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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

yaaay! aapko pata nahin, is update dekhkar kitni khush ho gayi thi main...it was wonderful. thank you!

love,
Anju

Thank you Anjum ji... Waise kuch jaldi hi comment kar di... Agla part bhi post hua hai, padna zaroor! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
Ya, I read the whole thing, just didn't get around to commenting on the full bit. It was really good...nice to see Aryan's new attitude towards his love!
~Anju
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

Ya, I read the whole thing, just didn't get around to commenting on the full bit. It was really good...nice to see Aryan's new attitude towards his love!

~Anju

thank you so much Anju 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

The garba was in full swing…. The guys and girls had formed circles and were dancing around clapping their hands enjoying the Indian dance! 👏

Not many of them knew how to dance garba, so of course Mrs. Desai was given the courtesy to teach them the initial steps… Mrs.Desai bent forward clapping her hands and straightened…. She rotated on her spot clapping her hands behind her…. And then repeated the steps….

Mrs.Desai: Dekha kitna aasaan hai! Isme aise hi haath chalana….. Pair aur apne shareer ko kisi bhi angle me mod do! Bas!

Purvi: (Clapping her hands😛) Wonderful aunty…. Aap to garba ki dance academy khol sakteen hain!

Mrs.Desai: (Blushing a little😳) Chal hat pagali… Gujarati hokar garba naa aata ho, aisa ho sakta hai kya?

Neha: Hua to hai Mummy ji! (Glancing at Ajay standing a few feet away) Kisi Gujrati ko nahi aata hai garba! Face reading jitna seekha hai usne, utna to bilkul bhi garba nahi!

Mrs.Desai: (Surprisingly) Neha! Ye tum kya keh rahe ho? Ajay to…

Ajay: (Casually) Mom! Ek minute….

Ajay looked at Neha smiling shaking his head…. Walking over to her…. He took her hand and pulled her closer to him, as she looked up at him enjoying the closeness but not showing it on her face…. Others around smiled to themselves seeing the to-be-bride and to-be-groom together…. ☺️

Ajay: Mujhe kabhi garba dance karte hue dekha hai tumne? Ki aise keh rahe ho?

Neha: (Smiling with a challenging look) Thoda bahut dance kya kar liya ki sab form ke dance aate hain tumhe Ajay Desai! Ye folk dance hai! Indian folk dance!

Ajay: Haan to main Indian nahi hoon? Vo bhi Gujarati? Kyun to-be-Mrs.Neha Desai!

Hearing this Neha was startled for a moment… Out of sheer happiness…. Hearing her name transformation for the first time, that too from Ajay she was stumbled by heart…. Resisting herself knowing Ajay was teasing her, she held on to her stern expression and said…. 😳

Neha: (Twisting free of his hand) Such me? Matlab tumhe garba aata hai? To phir theek hai… (Walking backwards to the girls) To zara naachke dikhana…. Tabhi manoongi!

Boxer: (Walking over to Ajay) This is interesting…. Lekin such me Ajay…. Hume nahi pata tha ki tumhe garba aati hai! Aati hai naa? 😕

Ajay: Bhai aap bhi naa! (Still smiling looked at Neha who had her arms crossed) Ye to kismat ka khel hai Boxer…. Ki meri hone waali biwi ko, phir bhi kya kya karke shaadi ke mandap tak laana pad raha hai!

Shotgun: To ho jaaye!? (As Ajay nodded still looking at Neha) Music please!

The Gujarati DJ for the night nodded and switched over to a peppy garba number!

Ajay geared for another performance of the night, indicated to the garba DJ who had come in specially for the night….. He also pulled in all the guys with him, because garba was not danced single….

Dipika who had heard the whole conversation whispered to Neha impressed….

Dipika: Kya baat hai Neha! Ajay se aisa sawaal? 😉

Neha: (Looking at Ajay lovingly who was getting the guys ready for the dance😳) Bas…. Ajay ko garba dance karte hue dekhna chahathi thi…. (Glancing) Tumhe to uske baare me pata hai… Agar main yoheen keheti to maanta nahi… Bahut nakhare karta…. Isliye thoda chidaya…. (Looking back at Ajay who looked back at her challenging)

Purvi: (Smiled looking at the other girls who also nodded understanding) Ohhh!! Wow…. Ye to kamaal ho gaya! (Doubtfully🤔) Lekin Neha such me Ajay ko garba aata hai?

