Thank you for inviting me…. Bahut dinon baad maine is tarah enjoy ki hai… I feel full rejuvenated to go back to my regular duties!

Dipika: (Coming over to them) Neha der ho rahi hai… Chalein?

Neha nodded and giving another hug to Sandhya bade her bye….

Boxer: (To Ajay and Neha grinning😃) Chalo nav var aur nav vadhu… Aapka rat aapka inteeezaaaar kar raha hai!

Ajay punched him playfully on his arms as he opened the door for Ajay….. From the other side Cynthia opened the door for Neha….

Dipika: (Bending down to look at Neha through the window) Tum log ab nikalo… Aunty ghar me intezaar kar rahe honge…. Hum bas peeche hi aate hain!

Boxer: (Giving a card to the driver) Ye address hai… (Looking back) Okay Maamu…. Bye!

As the car started the group followed the car to the gate and bade them bye…

Dipika stayed behind with Sandhya and still looking at the moving car asked….

Dipika: Vishal ne kya kaha?❓

Sandhya: (Barely managing a smile) Kuch nahi… As usual kuch bak bak kar raha tha!

Dipika turned around to look at her and saw that she looked thoughtful….

Dipika: Usne zaroor kuch aisa kaha hai jisse tum….

Sandhya: (Interrupting) Dipika! Usne aaj aisa kuch nahi kaha jo main pehle se nahi jaanti thi…. Bas usne aaj khulke bata di hai and that has kindled my thoughts….. Nothing else…. (Looking at her watch) Main bhi chalti hoon Dipika…. It is getting late!😊

Dipika: (Hugging her❓) Hospital directly jaa rahi ho?

Sandhya nodded while Dipika accompanied her to her car…

Dipika bade her bye as she drove off passing by Vishal's parked car… Near the gate she stopped the car besides Vishal who was coming back from the gate…. Even though he wanted to move on he couldn't…. He stopped and looked down at her….💔

She looked at him for a long while…. He wanted to move away from there, but his legs heavy with his heart feeling his deep emotion stood rooted to the space…. Taking a deep breath, still looking at him she said…

Sandhya: Aaj Haseena ko check up ke liye laana hai! Bhooliye ga mat Abbas ji!

She gave a glance towards Boxer who had just reached them… Boxer looked at her astonished she had remembered Haseena's check up date and nodded his response…

Purvi who was coming with Cynthia having heard Sandhya talking to Boxer stopped surprised…. Bending down to look at her clearly Purvi asked…

Purvi: Wah Sandhya! Tumhe Haseena ki check up date yaad hai? Without consulting your schedule?👍🏼

Sandhya: (Glancing at Vishal and back at Purvi) Main mere patients me hamesha se hi zyada interest leti hoon Purvi… Aur ye patient to (Looking at Vishal) mere kisi khaas ki wajah se mere paas aayi hai.… (Smiling back at Purvi) Haseena ab meri achchi dost bhi ban gayi hai…. Isliye professional aur (Looking back at Vishal) personal interest hai meri! (Bading bye to the others) Main ab chalti hoon! Keep in touch!😊

Cynthia: (Leant in to give a small hug to Sandhya🤗) Bye Sandhya! Miss you! Haan of course ab sabka milna jhulna to hota rahega!

Bading bye to everyone she drove off…

The others made way to their cars… Vishal stood his place as he looked her drive away… He hoped… Prayed… Again… Wished that this would be the last time he saw her even though his heart ached at the thought…. 😕

She looked at him through the rear view mirror till she turned around the drive way… She hoped…. Prayed…. Wished that this wouldn't be the last time she was seeing him… She could never bear the thought in itself… What would she do if it would become reality? Her heart ached at the thought!😕

She forced herself to concentrate on her driving thinking about the busy day ahead at the hospital!

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Posted: 16 years ago

While Dipika waited for the others she saw Sandhya's car stop beside Vishal…. Boxer was nodding… Some conversation was going on….. Just then she felt a hand clasp around her left hand, entwining his fingers with hers… Smiling she looked up at him smiling as he pulled her closer…. ☺️

Suddenly there was a tug and Dipika's hand was pulled away from his… Startled she looked around and saw Vishal shunting her towards their car…. Opening the front passenger door he indicated her to get in standing there with a strange expression on his face…. 😃

Dipika glared at him and looked behind at a visibly upset Aryan....😡

Dipika: Vishal! That was rude!!!!

