Untold Tales Of RAMAYAN ! UPADATED-Page 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: SenAnu

MOHINI! 🤗🤗🤗

I am so sorry I could not come online as I had my exams, sorry !! 😛
Ohkk... Honestly was waiting for your review 😛
But your OS really cheered me up after this stress !! Wonderfully written ❤️

M so glad to know that dear... I know that stress 🥱
Well thanks for reading and feeling it!

I discovered a whole new Bharat once again and I loved how you depicted the relation of the hour brothers ! 🤗

Well happy that you liked my portrayal 😳 I go crazy in love when start with their bromance 😆
"YES YES SHATRUGHAN" 😆😆
😆 😃 hehe... It was just one for our chote (how the youngsters take the credit) and you got it 😛 😉😃😆
This OS was so full of humour, love and emotions that it really transported me dear 🤗
You have magic in you ! ❤️❤️❤️
Thanks a lot for appreciating my madness Jaan... It means a lot really 😳

Keep the awesome work coming ! 😃👏
Thanks again dear!! Hopefully i ll be back with some more stuff!

Edited by ..Dharma_dasi.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
If this is madness then may everyone be mad like this (no offence) 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: SenAnu

If this is madness then may everyone be mad like this (no offence) 😆😆


😆 That's the madness of being drown in Lord's emotions... And almost all are the same mad here 😉 (no offence again)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Love this innovative line of thinking, digging out the hidden stories behind those silent walls of the royal Palaces, in those buzzing minds' beautiful expressions! An excellent display of bonding between the brothers and sisters !
Exploring the inner feelings of these epic characters with an in-depth study, ultimately it turned out as a pronouncement on love and bonding Mohini !😊Liked it .
Thoroughly enjoyed the kitchen scene , a glimpse of royal grandeur with a tender touch of sharing and caring !
With a smile witnessed the sword fight between Laxman and Shatru !
Liked very much the talented Bharath's Painting hobby restored by his brothers in a lovely way ! A swift shift from one scene to another with a different tinge that shows your highly imaginative nature !
With words you simply painted a canvas in front of our eyes , that capability I liked the most . 😊

Edited by Viswasruti - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Love this innovative line of thinking, digging out the hidden stories behind those silent walls of the royal Palaces, in those buzzing minds' beautiful expressions! An excellent display of bonding between the brothers and sisters !

Exploring the inner feelings of these epic characters with an in-depth study, ultimately it turned out as a pronouncement on love and bonding Mohini !😊Liked it .
Thoroughly enjoyed the kitchen scene , a glimpse of royal grandeur with a tender touch of sharing and caring !
With a smile witnessed the sword fight between Laxman and Shatru !
Liked very much the talented Bharath's Painting hobby restored by his brothers in a lovely way ! A swift shift from one scene to another with a different tinge that shows your highly imaginative nature !
With words you simply painted a canvas in front of our eyes , that capability I liked the most . 😊


Thank you so so much Di 🤗
This is one of the best Reviews I have ever got😳
Am so very happy that you felt and liked the emotions I wanted to showcase...
Well there isn't any study, it's just what I feel and understand regarding these respective characters!

But from your reply I can surely make out your depth of knowledge n m glad to get suxh response from a person like you 😛 😃

The bonding of these brothers and sisters has always been the most fascinating thing for me, and thus the fun element comes with God's grace 😆
Loved to know that you recognized the bonding of twins through the sword fight!!!

Thanks for reading!

Loads of love
Mohini
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
WAVE OF HAPPINESS!
Here is a sneak peak to the happiest moment of everyone's life. See what the brothers and Sisters are upto.


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Twinkiling stars smiled through the clouds as they saw their saviour crossing through the corridors of the Palace of Ayodhya. Wind swung and touched His feet, He smiled and looked around, after His marriage to Sita, He felt to be more close to nature. He understood when they communicated and when they healed.

The very moment He arrived at His chamber His Bhoomija was leaving with her little sister Urmila. Ram frowned a bit and entered the room; unlike any other day he was not received by His smiling wife at the end of the day instead His Powerhouse Brother was sitting to welcome Him with all his 32 teeth peeping out of mouth.

"What's the news?"

"What news Bhaiya?"

"Don't hide anything my dear, your face has already shouted that you are jumping with joy! Tell me what's it? Why were you three called by the mothers?"

Lakshman scratched his forehead. He came forward and touched His feet. Raghunandan was pleased but confused. He brought Him up and held him firmly.

"LAKSHMAN?!"

The younger one couldn't reply, he just hugged Him tightly.

"Bhaiya, you are not going to become just a father..."

Ram broke the hug... "What is the matter Lakshman" sensing some tension in His tone, Lakhan replied in a higher jollier voice

"You are also going to become Jyesht Pitashree!!!"

Ram smiled heartily with all tears filling His eyes and He embraced His Lakhan laal with triple energy.