Neha: Purvi! Aisa kya pooch liya? Ajay to garba me expert hai…. Usne schools me garba me kayi prizes jeete hain…. Bas ye ki college aane ke baad, uske cool dude ke image ko maintain karne vo garba dance nahi karta tha… Isliye aaj thoda use yaad dila diya!

Cynthia Ah hunh…. 😃 Wah bhai wah.... Is nazariye se humne dekha hi nahi.... Shaadi se pehle hi itna naachta hai, to shaadi ke baad to....

Neha: (Smiling blushing😳) Bilkul bhi nahi.... After marriage we are going to live together, not under each other! It's just that when we are in love we just like to tease the other person…. You know, just playfully… Aur ye bhi sahi hai, ki ek chota sa insecurity reheta hai pyaar karte waqt…. Possessiveness aa jaati hai iski wajah se! But…. That's that… Now everything will change!

Nodding Cynthia smiled and squeezed her hand responding her agreement….

Sandhya: Waise agar naachne bulayein, to jaoge? Ki tum bhi nakhre….

Neha: (Looking at her) Tum batao! Challenge to maine ki hai… Naach to vo zaroor dega… Ab unke saath hum sabko naachna hai ya nahi tum batao…. Kyunki aaj is sangeet ki head maan lo tum ho….

Sandhya: Ah… I like this… Waise agar maine naa kar di to? ❓

Hearing it Neha's smile slowly started to disappear, but for sake she tried not to show it…. But Sandhya had noticed it!

Sandhya: Achcha baba…. Ek kaam karte hain… Agar…. Ajay ne tumhe impress kar diya aur tumse style me dance karne ke liye tumhara haath maanga, to hum naachenge…. Warna to….

Neha hugged her and said…. 🤗

Neha: Matlab ki aaj zaroor is garba me highlight performance yahi hoga!

Sandhya nodded back her response….

All the girls' attention was pulled back to the dancers as the music came on!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

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--FEMALE--

Rangeelo maaro dholna

Dholnaaaaaa vee

The guys moved about forming a straight line, with Ajay in the center…. Then Mr. Malhotra and Mr. Agarwal too, to the surprises of their wives and childred!

--FEMALE--

Rangeelo maaro dholna

Dholnaaaaaa vee

They took up their positions as the other guests made space for them....

--MUSIC--

They clapped their hands and amongst themselves to get the mood right for the song! 👏

--FEMALE--

A ra ra ra ara ra ra

Aayo re maaro dholna

And the dance began.... The guys bent forward moving their hands in a gujrati style, and rotated on the spot perfectly with their hand behind their backs!

--FEMALE--

O o o o o....

The guys had tough time controlling their smiles..... Song may not be the one guys danced for, but definitely it was perfect was garba raas performance!

Even though the elder men couldn't dance as much as the other guys did, they did like moving their legs at least for the tune standing with t he group and encouraging them!

--FEMALE--

Aayo re aayo re aayo re maaro dholna

The guys then formed a circle and they followed Ajay as he clapped his hands in and moved out, with alternate guys moving in!🥳

--FEMALE--

A ra ra ra ra a ra ra

Aayo re maaro dholna

They then hooked hands and turned around.... Their hands interlocking in the process…. Then they moved in a circle perfectly coordinating to the music.….

It said that to tell whether the rice is cooked one sample is enough and here this sample was more than enough to tell that the guys' especially Ajay didn't say he knew garba for sake!

--MALE--

Oooooooo

The guys left each other hands and again formed a circle…. Clapping their hands they jumped high right and left landing smoothly on their feet!⭐️

--FEMALE--

Rangeelo maaro dholna

Dholnaaaaa

Dholnaaaaaaa vee

The girls enjoyed the music and dance…. So they all set in the mood clapping their hand and shaking their shoulders to the music!👏

--FEMALE--

A ra ra ra a ra ra

aayo re maaro dholna

They all knelt down at the same time and danced moving their hands about, touching the floor and leaning back, earning claps from everyone around!

Neha and the girls clapping their hands looked at the guys dancing laughing amongst themselves…. But really Ajay was really good at garba….. As were the other guys…. No one had imagined this cool dude to know Indian dance!