Pushing her inside he shut the door and coming over to the driver's side said…

Vishal: We are getting late! Tumhare guturgoo ke liye abhi waqt nahi hai! (He put his head out smiling and called out to his mother) Maa chaliye! Hey Boxer! Chalein? Aur kis ke liye wait kar rahe hain?

Mrs. Malhotra who was talking to Purvi and Cynthia looked at him and told him to wait….

Mrs. Malhotra: (To the others) Chalo sab… Der ho rahi hai… Ajay Neha ke ghar me sab intezaar kar rahe honge!

The others hurried to get into their cars… Aryan accompanied Mrs. Malhotra to Vishal's car… He helped her get in and shutting the door bent down…. He was actually bading his Maasi Maa bye, but his eyes and hands were set for someone else….

Dipika had lifted her hand to pull down the seat belt to fasten it when his hand scraped against hers…. Surprised she gasped…😳

Vishal: (Concerned😕) Kya hua?

Dipika: (Pulling down the seat belt) Nahi…. Bas.... I felt something scrape against my hand! Nothing!

Vishal looked at her frowning and glanced back at his mother…

Vishal: Chalein maa? ❓

Mrs. Malhotra: Haan…. (Taking a look behind) Sab ke liye gaadi hai naa…. (Looking at Aryan) Agar nahi to koi is gaadi me bhi aa sakta hai!

Dipika fastening the seat belt had casually placed her hand on the window….

Aryan bent down to answer his Maasi Maa but his hands smoothed across the front passenger window to find her hands…. When she felt the warmth of his hand on hers she smiled….

Aryan: Sabke liye gaadi hai Maasi Maa…

She glanced sideways at his hand trying not to be conspicuous…. She tried to move away her hand but he had placed his hands firmly on her fingers…. She looked at him through her side view mirror while he side glanced at her as he was saying….❤️

Aryan: Aap log pehle nikaliye, hum peeche aate hain!

Vishal: (Starting the car) Haan of course…. Lekin…. Pehle haath chodo to hi gaadi nikal sakoonga naa? Warna agar tumhe chot lag gayi to mujhe hospital me admit hona padega!

Hearing his tart comment Aryan straightened releasing his hand from her grip while Dipika slid her hand down onto her lap…. Mrs. Malhotra had noticed what Vishal had too, about Aryan's hand…. But she had tactfully ignored it…. Well…. Her son was doing it on purpose to tease Aryan and Dipika she knew…. But what she didn't understand was…😃

Mrs. Malhotra: Vishal… Agar Aryan ko chot lagti hai to tum kyun hospital me admit hoge?

Vishal: (Shifting the gear) Maa…. Agar Aryan ko chot lagti hai to meri pyaari dost (Glancing sideways at Dipika) jo yahan hain, mujhe to aise chodengi nahi… Maar maar bharta naa bana deti… Phir hospital me kise admit hona padega?😉

At this Mrs. Malhotra smiled and looked at Aryan who was pointedly looking elsewhere…. She hit Vishal on the shoulder and said….😆

Mrs. Malhotra: Ab bas bas…. Bahut bolta hai…. Gaadi nikaal! Bye Aryan!

Aryan bade them bye and stood there till the car disappeared around the drive way corner….

Dipika watched him through the side view mirror till his image diminished… Somewhat this small separation between them was laden heavy in her heart…. Sweet torture…. She resigned back defeated by her own heart….

Vishal: (Turning on to the main road) I need that side view mirror to watch the traffic…. Don't eat it!

Startled Dipika came out of her thoughts and looked at Vishal…. Oh… This friend of hers was sweetly irritating and frustrating…. Just then he stopped his car and cursed under his breath at the traffic block ahead….

Dipika: Ghabarana mat… Your mirror is safe and sound….

Vishal: (With mock sternness) Thank you! Sab uski galti hai… Romance karne ki jagah nahi hai? Ab uski wajah se hum late ho rahe hain!😳

Dipika: (Stunned) Vishal! Agar traffic block hoti hai to isme Aryan ki kya galti hai? Waise… (Pausing and then continuing) Aankhein tumhari har jagah hoti hai kya?