"LAKHMAN! LAKSHMAN! I just can't describe how happy am I!!!"

Ram cupped his face and adoring His small brother said, "My little child is going to be a father."

Lakshman held His hand on his face, with glittering eyes he nodded and said, "With you blessing, all your three children are going to be fathers!"

Raghuveer was overjoyed; He didn't know whether He could ever be happier than this. The duo just exchanged a wet look. They jumped in happiness and cried, just didn't know how to express.

"Where are these two?" asked Ram.

"Always behind you Bhaiya!" Bharat and Shatrughn stood at the entrance of room. Ram didn't allow them to fall on his feet. They were welcomed in Lord's arms!

After a while when their excitement came down they sat in a square and chatted for the rest of the night.

RAM: "Ohh so its 6 for me..."

BHARAT: "Yeah, 7 for me.."

LAKSHMAN & SHATRUGHN: "and 8 for us!"

Four of them laughed and admired their going to be promotion.

"Bhaiya, when maa called us they also mentioned that now they wish to go for a pilgrimage to Somnath. So we were thinking what if we all go as the girls too wished for a day out."

"That sounds good Lakshman! You all may do the preparations."

"What do you mean by you all, BHAIYA you are also coming with us." Bharat intervened.

"No dear, that is not actually possible. The king has no holidays."

"and who said so, " Lakshman made baby face, "where is my Bhaiya? We desire to go with him."

Raghunandan smiled, "Sweetu, your Bhaiya is here only but he can't leave ayodhya and the king alone."

The firmness in His voice cleared that no more discussion. But then the other was also ready with his answer.

"Fine, I am also not going anywhere."

"But think of Urmila Laksh, I strictly won't let you to leave her company just to be with me."

"But Bhaiya she is happy with her sisters only. Oh Gosh they gossip too much...".

All brothers laughed on his dialogue and the moment was caught by the ladies as they all entered with a "OH REALLY" sound.

Sita: "Is that so..."

Ram: "No my love only these silly boys think so". He again mesmerised her with his serene eyes! The gang behind them admired but soon shouted in chorus, "WE HAVEN'T LEFT YET!" to break their never-ending eye locks.

Sita: "Ahemm.. ya ok so if you guys are not going, My Lord we demand for a longer holiday."

Ram: (smiling) As you wish my ladies! But Sitey... am gonna miss my sisters.

Looking towards the young ladies He stated that how less time has He spent with them. Urmila felt the sigh Lord had in His voice. She went to them and said softly, "Bhaiya if you wish I can stay."

Lakshman sparkled but soon Shatrughn patted on his shoulder indicating Control' and further shared a laugh. Ram was super proud on His sis, she always understood His deepest emotion, no doubt she was Lakshman's better half. But to this decision Maandvi seemed to disapprove. She discussed something with Sita and stated,

"Aah... didi what were we thinking, Yeah to give a visit to Pitashree too."

Urmila twinkled on this, she turned with a big "WHAT!".

Shatru: "Bhaiya you are back to pavilion."

Lakshman: "Huh. But her smile made me happy." He stepped forward, "Alright Maandvi Bhabhi, you sisters enjoy your time but be back soon, afterall we have to pamper all of you." He winked and the brothers nodded by putting their hands on each other's shoulders sideways.

Ram: "Yes you guys get ready to leave, once you are back we will have lots of fun!!"

Happiness knew no boundaries that day in the palace. All the mata ordered to prepare some special food for their Daughter-in-laws.

At the Dinner table, the girls were wet in glee on watching the care their hubbies and mothers did for them.

Next day Morning Sumanta ji made all the preparations to drop all the ladies.

Again a moment was there to say goodbye, but there was only joy, bliss and cheerfulness in every eye.




PRECAP:

On the way to somnath,

Shrutkirti: May I ask something a bit personal to you?

Sumitra: Sure dear.

Shrutkirti: Mata we spend time together, love each others company as we have shared it since childhood. We were sisters and now sister-in-laws, But---

Kaushalya: Don't hesitate sweety, you may ask your mother anything.

Shrutkirti: How did you three manage the relation you had, that too so beautifully???





[Something for our elder queens is coming up. Stay tuned.]

Hope you liked this part!

Reviews in Demand 😉

Edited by ..Dharma_dasi.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Mohini! This was so super cute :)
The bonding the bothers have, the entire thing, it was utterly adorable and so sweet.
I also loved the sisters and Ram bonding, I was awwing over the entire thing!
Keep going, this is so cute and sweet!
Love,
Shreya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Mohini , yet to read , eager to go through as early as possible . 😊
Will be back soon .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Lovely update! The brothers and sisters' love was depicted so well! <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Aww...that was so cute
The Ram- Mila bond and brothers were the highlight. I really loved it. Waiting for the next part. ❤️

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