After a round of dancing Ajay glanced at Neha with winning look….. Neha smiled and indicated she was impressed…. In between his dance he did a small movement like bowing his thanks to her compliments!😉

--FEMALE--

A aayo re aayo re maaro dholna

Standing up they moved about like forming a position, but only to realise they guys were approaching their partners....

Of course…. Dance without girls was in no way fun!😳

--MALE--

Pyaar ke geet zara sunle

They were standing in front of the girls but without looking at them extending their hands outwards, looking straight…. The girl's understood they were asking for a dance, but of course with a little pride that they had won!👍🏼

--MALE--

Ooo… Pyaar ke geet zara sunle

The girls looked at each other smiling…. Sandhya who was standing at the end of the line smiled and nodded and so they gave in and gave their hands as a gift for dancing for them!

--MALE--

Mein aaya reeeee

Once the girls kept their hands on the guy's hands their smiles widened as they pulled them, rotating them towards them fast!😳

--CHORUS--

Oooooo….

--MUSIC--

Hands around their waists they moved to the fast music, shaking their legs to the tune….

Shotgun with Cynthia…. Zubin with Purvi…. Boxer with one of Ajay's friends…. And the other guys' respectively with their partners…. 😍

As ill luck would have it Dipika was a little farther away from Aryan…. And of course he didn't yet have the courage to go and approach her directly for a dance! So when he extended his hand to Aadhya with a nod from him, Aadhya became his partner!

Dipika standing with Mrs. Malhotra looked at him and smiled to herself… Even if Aryan would have asked her for a dance she wouldn't have been able to accept it… She wasn't yet into it now!

As ill luck would have it on other side…. Sandhya hadn't expected Vishal to ask her for a dance but she hadn't expected to ask HER for a dance! Her jovial mood which had set in with the garba disappeared as she saw Vishal enjoying his dance with the girl!😡

How he had denied dancing with her when they had started the garba…. Making all sorts of resons he could think of!

--FEMALE--

O mare aag na tu vaare

Aisa mohat rup saja re

Neele peele lal gulabi

Ho gaye nain gajara re

Alternatively a guy and a girl formed lines and groups…. One hand behind their head and the other moving in front of them all of them dancing…. The girls towards the guys and pinched their cheeks in a "Cho chweet" gesture…. Hands on their hips they jumped forward and backward! 😃

--FEMALE--

Are gaare gaare gaare

Koi gaav aaya bhare

Dholi jhamke dhol baja re

Dholi jhamke dhol baja re

Together everyone from young to old danced forming small and big circles in the big hall….

Vishal dancing around clapping his hands looked about and noticed that Dipika was standing not dancing…. He followed her gaze and saw her looking at Aryan dancing with Aadhya…. Smiling, he danced his way to the end of the crowd…. And before she knew what happened he pulled in Dipika with him…..🥳

--MALE--

Hooooooooooooooo

Startled Dipika glared at him but Vishal took her hands and made her dance with him… Vishal pleaded to her and she agreed…. So she too danced along, the step others were doing…. Alternating moving your hands and legs, with your elbows like hitting your knees….

--FEMALE--

Rangeelo maaro dholna

Dholna vee…. Hey…

Happy more than ever, Vishal put the duppatta over Dipika's head and made her catch it… Then catching it the girls circled on their spot as the guys also followed moving their hand over their head! 😊

--FEMALE--

A ra ra ra a ra ra ra

Aayo re maaro dholna

The dancers formed a circle…. A very big one….

The girls caught their skirts, salwar tops and jumped alternatively between the guys as the guys also moved around rotating having their hands over their waist!

--FEMALE--

A aayo re aayo re aayo re maaro dholna

During the movement Dipika and Aryan came face to face for a second…. Immediately shying away both of them continued their dance, smiling to themselves…. Moving away Dipika for a second glanced back but Aryan was busy dancing…. Smiling she turned back to concentrate on the dance…. 😳

--MUSIC--

Just as she turned Aryan turned to look at her and saw her moving around Vishal completing their circle…. She was a good… Damn good dancer….. And seeing her so happy and celebrating he liked it very much! ☺️

--CHORUS--

Gori aaye hain aaye hain sajan

Dekho kaisa milan ho gaya hai

The dancers pushed Ajay and Neha to the center…. The girls formed the inner circle while the guys formed the outer one……

Clapping their hands the girls moved in while the guys moved out!

