Drabble: Ghar Aaj More Aaye Piharva - Page 3

Originally posted by: _Meena_

lovely work!

Originally posted by: Ankita.11

Oh!!This is so poetically beautiful!!

And the last line stole my heart.Keep it up 👍🏼

Originally posted by: muviefan

Beautiful, I have no words except that. It's amazing. I especially loved the last line👏

Originally posted by: priya_21

very nice

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Amazing Story.

Loved it so much.

Tfd pm.

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Lovely drabble Proteeti!! 👍🏼

Thanks for the pm!! 🤗

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

What a beautiful excerpt, Pro! The way you write about their love is just so magical and divine, can't wait to read more!

Originally posted by: Snehamadhuri

The birds are silent as if they watch the sun touch the trembling dewdrops. The milky clouds float past my horizon. The emerald leaves of the distant, russet woods are rimed with snow.---

Radhika , excellent Drabble ! Highly poetic , beautifully described the tender feelings of a newly wedded wife's longings for her loved one !

Nature at it's expressive best in all your poetic assertions , whether it is in devotional , or in romantic story , most of your highly imaginative thoughts expressed in figurative in all your writings .

Thanks a lot for this wonderful piece of writing .😊