Looking sideways at her he grinned and said….😃

Vishal: Police waala hoon madam…. Aankhein upar, neeche, aage, peeche sab jagah ghumana padta hai…. Warna kuch log hain jo sir pe mirchi laga dete hain!

Dipika: (Widening her eyes at his open retort) Vishal!😳

Vishal: (In the same tone) Dipika! 😳

Dipika: Tch… Tum to naa.…

Vishal: Main to kya?❓

Dipika: Hmpf!

Vishal: Hmpf!

Dipika: (Irritated that he was copying her) You are irritating!

Vishal: Of course dost hoon kiska? 😉

He started the car as the traffic moved on….

Dipika: (Sternly😡) You mean to say I am irritating!?

Vishal: Well if you say so then!

Dipika: I didn't say anything!

Vishal: You did just now!

Dipika: But I didn't say that!

Vishal: Whatever…. But you did say something naa!

Dipika: (Rolling her eyes) Vishal!😒

Vishal: Dipika!

Dipika: (Folding her hands) Oh no! Not all over again…. (Fake crying) Please…. Sir…. Mujhe paksh dijiye!😕

Vishal: (Satisfied😔) Hmm….. Ek shart par… (As Dipika looked at him puzzled) Aryan ko irritate karna mera habit hai…. I have got to do it…. So don't stop me from doing it….

Dipika: Ah! Agar kehti bhi to tum maante jaise!

Vishal: (Glancing at her) Well been my cousin costs something right?

Dipika hit him on his arm a little harder than expected…. He made a face out of it and immediately concerned she rubbed the place and said….

Dipika: Oh! Sorry! Bahut dard ho raha hai!

Vishal: (Smiling at him) Hey no…. Tum phir dosti ka usool tod rahi ho… Dosti me…

Smiling she chorused with him "No sorries… No thank yous!"😃

Laughter echoed inside the car as they happily chatted about the marriage and celebrations!

Seated behind Mrs. Malhotra silently watched smiling the beautiful bond of friendship gleaming between Dipika and her son!⭐️

Vishal had changed so much… He was outright stubborn…. Never much caring for anyone…. Strict police officer…. Stern…. Rough.… His years of service had made him so…. He had not much considered even coming home before, stating profession as his reason…. But of course he loved his mother and father very much!

But now….

In these two years she had seen a remarkable change in her son…. He had become lively…. Caring…. Responsible…. He was strict and rough in his profession as always where he never compromised… But personally he had made a remarkable discovery out of him…. He had become the son she had always wanted him to be…. Maintaing a perfect balance between professional and personal life….

She was happy he had stopped going for undercover operations and joined the CBI permanently…. He was the adventurous type, trying out new things…. He was always in one sting operation or another…. Even though she was proud of him been in the force saving the nation, she could never approve of him going for operations which demanded her not to contact her son for long long months…. Why for people in military too, they could contact teir family and their family them…. But here she couldn't speak to him unless and until he contacted…. 😊

Now…. Everything was fine…. He was within her reach…. He had friends who took care of him more than her…. And she had a very prospective family to look forward to!👏

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Posted: 16 years ago

Ajay's Home…..

Ghar Pravesh was a grand affair….

Neha was asked to tilt the brass rice pot and enter the house…. Mrs. Desai put a red duppatta over her head… It was Mrs. Desai's when she had become as daughter-in-law of the Desai family…. Neha was then taken straight to the Pooja Room for lighting the lamp and praying for a healthy, wealthy and prosperous life ahead….😊

Many a times Neha had come to this home… She had never felt strange or uneasy…. But today….. She felt strange in the right sense…. When her position changed from a lover to a wife the vision with which she looked at her home also changed….. Her home!?!?? Did she just think that? Home!!!! So home was like this… She had a home before marriage too… But that was hardly where you lived because living alone never gave a building the feel of a home!😳

Refreshments were been served and everyone was sitting around talking, relaxed….

After a while….

The group looked at each other indicating it was getting late…. And they had to leave…. They were not going to office…. They had taken today off too… But still they all needed to get back and rejuvenate themselves for office tomorrow….

Dipika looked at Cynthia who nodded and from her bag removed an envelope…. She gave it to Aryan who giving it to Ajay and Neha said…

Aryan: Ajay! Neha! Ye aap ke liye!😊

Ajay: (Taking the envelope surprised) Ye kya hai?