The girl dancing with Vishal who had to be left out for a while when he had pulled in Dipika, joined Vishal again much to his hatred!!

Ajay slowly leant towards Neha and whispered….. 😳

Ajay: Naach ke dikha diya…. Waise agar yoheen keh deti to bhi naachta…. Chidane ki zaroorat nahi thi!

Neha looked at him surprised as Ajay moving away her hair away from her face said…. 😲

Ajay: Mere baare me mujhse zyada tum jaanti ho…. Isliye mujhe garba aata hai, ye bhi zaroor jaanti hogi…. Isliye no doubt, ki mujhse naach karvane ke liye tumne mujhse for sake challenge ki! Hmm? 😉

--CHORUS--

Tere chehre se lagta hai jaise

Ek naya he chaman ho gaya hai

Rotating around the spot the guys moved in for a close as the girls spread out clapping their hands above their heads!

Neha blushing looked down…. Ajay lifted her chin up to make her look at him as he smiling continued….. ☺️

Ajay: Aaj ke raat ke baad hum sirf pyaar karne waale nahi rahenge... So as a lover you command anything more, it will be fulfilled!

Emotional Neha shook her head and looked at him happy that they had understood each other so well, before marriage….. She knew… She felt… Their life was going to be a fairy land with full of wonders and happiness!

Ajay and Neha close to each other had eyes only for each other as they slowly rotated on their spot…. 😍

--FEMALE--

Heee sajanaaa

Call it instinct or something…. But feeling an urge Neha put the pallu on her head and bent down at Ajay's feet… Surprised Ajay looked at her and immediately pulled her up…. He questioned her as to why she had done this… But smiling she just shook her head…. Nodding Ajay understood and pulled her closer kissing on her forehead and wrapping his hands around her! 🤗

--CHORUS--

Oooo….

The couple came out of their dream land as the others clapped close to their hands startling them…. Laughing the couple started dancing with the others!

--FEMALE--

Ho pardesi hamar

Ho pardesi hamar

Aayo babu ji banke

Pardesi hamar

Close to twelve O' Clock….

Dipika came out of th e circle breathless and went over to the refreshments stand to get some water…. Drinking she stood watching around and saw Sandhya few feet away just clapping her hands…. Remembering, she thought back surprised that Sandhya had not danced from the time they had come inside the house…. And that too for such a peppy song! 🤔

--FEMALE--

Arre baar baar baar

Karoon solah singhaar

Vo hai baji mera,

Mein hoon ganga ki dhar

She kept the glass and weaving through the crowd went over the other side of the hall…. As she walked towards Sandhya she tried reading her expression…. Oops…. It was not at all right…. She seemed to be glaring at someone…. She followed her gaze and saw it…. Stunned she stood her place in the middle of the hall….. 😲

--MALE--

Hooooooooo….

There in between the garba circle Vishal was dancing….. Not alone…. Very interestingly dancing with another girl…. Dipika remembered Ajay introducing her as one of his friends, when they had all come in… So…. That was the reason to Sandhya's glare?!!?!? 😔

--FEMALE--

Rangeelo maaro

Dipika: (Walking to Sandhya) Er…. Sandhya…. Tum nahi naachi?

--CHORUS--

Oh ho….

Sandhya still watching Vishal said….

Sandhya: Nai… Tired lag raha tha, to nahi naachi!

Dipika: (Smiling) Sandhya! Tum aur tired?!? Mujhe tumhare stamina ke baare me pata hai.... Maine dekha bhi hai aur tumse kaha bhi hai..... Phir ye tired ka bahana kis liye bana rahi ho?

--FEMALE--

Rangeelo maaro dholna

Dholna vee… Hey….

After a pause Sandhya looked at Dipika and said....

Sandhya: Maine kaha main tired hoon Dipika… Lekin tan se nahi…. Man se! (Turning around indicating Vishal) Dekho dekho…. Kis tarah us ladki ke saath, aur vo bhi utne close! And he is enjoying it! 😡

Dipika looked at Vishal and the girl and smiled…. Well they did seem close in the dance… But they were dancing and during dances it cannot be said who would be close to whom…. What Sandhya failed to notice was that it was the girl who was trying to get closer to Vishal and he was not much interested in her!

