Siya ke Ram OS : Eternal bonding/relationships

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wow Sumi!!! It was a lovely story!!!👏

Each and every scene was so beautiful and well written.

Sita-Luv-Kush and Urmila-Angad-Chandraketu

You are an awesome writer.

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Ankita.11

@Ankita.11

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

This OS was very nice... it had this feel good factor!!!

Loved it ❤️❤️

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 14

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

The way you paralleled Sita's love for Lau-Kush to Urmila's love for Angad-Charndraketu was amazing! Also, the way Ram comforts Lakshman, and Lakshman finds solace in Urmila is very, very sweet!

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sugunmanas

@lifeiscrazy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Sumi Awesome os
loved it😃
siya lakshman scene and ram and lakdhman scene
well written i want to see the scenes on screen😃

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radianteyes.

@radianteyes.

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

this is another lovely piece of work sumi
you have covered the essence of the relations

simply loved it

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Pooja

@moviefan-pooja

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

sorry for not being able to comment earlier, but this is AWESOME!! u have shown all the realtions to us us in such a way that it bought tears to my eyes, thank u soo much for this wonderful OS, dear🤗🤗, this was really good👏👏 and please keep sending pm's when u write so that i dont miss anything

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

Sparkler

+ 11

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Aww sumi dear! 🤗 My happiness at the moment is far beyond explanation! How beautifully have you brought out everything in this os! I just so so love it! ❤️ Keep writing more!

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mandy001

@mandy001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Wohooo,,,,to hmari kiddo itna achha likhti h.

I came in ds forum after vry long time nd i think i missed lot of gud stuff here.

Ds was an epic. A Masterpiece. 👍🏼

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..
Awww, this is so sweet, Sumi!

You have covered so many relationships in this story: Ram-Lakshman, Sita-Lakshman, Sita-Luv Kush, Lakshman-Urmi-Angad-Chandraketu and Lakshman-Urmila.

Such sweet moments you have written!

Why can't writers of mytho shows write such scenes as these, that are happy and full of fluff, instead of focusing on angst and pain all the time?

Such scenes would be so incredibly sweet to see, love it!

Thanks a lot Janu di !!!😃

And Yes ,we will love to see it onscreen di !!!! 😳😳

Thanks ...!! 😳

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ms.dhingra
Wohooo,,,,to hmari kiddo itna achha likhti h.
I came in ds forum after vry long time nd i think i missed lot of gud stuff here.

Ds was an epic. A Masterpiece. 👍🏼

THANKS SWATI DEAR !!!!!!😃🤗

Masterpiece - thanks for saying this , I am very happy seeing that u love it !!!!!😳

This means a lot !!!😳