Vishal: Kholke to dekho pehle!

Surprised Ajay opened the envelope and out fell a small folder…. He gave the folder to Neha as he fished inside the envelope and brought out four tickets…. Air tickets!

Neha: (Opening the folder exclaimed) France!😛

Purvi: (Smilin😊g) Haan… Hum saaabbb ki taraf se tum dono ke liye shaadi ka gift!

Ajay: (Awed) Lekin guys itna sab kuch?!? 😲

Boxer: Warna Maamu aap log to hume taana dete rahoge ki dekho shaadi ka gift hi nahi diya! Hum is bure daag se kyun jeeyein?😉

Neha: Aap logon ne pehle hi bahut kuch kiya hai…. Shaadi ki sab preprations se leke ab tak…

Shotgun: Humne kya kiya hai Neha? Sab to us marriage contract waale ne kiya!

Dipika: Haan we just took part…. Aur aisa waise kuch kaam kiya!

Ajay: Ye aisa waisa hi bahut tha…. Cards printing, distributing…

Vishal: Silence…. Yaar…. Mouka mila hai hai duniya ghoomne ki to ghoomke aao naa, itna sawaal poochta hai…

Zubin: Sachchi…. Agar tum nahi jaana chahate to hume de do… (Glancing at Purvi) 😃

Purvi: (Shocked) Zubin!😲

As the others laughed Ajay asked confused….😆

Ajay: (To his mother) Lekin maa… Aapne kaha tha ki ghoomne ka intezaam aap karengi….

Neha: (Puzzled) Haan… Aur aapne humse poocha bhi ki India me koun si jagah ghoomna pasand karenge…. Phir…

Aryan: Neha… Isme itna sochne ki kya baat hai? Aunty ne hi arrange karna chaha…. She wanted our help to decide the places….. Tab hume ye idea aaya ki kyun naa aap logon ko bahar bhejh diya jaaye… India to aap log khud baad me ghoom sakte hain…. Lekin aise opportunity baar baar nahi aati naa!

Dipika: Exactly… Isilye just shun out all the grateful feelings and get ready to leave….. Kal early morning flight hai!

Ajay and Neha: (Stunned) Kal!??!?😲

Mrs. Naik: Isme itna surprise kyun ho rahe ho?

Neha: Lekin maa… Tickets keh rahe hain ki pandrah din…. In and around France! Lekin humne to leave….

Boxer: (Interrupting her) Are yaar…. Aap log kitna sochte ho…. Diya hai to jao naa…. Sawaal pe sawaal kiye jaa rahe ho!😕

Dipika: Worry not Neha… Tumhare Chief hain naa (Glancing at Aryan who was looking at her) Unhone graciously tumhare leave ko extend kar di hai!

Ajay: Aryan!😊

Aryan: Hey… You guys have earned it…. Jab se humne Special Squad join ki hai tab se zyada leave liye, Sundays ko bhi kaam kiya hai… Requires a compensation for that right!

As the others nodded Shotgun said….

Shotgun: Guys… Nikalein?? Mom aaj wapas aa raheen hain… She must be home in fact…

As the others acknowledged…. With a heavy heart Mrs. Naik went over to Neha…. Neha who was talking to Dipika stopped and looked at her mother…. One look at her and she knew the bitter moment of separation had come… Upset she hugged her mother….

Neha: Maa!

Mrs. Naik: Neha!

After a strong affectionate hug they parted and Mrs. Naik giving a feeble smile said…🤗

Mrs. Naik: Tum samajhdaar ho…. Kuch bhi kehene ki zaroorat nahi hai! Just… (Pausing) Take care!

Neha: Maa! Ek aur din ke liye ruk jayiye naa….

Mrs. Naik: Lekin…

Mrs. Desai: Neha theek hi to keh rahi hai Samdhan ji… Kal inhe airport send off karke chale jayiyega!

Mrs. Naik: (Not wanting to stay in her daughter's home) Ma….

Mrs. Malhotra: Maan lijiye…. Beti keh rahi hai!

As Mrs. Naik looked unconvinced….😒

Ajay: Mummy ji!