--FEMALE--

Ar ra ra ra ra aayo re maaro dholna.... Ah haa....

Well with love always comes poosessiveness and jealousy… And here the jealousy was blinding Sandhya's vision….

Sandhya: (Was saying) Mere saath naachne ko kaha to bahut nakhre kar rahe the…. (Imitating Vishal) Dance nahi aati…. I am not comfortable! Lekin ab!??! Just… (Stunned seeing Vishal rotate the girl around) Just look at him… He looks like all the comfort in the world….. 😈

Dipika: (Trying to suppress her smile) Sandhya! Aisa nahi hai…. Crowd hai… Sab dance kar rahe hain…. Ab koun kiske saath naach raha hai ye important nahi hai naa!

Sandhya: (Glancing at her) That depends! Agar sabbb ke saath agar naach rahe ho, to theek… Lekin he seems to have picked on that girl! Aapke ke saath thodi der naache the bas…. Just for sake….. Ek baat to hai Dipika aapke dost mujhe kuch zyada hi nach dikha rahe hain! Ab tak bahut choot deti aayi hoon… (Turning to look at Vishal) Lekin ab nahi…. Kadi kuch mazboot banana hai! 😡

Saying Sandhya stomped off into the crowd….

--CHORUS--

Oooooo….

Seeing her go Dipika shook her head in disbelief keeping a hand on her cheek! Not because she was surprised by Sandhya's attitude…. But because she had mentioned she had left Vishal on lose ropes…. Poor guy… She knew how much he had suffered with her around…. Off which she (Dipika) had also been a part…. And Sandhya was talking about tightening her catch more!?!?? She looked at Vishal and smiled to herself…. He definitely is going to suffer if he doesn't agree soon…. He must realise Sandhya was not a loser! ⭐️

--FEMALE--

Aayo re aayo re aayo re maaro dholna

Vishal was dancing with the girl…. He didn't have any choice… Wherever he turned the girl was in front of him… The more he avoided her she seemed to find him…. Also Dipika had moved off and he couldn't find any reason to avoid the girl…. So he as well accepted the fact and not wanting to spoil his mood of the night, danced around with her…. Even though he tried to keep his distance….

They were dancing a sequence where he had rotated the girl…. He rotated himself and then extended his hand for the girl…. Just as the girl was about to place her hand on his……

SMACK! 😵

--CHORUS--

Ooooo.….

Girl: (Wringing her hand) Ouch!

Vishal: (Concerned) Oh My God! Kya hua!? (Taking the girl's reddened hand) Kisne…. 😔

Vishal's voice faltered as he saw Sandhya come from behind the girl…. Seeing the look on her face he understood she had done that and that too on purpose…. He tried telling something and in the process had lifted his hand, which was still holding the girl's hand…. And Sandhya's eyes widened more in anger…. 😡

As if in shock Vishal let go off the girl's hand as she winced and said….

--FEMALE--

Ar ra ra ra ra aayo re maaro dholna....

Aayo re aayo re aayo re maaro dholna

Girl: Daaarrrrling! Kya kiya? Bahut dard ho raha hai! ❤️

She stopped saying further as Sandhya turned her around sharply and hissed, looking at Vishal who tried shaking his head and also not shake his head in all the confusion….

Sandhya: Darling?!?!? Who?!?! 😡

Girl: (Looking at Sandhya indifferently) Excuse me! Aap koun?

--MALE--

Hooooooooo

Sandhya facing her walked towards the girl who walked backwards in surprise…. The girl dashed against Vishal who instinctively caught her arms…. Immediately there was another SMACK!!!!! 😲 This time on Vishal's hands, who let go off the girl, getting angry himself…. Before he could say anything Sandhya pulled the girl towards her!

Sandhya: Main koun issse tumhara kuch lena dena nahi hai! Lekin (Indicating a Showing a finger behind the girl at a stunned Vishal) Vo koun hai? Pata hai? Uski eligibilty kya hai pata hai?

Girl: Ji?!!? (Glancing at Sandhya and behind at Vishal) Vo main…

Sandhya: Agar nahi pata…. To jaan le... (Sternly😳) That guy is booked... Engaged in fact! So can you just keep off?

