LakshMila OS : Judai

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mila mujhe jaana hoga,

Kya aapka jaana aavashyak hai?

Tum toh jaanti ho na phir kyu puchh rahi ho,

14 varsh chota shaan nai hai...


Jaanta hoo isliye jaa raha hoon,

Aap apne bhaiya ke liye aapna vachan nibhaiye aur mai aapki oor apna vachan nibhati hoo. . . . Patni dharm ka jis prakar sita didi nibha rahi hai!

Nahi Mila yeh sambhav nai hai , van hai ve...kathin paristithi ka saamna karna hoga,

Aap ke saath rahugi toh agnipariksha bhi dedugi yadi avashyakta hui...

Aisa mai kabhi hone nai dunga...tumhari zindagi mei aake maine vaise hi andhkar bhar lia hai,

Aap aisa Kyu keh rahe...aapka astitva mere jivan mei hai..mujhe kuchh aur nai chahiye.

Mila tum aur bhaiya dono mere akh (eyes) ho..yaadi mujhe kisi ek ko chunna ho toh mai kaise karu...dono hi mere liye samanya roop se zaroori hai..

Mai jaanti hoo arya isliye swayam ko taiyaar kar rahi ho kabse, jaanti thi ke ek din avashya hi mujhe nirnay lena hoga,

Mujhe shaama kardena yadi kar sakogi toh,

Shaama toh tabhi karugi jab aap vapas aayenge shigra,

Pata nai kis prakar rah paoga tumhare bina...

Meri yaad aai toh chand ki oor dekhlena...mai dikhjaogi...

Jaakar aata hoon Mila... ❤️


Heyaa guys
I know I have to update my Ts but couldn't control myself from writing this.
I hope you guys liked it (fingers crossed)
do let me know how it is , don't forget to hit the like button and do comment :)
Love kriti 😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Its so luvly kirti
The plight of lakshmila can be xprssd so beautifully in jst few words...

Hume bhi intezaar h lakshmila k vapas aane ka...

Till den ye ss/os/ts/ff hi hm lakshmila fans ka sahara h...

Do keeo writin on lakshmila...
N ya thnx fr pm
Waitib to see anodr pm frm u soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrinda65

Its so luvly kirti

The plight of lakshmila can be xprssd so beautifully in jst few words...

Hume bhi intezaar h lakshmila k vapas aane ka...

Till den ye ss/os/ts/ff hi hm lakshmila fans ka sahara h...

Do keeo writin on lakshmila...
N ya thnx fr pm
Waitib to see anodr pm frm u soon...


thanks a lot vrinda😃
it really means a lot
after yesterdays epi I so very wanted to write a judai scene on them😳
hopefully you'll get a pm soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its Just so beautiful and serene to read
Keep It up Kriti😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivam...

Its Just so beautiful and serene to read

Keep It up Kriti😃

thank you soo much Shivam😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww...Kriti this is so beautiful. Thank you for writing this.
I cried watching their scene so much last night. for me LakshMila are the best.😭😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww , Lakshmila are going to miss each other terribly 😔 surviving only on memories ..
Nicely written kriti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So amazing👏
I will miss them😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya_16

awww...Kriti this is so beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

I cried watching their scene so much last night. for me LakshMila are the best.😭😳

thank youu Riya😳
even I cried, yukti is an amazing actor .. the way she expressed those feelings was👏, I'll miss them a lot😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maverick_me

Aww , Lakshmila are going to miss each other terribly 😔 surviving only on memories ..

Nicely written kriti

thankuu😳
I'm still wondering how did they stay away from each other for 14 years
its not an easy task...maybe their love for each other helped them overcome that situation.

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