Hearing it Mrs. Naik looked at Ajay surprised… The others also smiled hearing Ajay Desai calling someone like that so affectionately….😳

Ajay: (Going over to Mrs. Naik) Ruk jayiye naa… Apne Damaad ke saath thoda time to spend kijiye…

Mrs. Naik looked at everyone who nodded their response and finally she agreed….

Mrs. Naik: (Smiling) Damaad ji kehte hain to manana padega!😊

There were cheers around the hall as everyone cheered!👏

Dipika: Aunty! Phir hum chalte hain…

Mrs. Desai: Tum log bhi chaho to ruk lo beta… Lunch karke jayenge!

Dipika: (Looking at the others) Nahi aunty…. Aaj nahi… Ab to get togethers to hote rahenge… Sab bahut tired hain…. Ghar jaake rest nahi li to kal office nahi jaa sakenge!

Vishal: Haan… Waise bhi mujhe abhi office jaana hai report karne…. Thoda kuch kaam aa gaya!😊

Neha: Guys… Lekin kal send off karne to aaoge naa?❓

Cynthia: Of course Neha… We can never miss it for anything!

The others also bade bye and left to their respective homes…. Vishal dropping Dipika and Mrs. Malhotra at their respective homes on his way to office!😊

Finally……………………………………………………………………………….😃

A grand celebration…. Came to a romantic ending!❤️

This memorable marriage of Ajay and Neha was an event which can never be forgotten by anyone who attended it even if they wanted to…. It had been grand and celebrative…. With many simulatenous happy and sad moments occurring…. But nevertheless…..😳

It was an event to be registered in Gold! ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

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Posted: 16 years ago
truly said di ,It was an event to be registered in Gold! ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️
ek dam sahi,no one can forget such a lovely lovely celebrations,thanks to u di,for writing so so beautifully,thanks


You have made me speechlessssss,superb di,excellent,wonderful,lovely lovely,it's just great
loved each and every word 😛
Neha aur Deepika ko chidana😆,unka blush😳,Mrs.Naik aur Neha ka conversation👏,unki feeling⭐️ ,AD eye lock session during breakfast😳 😆,Vishal teasing 😉 😆,then AN romance☺️ ,Ad romance near pillars☺️,Deepika's excuse😆,Mrs.Malohtra 's feeling⭐️,Aryan takiing Deepika's suitcase😳 😃 ,Sandhya -Vishal conversation⭐️,there feelings⭐️,Sandhya 's passion for her duty⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️Aryan's grip😳,Vishal teasing😡 😆 😆 ,Deepika -Vishal small nok jhok😆,grishpraveesh👍🏼,ofcourse lovely gift 🤗⭐️⭐️,and chief extending AN holiday👏,that too informed by Deepika😃 ,simply smimply loved it😃
Aja and Neha were lovely ,Ajay's feeling abt responsiblitlities and Neha assurring him was great ,And Vishal ji ko sandhya ke saath jaldi engage karna padega Aru nahi toh Vishal tumhe yoh hi tease karta rahega😆
And Deepika ,duppataa attak gaya,kisme haan,Pillar's main yaa yaa Aryan ke fingers main😉
loved the way she tried to make excuse😆,and Aryan very very naughty ,Saahi yaa galat😉
Aryan telling Beta-Bahu 😳 😭 khushi ke aasu ⭐️superb superb di


thanks di thank you very much for writing such a lovely lovely updates


last but not least you know naaaaaaaaaaa ,hum logo ko jitna bhi mille kam hai


yeh Dil maange more and more









Edited by ruha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
thank u soooooooooooooooo much for the update🤗... i'm gonna read it....
but will comment later....bcz busy today 😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
I have a problem....I have some issues regarding your identity Di...🤔

Are you sure you are some software engineer in her 20s???? Very Doubtful!

Guys, whaddya think??? I suppose this is some well known writer or maybe the creative head of Special Squad who wanted to continue the show, but couldn't because of some inevitable reasons. And so resorted to writing for the forum to maintain anonymity and see how much interest it garners...........😃


How do you manage to write so well Di!!!!!!!!!!! Everytime I think this was the best update ever, you surprise me immensely in the next post!

I was so red while reading the AN part that you could paint an entire apartment using the colour of my cheeks!! AD were superb......Am so happy to see them together. Let's see how this love transforms in the workplace...The atmostphere was fantastic...