The girl looked at her and Vsihal in turns…. Then with a twist of her mouth turned around and walked off!

--FEMALE--

Rangeelo maaro dholna

Dholna vee… Hai….

Vishal who had been hearing all this stomped over to Sandhya and asked…

Vishal: Ooie! Nakchadi bandariya! Koun engaged hai? Had karti ho! Jhooth…😡

Sandhya who was watching the girlgo now turned back again sharply and advanced on a startled Vsihal, who backed off seeing the strong look on her face…. 🤪

--MALE--

Hooooooooo

Hooooooooo

Hooooooooo

As Sandhya turned and advanced on Vishal, he could do nothing but just stare at her bewildered, his voice failing him…

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Vishal: Tu… Tum ye sab!?!? 😒

Sandhya: (Going closer to him) Kya kar rahe the?

Vishal: (Trying to be as innocent as possible) Kya? Kya kar raha tha main?

Sandhya walking towards him, made him walk back… Vishal looked back to see he wasn't going to dash or stumble against someone…. He looked around to call someone for help but everyone seemed to be too busy in dancing or chatting… And in the middle of the crowd no one noticed them….

Sandhya: (Sternly😳) Don't act innocent Mr. Malhotra! Us ladki ke saath kya kar rahe the?

Vishal: (As if still not understanding) Kis ladki ke saath? (As Sandhya glared at him even more, he acted as if understanding at last) OH! Vo ladki!?!? (Stammering) Main… Main kya kar raha tha? Vo to (Indicating few feet away) waahaaaan naach rahi thi… (Indicating the place he stood) Main yahan naach raha tha… Ma…

Sandhya: (Unbelievingly) Vo wahaaan naach rahi thi? Tum yahaaaan naach rahe the? Mere maa baap ne mere bachpan me hi mere kaan chuba diya hai! Tu aur kya chuba raha hai?

Vishal stared stunned at her seeing that his respect was coming down as minutes passed by!

Vishal: TU?!!?!? Ello madam! Give respect and take respect….. Are aap bolna tha…. Chalo theek hai, nahi bola to atleast 'tum'!?!?! Lekin…

Sandhya: (Still walking towards him making him walk backwards) Tujhe main kyun respect doon? Give me one solid reason for me to give respect to you!? Meri baat maante hai? Mere pyaar ko maanta hai? Hmpf! Sab ladkiyon ke saath naachta firta hai... Aur kya kya nahi karta? Mere saamne itnaaaaa…. Mere peet peeche kya kya nahi karta hoga tu!

Vishal: (Sarcastically😕) Jaise tumhe nahi pata…. Mere har kadam hi khabar jo tumhe reheti hai!

Sandhya: Er... Um... Baat mat badlo…. Answer my question…. What were doing with that girl?

Vishal: (Throwing up his hands in frustration, talking fast) Maine kaha naa…. Vo naach rahi thi, main naach raha tha… To shayad naachte waqt kareeb…. (Vishal faltered his voice when he saw Sandhya's expression change aggressive)

Sandhya: Kareeb hunh?!?!? 😡

Vishal: (Stammering again) Nai… Bas dance ke liye…. In fact main uske saath nahi naachna chahatha tha…. Wahi mere peeche…

Sandhya: (Sarcastically😈) Achcha?!!? Wahi paas aa rahi thi? To tu door jaa sakta tha naa? Lekin nahi… You enjoyed all the attention isn't it? Agar ladkiyon se itna hi attention achcha lagta hai, to mujhe kyun ignore karta reheta hai?

Vishal: (Incredulously) Hello! Maine aisa kab kaha ki mujhe ladkiyon se attention achcha lagta hai? Main to bas…

Vishal was left open mouthed staring at Sandhya startled, because she had caught his collar…. Taking her face closer to him, she said slowly and sternly making clear her every point…

Sandhya: Ek baat khan kholke, apne dimaag me daalna Mr. Vishal Malhotra…. Ladkiyaan tumhare peeche bhaagti hain, kyunki tum is layak ho…. Kyunki tum Sandhya ki pasand ho, aur Sandhya ki pasand sabko jealous karta hi hai… Lekin… (Tightening her grip on his collar) Agar tum kisi ke peeche gaye…. Ya uske baare me soche bhi, to yaad rakhna… Tumhare halat ko kya se kya bana deti hoon! Ab ke liye... (Leaving his collar and straightening his kurta) Ye kaafi hai!

Then smiling suddenly she leant forward and gave a peck on his cheek…. Patting lightly on his cheeks she turned around to leave…. 😉

Suddenly surprised she turned around and saw that Vishal had caught her hand…. She looked up at him as he pulled her closer to him… He looked at her for a long time…. And she looked back at him looking at her…. First time ever he himself had approached her, and she wanted this moment to long last…

Just then the lights went off startling Sandhya blinding her for a moment…. But Vishal's grip tightened on her wrist as he went closer to ear…. She smiled to herself enjoying his breath against her ear wondering what was coming next….☺️

It was exactly twelve O'clock as someone's cell alarm went off…

Slowly he whispered….

Vishal: Happy Birthday! 😛

Instantly it seemed like different musical ornaments started to play the happy birthday tune…. And just a few seconds later a female voice also started singing "Happy Birthday" 😊

Sandhya's eyes flew open to see a serene Vishal smiling back at her…. Only then she noticed that she was bathed in a spot light shining on her….. Just as she looked around surprised, she noticed another spotlight come on near the door… And through it entered Aadhya carrying a cake lit with a candle…. Behind her few people came in playing different ornaments like guitar, mouth organ, even a small drum! 😳

Surprised she looked up at Vishal guiding her smoothly to the hall center exactly when Aadhya too brought the cake, the spotlight moving with them… Aadhya gave a peck on Sandhya's cheeks and holding out the cake wished her sister….

Aadhya: Happy Birthday Di! 🤗

Sandhya could do nothing but just smile back still not able to believe the surprise in front of her…. Her birthday!!!!! And she had forgotten it!!!!! It was unbelievable…. But true…. For the past few days shuttling between hospital and Neha's Sangeet preparation she had lost track of the days and dates…. She remembered Neha's marriage date, but only that occasion had registered in her mind and she had failed to remember that the day always marked something special for her year after year….

Vishal: (Taking the plastic knife from the cake tray extended it to her) Come on cut it!

Sandhya looked up at him realizing only then that it was Vishal… He?!?! He had planned this surprise for her!?!!? Really!?!? He did!!?!? Her happiness was knowing no bounds! ⭐️

Aadhya: Di kaatiye naa!

Sandhya looked back at her sister and gave her a nod… Taking the knife from Vishal she blew out the candle and cut the cut… Just as she put the knife on the cake, there was a burst and startled she looked up to see small color balls and sparkling papers fall down from the top… She looked about and saw that some person had burst the color paper cracker….

Just then even the lights came on showing surprised faces all around… When the power had gone out everyone had stopped dancing and talking, waiting for the power to come back….

No one around had known about this preparation and so everyone was stunned for a moment… But then realization striking them, they all clapped singing Happy Birthday as Sandhya continued to cut the cake…

They all crowded around her to wish her singing and clapping….

Mr and Mrs. Agarwal first among them… They hugged their daughter wishing her, blessing her and the others followed…

Mrs. Agarwal feeding a piece of cake to Aadhya hugged her and said…

Mrs.Agarwal: Bahut achcha preparation tha Aadhya…. Humne to sirf cake laane ko kaha tha (Looking about at the guys who were still playing music)… Tumne to kamaal hi kar di…

Sandhya who had bent down to take blessings from Mrs.Malhotra straightened her smile disappearing…. Her world came crashing down around her having heard what her mother had said to Aadhya…. Disappointed she slowly turned towards Vishal talking to Dipika… So after all he hadn't done anything for her! 😕

Aadhya: (Was saying) Mom! Maine bhi sirf cake ki request ki thi… Baaki sab Vishal ji ne arrange kiya hai…. Mujhe bhi nahi pata…. Unhone bas kaha tha ki barah jab baje bahar koi cake ke saath wait kar raha hoga and I can bring it in at exactly at 12 'O clock…. All these were a surprise for me too!

Sandhya who was looking at Vishal upset turned to Aadhya her world blooming again!