Finally the wedding ended. Di, you had been so graphic in your details that besides the team, even I feel exhausted after attending the marraige (if I may say so...😊)

I thank God for the day I discovered this forum...I would have missed so much if I hadn't...............




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Posted: 16 years ago
wow wow wow.................
yar seriously kya likhun kuch nahi soojta........ u always make us speech less yar😃.......hamesh har update hi super dooper hit hoti hai tumari😉.....
may be iss se kuch zada....... but thts gr8 yar👏 ⭐️ 👏......
u r super dooper cool yar 😉 😳
i looovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeee ur update 😳.............

its awesome, fantastic, gr8, superb, marvellous,f fabolous, wonderful, excellent and and and hmmmmmmmmm dehka pir blank ho gaye .....
kya boloon 😕

zabardast update yar....dhoo dala 👍🏼......har bar surprise karti ho...har new update pehle se bhi zada dhamake dar hoti hai 👏.......

everthing in ur update was superb ⭐️......... every emotion, every dialogue, every expression, everything yar excellent...jst wowwwwwwwwwww 😃

oh ho bechari neha kitna cherti hain larkian use 😆..... or hamari dipi ko bhi,..... or neha oh shooo shweet na.....neha ki mummy feeling sad na 😭....jana jho hai ab
and AJ scene ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
oh GOD iss ko parh ke thu me bhi blush kar rahi hoon☺️
chalo khush raho jeete raho......khoob phalu pholoo 😳 😆

and AD scene ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
ohoooooooooo....oh aru kitnnnnnnna romantic hai☺️ .....wowww but kitna naughty bhi hai😆......... but really sweet and cool😃...and i'm really happy seeing them together..... i love thier couple 😳...... made for each other ❤️....
hamesha aise hi rehna ⭐️........

and vishalllllllllll.... really krithika u know i really liked his comment on AD and i really laugh while reading them 😆...he is Mr. gr8....vishal the great ⭐️

greh parvesh bhi ho gaya lakshmi ka or honey moon ki bhi preprations ho gaye...hmmm thts lovely👍🏼...sab ne arrange kia thts awesome😃...special squad is really special ⭐️

so wedding comes to an end....tired na...but really enjoy every function, every ritual of the wedding..... thts gr8👏

loved each and every part of ur update....its awesome ⭐️...jitni tareef ki jaye utni kam hai....... really really really superbbbbbbbbbb 👏

thnx alooooooooooooooooooooooooooot for the update😳
i really enjoyed reading this.................... tum hame itna khush kar deti ho....thnx yara.... u r soo sweet 😳

but i never forget to write my old sentence 😛
plz plz plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
update soon na................ we want more and more and more and moreeeeeeeeee.................................... and so on infinity 😳 😃
all i could say its bravo




Edited by Veena.. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was awesome and awesome.
i loved the both updates.
sorry for the late commenting.
i can not wait when aryan and dipika gets married.
vishal your turn will also come as well.
ajay n neha's marrige was beautifual.
thanks for the wonderful updates.
Edited by sam78 - 16 years ago
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I don't think we need to say that it was a Blast.......... Mindblowing...........

And yes what Aashmi is Totally correct....... You are such a perfectionist....................

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Awesome................................................... Lovely


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Posted: 16 years ago
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 Khushi ke annsoon deariues.... Your comments always overwhelm me so much! 😭 😳 😳
@Pooja: My my Pooja! Thank you sooooooooooo muchhhhhh for that card...... I can now understand fully how welll you look forward to me updates and read them ⭐️
Well everyone gets their turn one day and defintely when Vishal gets his, we know how he is gonna be treated! 😳
@Aashmi: Vove vove..... Bahut hi zyada exaggeration hai yaar! I mean, itna bhi un creatives ke saath compare mat karna..... But I am really obliged to think you liked the updates so so much ⭐️ As for the wedding, i am also exhausted writing about it and all 😆 I need a break too 😃
@Veena: Me me me me thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss a lot Veena dear, loved that you are not able to express you feelings with the update.... You say nothing but say everything 😳
And I know you await updates very eagerly, so a small update shall be on its way very soon! 😃
@sam: Sam please, aage se sorry mat kehena.... I perfectly understand how you might be held up dear! thanks for those descriptions which you liked! ⭐️
@Swati: Sonaki dear, thanks a lot.... and will await you another round of comments for my next udpate! 😃

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