Sandhya: Aadhya! Such me Vishal ne ye sab arrangements ki hai! 😛

Aadhya: Of course Di! Isme main kyun jhooth boloongi…. Aaj subah gayi thi unse cake ki arrangement karne…. Vo bhi kal… Matlab aaj shaadi ke baad… Lekin unhone hi idea diya ki celebrations raat tak chalegi to barah baje hi cake mil jayega…. Baaki sab ke baare me unhone mujhse kaha bhi nahi… He did it on his own!

Slowly Sandhya turned towards Vishal who had walked outside the house…. He was talking to some people near the door paying them… She walked towards him…. Just as Vishal finished paying he turned around just short of bumping into Sandhya…

Vishal: Oh! Sorry!

Sandhya: Thank you!

Vishal: Kyun?

Sandhya: (Glancing back) For everything!

Vishal: (Casually) Oh ye sab?!?! Ye sab to Aadhya chahathi thi… Bas usne…

Sandhya: (Interrupting) Aadhya mere birthday ko celebrate karna chahathi thi…. Lekin ye surprise tumne plan kiya tha…. Mujhe pata hai!

Vishal: (Uncomfortable that Sandhya might think it otherwise which he didn't want her to) Nai… Bas she wanted to plan a surprise and I just helped….

Sandhya: (Understanding) Ye kaafi hai mere yakeen ko mazboot karne ke liye ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho…. (Moving closer to him making him stumble sideways out of the view of the hall, by the wall of the house) Pehle thoda shaq tha, lekin ab nahi…. (Determined) And so I promise… Ki main jaldi ye bhi pata laga loongi, ki tum mujhse door bhaag kyun rahe ho…. (Moving more closer to him backing him against the wall) Mujhe apne jaan se zyada pyaar karte ho, lekin maan nahi rahe… You have raised an iron wall in between us… (Putting her hands on his shoulders) But…. Iron melts in high degree fire…. And this iron wall will also melt in the high degree of my love!

Saying she caught tightened her grip around his neck and kissed him! 😲 😳 ⭐️

Much to the surprise of Vishal stunning him and startling… Before he could react she parted from him smiling….

Sandhya: (Flicking his hair lovingly) Thank you for my first birthday gift of this year… Ye poora saal mere liye bahut hi achcha jayega! (Hearing the music come on again) Oh! Mere birthday year ka pehla dance… Chalo chalo! 😃

Saying Sandhya went inside…. Still trying to get out of the incident that had just occurred Vishal straightened…. He knew it was her birthday today… He had so much wanted to do so much for her… But against his will had refrained from doing so…. Giving her all the surprises of the world…. But when Aadhya had requested him to celebrate her birthday after the marriage, he had seen an opportunity to surprise her without him been the direct reason… But…. 😕

No… What had happened, shouldn't have happened!

Why was he losing in front of her?!?!?! The more he tried to grip sand in his tight hands, it kept slipping away… As she said her love was melting the barrier he had set…. He had to do it soon! 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was awesome and awesome.
sorry for late commenting, study is keeping me busy.
the parts was just excellent and i have no word to describe my feelings.
sandhya happy birthday.🥳
hope very soon we can find out that why vishal is running way from sandhya.
aryan and dipika are moving forward, that is great.👍🏼
👏
Edited by sam78 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
👏Gr8! faboulous! fantastic! better still fantaboulous... it fits the bill 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99

It was totally awsome , wonderful......brilliant.....many more......di.
First sangeet then Garba along with performences.
And Sandhya's BirthdaY!!!!
Well....well....well. I liked that twist.
🤗

Very busy with exams. So let me finish it, then i'll definately come with full energy and Dhamakaa

Take care.

Edited by nirmola - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
dono ek dosre ko samajhna shuru ho he gaye hain😃
they are mature enough uar ab in ke bech main koi problem nahi ho sakti
is kehte hain soulmates ***blush😳 😳

and whts with sandhya😳itni free hai....vishal ki to sitee gum kar di
phele ghusa ker ke aur phir.............😆
😳 but sahi mian itna chilai mujhe laga koi badi fight ho jaye gi
acha hai vishal ussay darta hai
her admi ko apni would be se dar ke rahna chahai😆
becoz In revenge and in love woman is more barbarous than man😈
ye baat sandhya pe bilkul fit baithti hai😉


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